hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 38,421 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 38,421 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/25/2015 7:51:00 PM)

    Inward happiness

    Hasmukh ji, as usual your poetic appreciation takes me years back when you had a stanza or two for each poem on Your Space. You keep the fire burning. Thank you, dear friend

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  • Gold Star - 38,421 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/19/2015 7:11:00 PM)

    Same way to exist...

    Omotosho Craig Olanrewaju Mr Hasmukh Mehta... You have got the rhythm, I look up to being a great writer like you when I get to your age...
    You always have my RESPECT and admiration...
    I Love what you do...Sir
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  • Gold Star - 38,421 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/18/2015 6:24:00 AM)

    Life is exciting...

    Unni Krishnan Atiyodi Birth days come and go/ How fruitfully we use our time is important/In that you have every reason to be satisfied/You spend time fruitfully/Your poems may be thousands in number!
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  • Gold Star - 38,421 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/17/2015 7:54:00 PM)

    Life is exciting...

    Pamela Moorehead I to like to rhyme it sounds good phoenetically and takes on the rhythm of music. Poetry is also about vibration for me as a writer, meter registers for me in rhyme or I choose not to rhyme. I personally have no favorite style of poetry when it comes to enjoying others. Happy Birthday MV Venkatraman, fluent Poet and smooth to my ear
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  • Gold Star - 38,421 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/17/2015 6:59:00 AM)

    God shall not

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    Malik Zafar Yes of course heaven is in the feet of mothers. He who make her happy will be granted best place in heaven. Love mums eaen heaven and alse get blessings of Allah
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  • Gold Star - 38,421 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/16/2015 7:06:00 PM)

    In waste seldom

    This is a poem from a true soldier which is inspiring. Many thanks for this poetic gift to me.


    Rajat Das Gupta, Kolkata
    May 16,2015

  • Gold Star - 38,421 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/15/2015 6:05:00 PM)

    Mastermind

    You think very fast! Indeed,
    The soul is taken away to frighten mankind
    As main key lies with creator or mastermind
    This is true. Even a saint like person like Tagore apprehends though not mortal death but death in people's mind after he passes away. He has no answer.


    Rajat Das Gupta, Kolkata
    May 15,2015

  • Gold Star - 38,421 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/14/2015 11:28:00 AM)

    Peaceful unification: =

    14 May 2015
    TO: Hashmukh-ji
    Your poetic reply again enthuses me. However, Vaishnavite cult had deep influence on Tagore in contemplation of which mundane Death is not the human goal to achieve peace, which following quote from your poetic reply implies ~
    Peaceful unification
    With life’s cessation
    It is really an inexplicable 'passion' of mankind, without isolating an individual, which the Vaishnavites wanted to raise to a lofty spiritual height. However, having a superficial idea about this medieval cult, I'll look wiser less I try to explain it.
    Rajat Das Gupta


    Rajat Das Gupta, Kolkata
    May 14,2015

  • Gold Star - 38,421 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/13/2015 11:21:00 AM)

    so we talk

    13 May 2015
    TO: Hashmukh-Ji & Supratik
    With his gift of faculty for instant poetry, Hashmukh-Ji has re-surfaced the spirit of 'Sagarika' that Indians went abroad
    for trade with genuine goodwill sans any sinister greed, unlike the Europeans who have simply caused havoc world wide for centuries ~
    We had deep roots for cultural relation
    We imparted peace and stability

  • Gold Star - 38,421 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/12/2015 7:13:00 PM)

    TO: Mr. Hashmukh Mehta I can answer your splendid poem only in Tagore's language, mine being too crass ~ 55. Poem: To Bloom [Phool Fotano in Bengali by Rabindranathnath Tagore from his book ‘Kheya’ (Ferry)

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