hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 67,392 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Comments about hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/28/2014 8:36:00 PM)

    Useless exercise..

    that we continue to believe in our thoughts... is such a fallacy


    Rhea D'souza10 minutes ago
    loved the line..and try to sleep like dead....wanting to escape.. beautiful fast pace

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  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/21/2014 11:20:00 PM)

    MAGICAL TUNE

    cuckoo sings

    KR BALAKRISHNAN24 minutes ago
    Your poems are like cuckoo songs, so serene, lovely, musical... Bringing peace to hearts. Keep it up please.
    Comment +1
    Very good


    Seema Ali 27 minutes ago
    Your poem talks about the touch of? God in nature excellently.The way you have described the birds is great.Thanks for sharing.Brought a smile to my eyes.
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    Godly beauty for the bird that sings


    Robert Andrews21 minutes ago
    a nice piece about the cuckoo Ive never heard one If you have, read it and your review will be more accurate than mine.

  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/16/2014 6:22:00 PM)

    Many friends...

    Fully agreed with this great poem. Thanks for sharing.


    Partha Sarathi Paul, guskara-burdwan
    Oct 16,2014

  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/2/2014 7:24:00 AM)

    Dream packed drama...

    Sarah Russell Yet, power lives beyond werds... absolutely! ! ! Poet, you Rule.
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  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/30/2014 10:29:00 AM)

    I am happy, , , ,
    By far the best poem


    Daniel FranckLess than a minute ago
    This is the best poem I ever read on this website. It's a nice peice of art work keep up the good work

  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/29/2014 6:13:00 AM)

    Rock star...Shows you care about the world. Other than just yourself.

    Lacie Mark5 hours ago
    Keep writing poems about world changes and politics. It's your thing :)
    Comment +1
    Wonderful

    Virginia R5 hours ago
    Your ending stanza was very strong
    Comment +1
    good poem


    iron maiden fan4 hours ago
    a leader or a rock star what do we need?
    Nice


    Ahmad Al_khatat5 hours ago
    Very crate
    Comment +1
    good


    Jeckle Hyde5 hours ago
    good

  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/28/2014 2:37:00 AM)

    Real wisdom.....
    Love This


    BabyGirl26 minutes ago
    And the poor will enter God's kingdom of riches and be as kings.
    Comment +1
    wow


    Chelsea Hamel29 minutes ago
    You sir are humble and a great poet.
    Comment +1
    Yes Indeed.... Quite Impressive Work! ! ! !


    Michael Donovan27 minutes ago
    Such a nice reading experience has been provided by this formidable piece.
    Comment +1
    well done


    Sai Krishna31 minutes ago
    beautiful

  • Gold Star - 10,766 Points Kassem Oude (9/25/2014 9:53:00 AM)

    Hello, I am amazed by this poem and others too as I read all you show, this is a special one. I would hold your hand tightly and shake well. Thank you.

  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/18/2014 9:24:00 PM)

    NO one to question....

    Beautiful


    Zachary Kulkin11 minutes ago
    A true testament to this time and age.
    Comment +1
    good


    Mr. Awesome9 minutes ago
    I like how you expand to analogize the degradement you are speaking of with the entire earth falling apart, and stand for freedom no matter what gets in the way. The only punctuation in the poem is a question mark, which i like. I think the third line has a typo and should say generations.
    Comment +1
    Intriguing

    Jaime Leal10 minutes ago
    Well written poem. A beautifully worded look at the state of nature in today.

  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/18/2014 8:57:00 PM)

    She does

    A true man speaking of a true woman.


    Amanda SteinbrecherLess than a minute ago
    She must really love and be dedicated to you and her family. No woman will give her best day in and day out unless they have firm reason to. Cherish her dearly!
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Miss ', I Really Miss(246) /500 #

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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God, Bless Only Those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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