Critiques and Revision
Post your poems here for objective, honest critiques and suggestions.
(8/11/2013 9:37:00 AM)
Very beautiful and rhythmic poem.good luck.
(7/26/2013 8:41:00 PM)
I really liked this, it made me smile right away :) It's very energetic, a breath of fresh air, well done!
(7/12/2013 8:08:00 PM)
I really liked this poem Thanks