Gajananji
Congratulations on your entry into the top 500 poets. We are all happy to note this. You are not only prolific with a wide range of poems but also you encourage other poets with your thoughtful comments. Thank you.
Hi Gajanan
Thanks for have commented two of my poems. As you might been able to see, my writings are similar to song lyrics. In fact in music they are thought. Maybe you've also noticed - I hope it is never noticed, by you or anyone- that sometimes I make some grammatical mistakes, but I believe this will be unhopefully noticed while my english isn't perfect. Or at least as my knowledge about english grammar isn't complete. Anyway you've been the first member on this site of whom I've recieved a comment. And these comments have encouraged me to write going over fear and according to that I'd like to say that I'm grateful. Thank you.
You can delete this comment if you like I don't mean to offend. I took your suggestion and I have just read your most recent 5 poems. Perhaps you are way over my head or something but I don't get it! There is such a difference in what you are trying to say. Like I said maybe it's just me, probably is. I have a few poems with 10 or 20 words I guess but I didn't post them because I didn't think them to be worthwhile. Perhaps I should rethink that decission!
BTW - some of my poms aren't poems if that make sense, some are raps aswell beacuse i like writing lyrics
BTW(again) - My lyrics always have to rhyme.
Thanx for reading my poem
No body is there in the station, no train is there at present. Welcome the air to pass. My son, be cautious lest the air watch you and take you out from the station.
Gajananji
Congratulations on your entry into the top 500 poets. We are all happy to note this. You are not only prolific with a wide range of poems but also you encourage other poets with your thoughtful comments. Thank you.
Hi Gajanan
Thanks for have commented two of my poems. As you might been able to see, my writings are similar to song lyrics. In fact in music they are thought. Maybe you've also noticed - I hope it is never noticed, by you or anyone- that sometimes I make some grammatical mistakes, but I believe this will be unhopefully noticed while my english isn't perfect. Or at least as my knowledge about english grammar isn't complete. Anyway you've been the first member on this site of whom I've recieved a comment. And these comments have encouraged me to write going over fear and according to that I'd like to say that I'm grateful. Thank you.
You can delete this comment if you like I don't mean to offend. I took your suggestion and I have just read your most recent 5 poems. Perhaps you are way over my head or something but I don't get it! There is such a difference in what you are trying to say. Like I said maybe it's just me, probably is. I have a few poems with 10 or 20 words I guess but I didn't post them because I didn't think them to be worthwhile. Perhaps I should rethink that decission!
Injustice is intolerable indeed my friend. Thank you for your kind comments.
BTW - some of my poms aren't poems if that make sense, some are raps aswell beacuse i like writing lyrics
BTW(again) - My lyrics always have to rhyme.
Thanx for reading my poem
WOW! you have so many poems! !
I like your writes and many are true.
Keep It Up
Simple and beautiful
Honorable poet. I love your style short yet deep. Good work you have here sir
sir.. according to me your poems are totally inspirational, meaningful and with a true message.......shraddha.
You have wrote short but nice poems with good sense.Nathmal Sharma.