hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 38,693 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 38,693 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/29/2014 7:20:00 AM)

    Shafiqul Haque Minto shared your photo.33 minutes ago by hasmukh amathalal | Reply
    Wind this is good but this seems to me as half-hearted attempt and with a pinch of salt on wounds... good wards but looked like you are not sincere telling good things from heart, how? look these two lines ''Muslim can not kill innocent As we are witnessing in present'' and i am not celebrating Eid as i am too sad for GAZA....if you are my neighbor, you should know in my room there a dead body.4 hrs • Unlike •

    1 Hasmukh Mehta ya it is sadness. i cnetre around festival and highlights and good things of rligion not implications Just now • Unlike • 130 minutes ago by hasmukh amathalal | Reply

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  • Gold Star - 38,693 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/26/2014 9:10:00 AM)

    Wiih least humanity

    Denis Brezik hey old friend when the world is gone when evil weeps it will put out the fires of hell who can argue then we had our second to think.Nice to see you again in another group your writings always inspiring and stay with me seek peace in this world.
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  • Gold Star - 38,693 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/25/2014 8:12:00 PM)

    wise people

    Wise people- - - valuable asset of the society- -


    Subhashchandra Adhav10 hours ago
    Good poem- - -
    Good read- -

    Well done
    Comment +1
    Nice poem

    Duane Lynch10 hours ago
    It is good fortune and grace when a leader is placed amongst us, a wise man/woman with which to put out trust in but it is not luck... That person has been put there for a reason, and who are we to question that reason.

    Great write :)
    Comment +1
    this was plane wise itself


    Arsi Ibro10 hours ago
    i like it

  • Gold Star - 38,693 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/25/2014 8:08:00 PM)

    Wise people

    Perfect poem by seasoned poet


    Shantanu Chindhade10 hours ago
    Tells you a sort of philosophy of sophisticated society.Job well done,
    Shantanu chindhade
    Comment +1
    nice poem


    adam fox10 hours ago
    good work :)
    Comment +1
    I understand the neurotic thought


    Tom Kennedy10 hours ago
    Hidden one thinks

  • Gold Star - 38,693 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/24/2014 8:43:00 AM)

    Common wealth games

    Insightful.

    darran hardwick1 minute ago
    My favorite lines are:

    Let flags of all countries rise high
    With glory and honor to our delight
    Sportsmen can create special space

    Sans color, creed and race

    Well Done.
    D. H.
    Comment +1
    great concept


    Crisanto Acenas3 minutes ago
    great mind behind piece

  • Gold Star - 38,693 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/23/2014 9:23:00 PM)

    Rosy flower

    Nice


    Matt Griffin3 minutes ago
    I like the use of charity and kindness is world so despair
    Comment +1
    Great use of description


    Jair Massiah2 minutes ago
    Lovely words used to describe this character Rosy. Is she human, goddess or flower? The poet paints it wonderfully and leaves it up to the interpretation of the reader. There are a few grammatical errors, but that is easily fixed! ;)

  • Gold Star - 38,693 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/21/2014 6:23:00 AM)

    make others...

    Good thought over poem- - - - - -


    Subhashchandra Adhav2 hours ago
    Well composed- - - - - -
    Good read
    Comment +1
    Such Beautiful Wisdom Hasmukh!

    Krystal Koru From Down Under2 hours ago
    Love your words of wisdom...to share the truth is wonderful....to share a poem
    is an honor....

  • Gold Star - 38,693 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/20/2014 9:29:00 AM)

    It is garden

    The eclectic Mehta


    Richard Schwartz2 hours ago
    Interesting as always. The Mehta miracle vision.
    It is garden- God waters his plants.
    Ah...yes, I see and I believe too-
    The truth of this miracle is simply before us.
    Thank you my Lord for all your blessings and vision.
    I do see the rain.
    The song writer J.C. Fogerty wrote of this miracle
    and asked the question.. I want to know have you
    ever seen the rain? and he did exclaim furthet
    coming down in love again! . You just might want to have
    a listen Misseur Mehta. Happy listening! . You will enjoy...

    Peace!

    Comment +1

  • Gold Star - 38,693 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/20/2014 7:01:00 AM)

    Why to forget?

    John Ravenscroft8 hours ago
    Hasmukh, well done! !
    Comment +1
    great

    Melissa Carroll8 hours ago
    I love the flow. I am especially drawn to the lines, if we are in this beautiful world, nothing should be told, it has to be observed, if we feel it is deserved. For me that means that everything is beautiful, not just the things that society believes deserve to be called beautiful. I could be entirely off base here in meaning, but that's what reached out and grabbed me and what I took from it.
    Comment +1
    Everything happens for a reason and it should be embraced rather than fought

    Rebbecca Martin8 hours ago
    Insightful

  • Gold Star - 38,693 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/17/2014 7:26:00 PM)

    I write...
    light


    Suzanne Hartman Johnson2 minutes ago
    I like it. Its light and fluffy.. check out some of mine...
    Comment +1
    Good to know


    Dumka Vincent6 minutes ago
    I feel your passion
    Comment +1
    A poem about writing, why people write and the enjoyment of writing, which as he describes is natural.

    Joshua FordLess than a minute ago
    ' I write' is a simple poem with a clear meaning, describing how natural poetry is to him, comparing to being a part of him as his body. There are five stanzas with four lines each and there is a near rhyming pattern of a, a, b, b, which gives the poem structure. At times i feel like he has forced words in to fit, or either chosen words merely on their accessibility to the poem, than the actual creative and moral effect. At times it loses interest and is hard to understand. The imagery is very good, using metaphors to get the message it across. The poem was good and the meaning was very clear. :)

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Are we blood thirsty?
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