GJG Elton

Rookie - 108 Points (Philadelphia, PA)

Biography of GJG Elton

There is not much to say. I never wrote a poem in my life until it was suggested by my ex wife that we write a poem to each other. Once I started, I could not stop. All the poems, for now, are about her, my loss of her and my wish for a new beginning and future.

I know many of the poems need work, some a LOT of work, so if you see something you like, or not, please let me know. If you have suggestions for improvement, I am all ears. I learn from doing and listening to others.

To that, I would really appreciate your voting on poems that you like, or not. I really appreciate the feedback, good or bad.

Thank you for looking.

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Love Lost

There's an ache in your heart that you feel every day,
your sorrow is such that the pain runs so deep,
as the love in your life fades further away,
while alone in the dark, you're unable to sleep.

We know that you're pained and life seems forlorn,
and part of you wants, to lay down and die,
and deep in your heart, you continue to mourn,
but your happiness is yours, and it won't be denied.

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