hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 67,810 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 67,810 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/29/2015 8:18:00 PM)

    Small creaure

    : 8/29/2015 3: 26: 00 AM
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    Poem: 43051563 - Small Creature
    Member: Ramesh T A
    Comment: Each one has some talent sure. Your skill in writing your style of poetry belongs only to you!

    Hasmukhbhai, who calls you a small creature? Your certainly great with a regular contribution of verses.



    KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343
    29 Aug,2015

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  • Gold Star - 67,810 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/27/2015 3:00:00 AM)

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  • Gold Star - 67,810 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/25/2015 7:13:00 PM)

    With lots of fun

    Hasmukh Bhai, you have created a beautiful poem with the Biblical idea.


    KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343
    25 Aug,2015

  • Gold Star - 67,810 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/23/2015 7:23:00 PM)

    Find welcome...

    Sanaa Uppal Hasmukh Mehta smile emoticon
    It is always a pleasure to have you
    your splendid words are so lovely and welcomed smile emoticon thank you
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  • Gold Star - 67,810 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/23/2015 11:44:00 AM)

    Difficult art.....

    Maleka Ferdous Thank you for your beautifully repply with an excellent poetry Hasmukh Meheta.
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  • Gold Star - 67,810 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/21/2015 8:00:00 PM)

    ........................Thanks Hasmukh Sir for your poetic appraisal which are always a source of inspiration :)



    Aparna Singh, Kolkata
    21 Aug,2015

  • Gold Star - 67,810 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/21/2015 7:59:00 PM)

    Thanks Hasmukh Sir for your poetic appraisal which are always a source of inspiration :)



    Aparna Singh, Kolkata
    21 Aug,2015

  • Gold Star - 67,810 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/15/2015 6:00:00 AM)

    O soldiers

    Ratnakar Mandlik (8/15/2015 2: 52: 00 AM)
    Oh dear soldiers
    The nation is on your shoulder

    You are one of rare breed
    No one can deny you your rights.
    Hats off. Your poem has reflected sentiments of every one.
    Ratnakar Mandlik (Report) Reply


    Gold Star - 4,546 PointsRamesh T A (8/15/2015 2: 46: 00 AM)
    The sacrifice of soldiers at the border to safeguard nation is greatest ever! (

  • Gold Star - 67,810 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/14/2015 7:54:00 AM)

    Perfct match

    What a beautiful way to start the narrative with your 'best whisper'. Enjoyed this lyrical poetry devoted to a delicate romantic affair. Thanks for sharing the poem. I would like to quote:
    My efforts proved success
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  • Gold Star - 67,810 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/13/2015 6:50:00 AM)

    With presence

    Wow man, this is awesome. I can definitely tell you know what you're doing with nearly 10,000 poems. It really shows. I might add a comma after the word Yes, but that's just me and i think you have a really impeccable piece here. That's the only thing that really stuck out as a possible fix, but it's not really needed if you like the exact juxtaposition of the stanzas and the poem itself.
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