You're work is quite well done. You do seem to have a way of commanding words to work well for you. I've read a couple and it has an obscure charm, and if you know me, I enjoy the obscure things in life. Obscure is different, and different is interesting. I've had a hand at analyzing some of the work even, and I'm enjoying it.
Well, here is a great mind with nice and unique ideas those will shine like a light in the darkness of sleepy minds.
Your words, your poetry, and the poems those you write are so good and lovely.
i will enjoy reading your works and I'm sure other do. Keep up your nice and great works my friend. Keep up until your brilliant future.
My best Wishes and regards for you dear Gwenevere
What I Wouldn't Give
What I wouldn't give To dance by the light of the moon To revel in the soft glow of dawn And to watch sunset with you
What I wouldn't give To watch your pupils dilate with longing Your eyes narrow with love Your smile full of laughter