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hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/18/2014 9:24:00 PM)

    NO one to question....

    Beautiful


    Zachary Kulkin11 minutes ago
    A true testament to this time and age.
    Comment +1
    good


    Mr. Awesome9 minutes ago
    I like how you expand to analogize the degradement you are speaking of with the entire earth falling apart, and stand for freedom no matter what gets in the way. The only punctuation in the poem is a question mark, which i like. I think the third line has a typo and should say generations.
    Comment +1
    Intriguing

    Jaime Leal10 minutes ago
    Well written poem. A beautifully worded look at the state of nature in today.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/18/2014 8:57:00 PM)

    She does

    A true man speaking of a true woman.


    Amanda SteinbrecherLess than a minute ago
    She must really love and be dedicated to you and her family. No woman will give her best day in and day out unless they have firm reason to. Cherish her dearly!
    ...

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/16/2014 10:57:00 PM)

    No ordinary...

    I enjoy it..


    Richard J Swartz44 minutes ago
    You have to know Poetry to understand it and know how to Read it...as well as to Wright it. You are a very good Poet I might add.
    Comment +1
    Best line


    Todd Vanisacker59 minutes ago
    Love the line I shall always see in form of an art I am half tempted to steal it. Just kidding
    Comment +1
    It's alright

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/15/2014 10:42:00 AM)

    Love and...

    Aman


    Ahmad Al_khatat1 hour ago
    Very powerful writing
    Comment +1
    Love and- - - - -Passion- - -Compassion- - - - Fine unique expression- -


    Subhashchandra Adhav1 hour ago
    The design of the poem is thoughtful, imaginative and unique of its kind- - - - -I liked it much- -
    A zealous write of strong message- - - Love, peace, Aman and Amen- - -

    An excellent read- - - -

    Great work!

    Comment +1
    talented poet


    Sandra Boswell1 hour ago
    you are obviously a talented poet and despite a couple of lines that i did not understand i think you have written a great poem.Thank you.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/9/2014 8:17:00 AM)

    Haminia Haar Thank you for your precious comment, dear Hasmukh! I can understand that you don't believe in God, or you would have liked to see God..You are right, nobody could see God in reality. Some people see God in their dreams, others can feel Him, the bible says that God is the creator of all things, beings and human beings. I am one who can feel God and His help for me in reality. Albert Einstein also said that if he didn't believe in God's existence he wouldn't have discovered anything. I believe only in what is present in my life. In my opinion it is better for the people create good things in their mind than to create wars. Where to find God? In our souls!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/9/2014 7:43:00 AM)

    Haminia Haar Hasmukh, thank you for the beautiful poem:
    You know
    And as far as I go
    You are the only one
    To whom I trust and none else

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/8/2014 10:35:00 PM)

    The little flower]

    Very nice


    Keith Horton23 hours ago
    Beautiful
    Comment +1
    wonderful description.

    alyshia mills23 hours ago
    when reading this, you chose the perfect words to paint a picture in my mind. I found that it had strong visionary words. When you talked about color, i saw them. When you talked about her smile, i saw the perfect smile, Very good work!

  • Dr. A.celestine Raj Manohar Md (9/8/2014 9:01:00 AM)

    sir, an enormous life-time's poetry writ with much truth, wisdom and authority. GLORIOUS.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/8/2014 7:16:00 AM)

    Good time..

    Haminia Haar Hasmukh, you are a great and very good poet! Thank you for your touching my heart new poems you write as reply to my verses, they are so beautiful and true!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/7/2014 5:36:00 AM)

    From:
    Lento Maez (Mesa United States; Male; 74)
    To:
    Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
    Date Time:
    9/5/2014 3: 56: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
    Subject:
    Presenting
    MHA, I present you with the highest award for literary excellence in poetry. Stay well and keep on keeping on.

I lived not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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