Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 230,675 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/28/2016 10:46:00 AM)

    All festivals.....I’m overwhelmed by the assessment of Mehta-Ji giving a panoramic view of the Indian communities living in harmony irrespective of religious and numerous other differences which is reflected outside our national boundary also.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/28/2016 5:43:00 AM)

    Dear Poet your composition is from a poetic mind with great depth in life's vissitudes. I thank you profusely . Robert
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/27/2016 10:04:00 AM)

    Randhir Kaur One of the outstanding, top popular poet of poemhunter, active member on facebook as well as Google, retired Indian Army officer and an amazing fatherly figure..who have penned such a beautiful poetry for me is an achievement with any hardship.I am elevated to such a level that I can see the sight of the snowy clouds. Feeling really blessed and an honoured to receive such words from Mehta Sir. I guess thats why I am delighted in a way I have never been ere. Thank you so very much for your support dear Sir.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/27/2016 3:47:00 AM)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/21/2016 7:02:00 AM)

    Uche Daniel Oluwaseun You are poem is very well deep as well pinned Hasmukh Mehta
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/20/2016 5:44:00 AM)

    You are king....Fredrick Adeny Hasmukh Mehta thanks elder brother. We need to work on these pieces together
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    Hasmukh Mehta yes fedrick i go all out despite my age factor. i contribute as much as i can
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/3/2016 7:31:00 PM)

    why to cry in pain...

    Government gives promises and assurances
    Never breaches of promises and assurances
    It's because they are renewed in new words
    Pray for liberation from the promissory talks
    God willing their words will become deeds


    KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343
    Sep 3,2016

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/2/2016 7:29:00 PM)

    With melodious offer....Lilian Dipasupil Kunimasa A true poet always carry a quill
    Hidden or open deeds to spill
    Evil ones poet's voice try to kill
    Exposure of Truth by Time wheel

    Friends are there support to fulfill
    Their own passions never chill
    A poet is at risk, sitting on a sill
    Be destroyed by manipulative steel

    A poet in written poems show skill
    Messages hidden under tale's gill
    Foes can taste their own bitter pill
    When poet's quill doesn't keep still
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/2/2016 5:51:00 PM)

    Another side......

    We really need to ask probing questions to put misunderstandings between countries behind us. Pakistan's concern is that it is shrinking by the day and that India has grabbed Goa and Hyderabad post their independences. I am really confused as to how the misconception of the mentioned regions ever belonging to Pakistan occured. This only shows their desperateness. However, it is good that they are now talking openly in some TV channels seeing that India will not give in to their sponsored terrorism. On the contrary, Baluchistan might just slip away from them given the torture the country has meted to the Baluchis. They suspect that we would help Baluchistan to get their Independence as we did for Bangladesh. And as someone said, this could be truly the last independence of Pakistan. Decidedly, Pakistan is cornered and offence seems to be their only defence.

    If we considered all these variables and kept peace, growth, prosperity and transforming the land back as it were (heaven, as you have mentioned in your poem) to be the only priority, then we would really find a way to see that the concern of both the countries is addressed. Students' interests will also be safeguarded.


    Supratik Sen, Kolkata
    Sep 2,2016

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/20/2016 9:16:00 AM)

    Patriots and nationalists....Lilian Dipasupil Kunimasa Thank you brother... When the basic needs are not met ideals are easy to forget. What really saddens me is that poverty and crime are often not caused by shortage but by greed of some. Yet must we succumb to apathy? Though the poem was written for brothers and sisters in Kenya, I believe it is for many of us as well. Where hope and love are gone, we see that evil has won.
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