hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 34,129 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 34,129 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/25/2015 6:39:00 PM)

    Dear Mr. Amathalal

    My name is Michael Schwartz. I am professor of at St. Cloud State University in St. Cloud Minnesota, USA. I am currently writing a book on American culture and English language learning and would like permission to print your poem, Speak English.
    If you would like, I can send you a copy of the chapter in which your poem would be included.

    Thank you.

    Michael Schwartz, Ph.D.

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  • Gold Star - 34,129 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/13/2015 10:22:00 AM)

    Before I am......

    I wish to be free man

    Nice person and human



    Hasmukh Bhai, you are already that, milk of human kindness. There is no need to wish.



    KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343
    Apr 13,2015


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    Man is born free; but everywhere he is in chains, Rousseau says. It is a social construct. Let’s hope and act to be free at least in thought. Good poem.





    P Nasarudheen., Kasargod.Kerala
    Apr 13,2015


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    Wonderful poetic efforts to visualize the hidden human desire prevailing within. The world has turned robotic today and we are always missing ourselves. Thanks a lot for your exact human portrayal.



    Rabindra Kumar Bharti, Bokaro Steel City
    Apr 13,2015


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    Just be yourself, Mehtaji and we all love you for that! Thanks for sharing these lovely thoughts in your inimitable poetic style!



    Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad
    Apr 13,2015

  • Gold Star - 34,129 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/12/2015 6:04:00 PM)

    ...........This is an unexpected but most wonderful surprise for us! Thank you, Editors and congratulations to Shigufta, Maria, Purabi and Hasmukhbhai.



    We owe a huge chunk of gratitude to all our readers, but specially so to a few who have been a constant source of encouragement to Avril and me. So our thanks go to all of you and we pray you will continue to support us always. Shernaz-Avril



    Shernaz Wadia, Pune
    Apr 10,2015

  • Gold Star - 34,129 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/11/2015 5:13:00 PM)

    ....................Your talent is inspriring my friend :)
    6 hours ago by JP Oban to Under fear

  • Gold Star - 34,129 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/11/2015 6:42:00 AM)

    ........My heartiest congratulations to poets Shigufta Hena Uzma, Avril-Shernaz, Maria Zafar and Purabi Bhattacharya. All four of you are amongst my favourite poets. And a very special congratulations to Hasmukh Mehta Sir for the well-deserved honour.


    Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad
    Apr 11,2015

  • Gold Star - 34,129 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/10/2015 8:52:00 AM)

    .......Hasmukhji, accolades thus pour in your way as you relentlessly make everyone feel good. Congratulations!



    Purabi, Gandhinagar
    Apr 10,2015

  • Gold Star - 34,129 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/10/2015 1:48:00 AM)

    I am excited to note that all the girls are the winners; that has to be, for they represent poetry. Having said that, I wish to congratulate Maria, Shigufta, Shernaz-Avril and Purabi along with the ever agile Hasmukh ji.


    Kumarendra Mallick, Hyderabad
    Apr 10,2015


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    Unbelievable. I am thankful to all those who appreciated my effort



    Critic’s award



    I was blinking

    And thinking

    What was this all about?

    The critics award for Mr. Right



    It is always good to comment

    In earnest and present

    What is good in the poem?

    And the relevant message with theme



    Whole of the world is on volcano

    We have no place to go

    Those who are under shed

    Can think of only dead



    We have lots of concern

    But some of the comments turn

    Hostile to some sections

    We can understand the reaction



    The harmony and peace is must

    Above all, the backup should be added with trust

    I go for simple message

    World has come off its age





    hasmukh mehta, ahmedabad
    Apr 9,2015


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    I would like to express my sincere thanks to the editors. I am extremely honored. Many congratulations to all the other winners. Regards.



    Maria Zafar, New Delhi
    Apr 09,2015


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    Congratulations to all the winners! Special congratulations to Hasmukh Sir!


    Supratik Sen, Chennai
    Apr 09,2015


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    Thank you so much to the jury and I am really overwhelmed. With regards,


    Shigufta Uzma, Rourkela
    Apr 09,2015


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    Congratulations to all those whose poems have been selected by the editors. There have been many good postings during the month and we hope the revival of the monthly selection of best poems will motivate everyone in the forum.

    Hasmukh Mehta ji becomes the first person to get the critique's award. He is one person who has been responding to postings of almost all other members, in his unique poetic style, for a very long time indeed. In fact he has converted responses to creative work. All members should take his advice of responding to work of others seriously.



    GSP Rao, Hyderabad
    Apr 8,2015


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  • Gold Star - 34,129 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/9/2015 6:24:00 AM)

    Hasmukh Mehta ji becomes the first person to get the critique's award. He is one person who has been responding to postings of almost all other members, in his unique poetic style, for a very long time indeed. In fact he has converted responses to creative work. All members should take his advice of responding to work of others seriously.



    GSP Rao, Hyderabad
    Apr 8,2015

  • Gold Star - 34,129 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/9/2015 6:23:00 AM)

    Congratulations to all the winners! Special congratulations to Hasmukh Sir!


    Supratik Sen, Chennai
    Apr 09,2015

  • Gold Star - 34,129 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/9/2015 6:11:00 AM)

    Critic'sa award.....

    For the Critique’s Award for the month we have chosen Hasmukh Mehta who has been unstinting in his appreciation and support of other’s postings.

Best Poem of hasmukh amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss(246) /500 #

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss(246) /500 #

Never Say Die

Never say die, you have no way
As you may also go any one day,
you may be laid on grounds as soul lost,
carried by those whom you hated most,

Immortal you are not so never word spell,
Name may remain but bade farewell,
nothing is permanent, all stands to vanish,
Game will be over when you are finish,

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