Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 214,703 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/4/2015 1:06:00 AM)

    Theholy place exists

    Shirley Macclean A woman's world

    Many come
    and
    many go
    some come slow
    others like wind blow
    you know

    the world is made up of all
    quick ones and slow
    mostly with big ego
    after women folk they go

    damn the poetry
    let it flow
    she has the wings
    heaven knows
    a butter flies show
    here, into the flames
    she vanishes
    and
    many a lover
    all she banishes

    'tis the woman's world
    she all reins does hold!

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/27/2015 7:14:00 PM)

    The star is no more

    Very respectful honor given. You have words of pure admiration.
    7 minutes ago by Den Charzelle | Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/22/2015 7:00:00 PM)

    If I ask................


    Date & Time: 7/22/2015 8: 49: 00 AM
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    Poem: 42781244 - If I Ask
    Member: Kinyua Karanja
    Comment: I'm surprised how words can be used with ease to form something so sweet to read like this. this great.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/19/2015 1:12:00 AM)

    Violate or tease...

    Shirley Macclean ur views r also GREAT GR8888 at any @...
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    Shirley Macclean TO SIR WITH LOVE!

    You are a great poet
    now I can see
    their lies inner beauty
    in thee
    some what
    like it does
    a minuscule few
    not many

    hence
    I HAVE INCLUDED YOU AS A POET
    FRIENDLY

    compose and read more poetry
    for universally free
    like me
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/15/2015 11:05:00 PM)

    Miserably fail

    You always write so well hasmukh! Thank you for sharing this! : D
    2 hours ago by Sean Scribbles | Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/15/2015 12:15:00 AM)

    I have no words...

    Dr Prerna Singla A beautiful n deep write.. in the simplest of qords you express deep meanings in life.. lovely write Hasmukh Mehta ji.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/1/2015 3:04:00 AM)

    A.h. Scott Lovely words
    Lovely words
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/1/2015 3:04:00 AM)

    Carmencita Aquino but of course
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/1/2015 3:03:00 AM)

    Ligaw Makata Well-said
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/1/2015 2:58:00 AM)

    welcome jairam tiwari, aumya, ramesh rai, kanya puck, alef mica
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Universities and campus prepare their grave,
In the guise of education they put front brave,
Bur on ground of morality they cave in,
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Great fall in standard and knowledge lagging,
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