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hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/6/2014 10:51:00 PM)

    Your choice....

    Thoughtful

    Heidi Wilson10 minutes ago
    Good flow
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    Shakespearan recital


    norbert3 minutes ago
    I think it is ok. The Shakespearean format gives it a classic style which strangely has the disadvantage of making it seem too poetic. Sometimes a poem arouses the most intense emotions when it does not seem too deliberate, when it feels like the poet just sat down and wrote down feelings, not structured sentences.

    It is a good poem for what it is, conventional poetry. But it certainly does not evoke intense emotions
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    Nicely written


    Jessica Cooley10 minutes ago
    I got to say your good at writing.. Great I say. :)

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  • Richard Beevor (5/3/2014 9:55:00 AM)

    excellent work and high achievement

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/30/2014 10:15:00 PM)

    Talk poetry.....

    I like it

    David Cook1 minute ago
    This is a nice profound teacher. I like his logic. I like the way he explains what poetry is all about. Poetry is the most beautiful gift to mankind and a poet can come from the poorest of the poorest. Could be the most happiest happiest person on the face of the earth. Poetry is like a bible
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/30/2014 6:00:00 AM)

    Never fades away....

    Anand Brown(4/30/2014 1: 33: 00 AM)
    Excellent poem, absorbing and engaging. It bears testament to the enduring quality of love and does so with poetic zest and class. Take a bow

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/28/2014 10:24:00 AM)

    Compassionate mother.....

    A lovely poem on mother. Being a mother myself, can very well relate to this poem. Thanks Hasmukhji.


    Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, india
    Apr 28,2014

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/23/2014 9:58:00 PM)

    For protection....

    i am in love with your words of wisdom! !


    Michelle24 minutes ago
    you are truly wonderful with your energy of words and a meaningful message behind it
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/23/2014 8:43:00 PM)

    Give chance...

    United from within

    Tracy Bollinger4 minutes ago
    Internal conflict from within as destructive power exceeding that of nature. Give the true nature of man a chance, instead of the few bent on power. This may happen if enough people believe it can.
    I love the message that only a poet can deliver.
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    Boosted.

    KR BALAKRISHNAN8 minutes ago
    Mehtajiii, I am glad that your poems are becoming brighter and brighter day by day. Reaching greater heights....
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    interestng


    Stephen Kister9 minutes ago
    good idea

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/16/2014 9:51:00 PM)

    Cuckoo remind...

    I love the abstract feeling!

    Sydney ParkLess than a minute ago
    I find it really interesting when poems are written without an explanation or without being straightforward. I love how i really had to read into it and interpret to find what I think the meaning of it is. It is not a cliche poem with lots of rhyming. This is true poetry with what seems to be a deep purpose.
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    Metaphor really stood as something else

    Chelsea TrianoLess than a minute ago
    Great way of expanding the idea of being inspired and changed in heart through metaphorical ways
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/12/2014 2:28:00 AM)

    LIFE MUST RELEASE

    I am your si..
    Let us be respectful
    And make it successful
    That human tragedy is avoidable
    If we remain united and face the struggle

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/12/2014 2:27:00 AM)

    Life must release..



    catherine lajul
    You are God sent, with briliant poems

I lived not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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