(3/29/2013 3:17:00 PM)
I have been writing poetry for some time, but I have never had the opportunity to be read outside a small peer group and for constructive criticism on anything I have written. I hope to be publishing as many poems as I can on here. So please read my poems (and hopefully enjoy them!) . Moreover, I will appreciate any criticisms, revisions, or advice given to me! Thanks!
L.a.h. - Love_and_hate_ Lyle Ashwyn Holland
(3/28/2013 11:27:00 PM)
Hey fellow poets!
Nice to see some great poetry from yall, as usual.
I've just come back to drop new poems,
There will be more coming soon though, bet on it.
I've been gone for maybe 5-6 months since my last poems.
Definitely making some progress though.
Those who are familiar with my work, Hello again!
Please check out my 2 latest poems,
" Cursed With A Blessing"
" Hello & Goodbye" _
Both generic but personal, yet remains beautiful.
Just needed to vent a bit.
Would highly Appreciate it if you'd take the time to read,
And real-ate(relate) on this food for thought_
Those who are not familiar with my work, Hello to you too!
And check out the latest and every other.
I'm L.A.H. & I'm out! Peace!
(3/21/2013 1:22:00 PM)
My name is Neven and I am very happy to be here. I love reading poetry and I am thinking about writing my first poems here.
Greetings from Canada.
(3/18/2013 2:24:00 AM)
Hi, I am a just a neophyte in this world of poetry, But i hope i will get a lot out of this site and thousands of my poetic friends and their poems.
(3/17/2013 3:19:00 PM)
Hello, so weird, I made a topic but he disappears??
So I'm Jill, from The Netherlands and 24 years old.
I like to meet new poets from all over the world.
Jesus James Llorico
(3/13/2013 11:11:00 AM)
I just started making poems and I hope readers or poets from this site can view my poems and add comments as well. rest assured I'll do the same in your poems.cheers.
(3/12/2013 6:09:00 AM)
Would really appreciate it if anybody could check out my poems particularly the newest ones
(3/4/2013 12:52:00 PM)
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My name is Mary Forrester. Could the lady who posted a comment on my poem my heart with joy does sing please repost her comment as I removed it by accident and I want to see some of her poetry.
(2/27/2013 2:32:00 PM)
Love In The Air
I live on earth
I hear love is in the air
I look up to catch some breath
What I inhale is flare
If what I seek is in the air
How come it doesn't live here?
Maybe if I travel far
Far up high, soar
Mars, Saturn and Jupiter
I could catch some fresh air
And love in the air
I exhale air
Breathe out some fresh love
In return, I inhale fumes
Love they say is soothing
Gentle and calm
It's fresh air
Day by day
I wither away
Wearied by the travails
While I wander searching for love
In the air
I trample on it
(2/26/2013 3:49:00 PM)
Name's Aria. I am passionate about poetry and other forms of art. I am always looking for honest comments on my poetry. I'll be happy to return the favour.