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hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 18,582 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 18,582 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/28/2014 5:46:00 PM)

    You write......Feeling the Nature around

    Bhuwan Joshi20 hours ago
    Definitely a nice pointer to those of us who have no time to stand and stare the gifts of Nature......
    Comment +1
    Good but could be better

    Arsi Anon20 hours ago
    It sounds incomplete. You should revise the ending. Also, you have a few grammar mistakes. But the idea is there and it is strong. It's a pretty creative idea, I guess, writing about writing. I like it, but you could improve it. :)

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  • Gold Star - 18,582 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/28/2014 5:25:00 PM)

    Let nobody......Thank you! I think that relationships between man and man or woman or woman are not as strong...the thing is if I am a woman, I already know what a woman is like so it is somewhat boring to keep on experiencing the same thing and if I make friends with a man it will be different and it tends to be more fun because I am learning how man are like. Beautiful write but I think woman and woman or man and man can get along fine, it is a matter of understanding that is all.
    9 hours ago by Munashe Mumbama | Reply

  • Rookie - 476 Points Richard Beevor (5/24/2014 10:12:00 AM)

    excellent poems sir, I wonder if you could read some of mine and give me your advice please, I would like to improve, thank you, I am http: //www.poemhunter.com/richard-allen-beevor/

  • Gold Star - 18,582 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/18/2014 12:20:00 AM)

    I turn 67...

    Re: I turn sixty seven (Score: 1)
    by maryanns on Saturday, May 17,2014 (12: 12: 02)
    From another one maintaining in time I must applaud this lovely piece of thoughtful artwork - and wish you a very happy birthday, too!

    Love that last stanza; good for you! Smile

  • Gold Star - 18,582 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/15/2014 8:45:00 AM)

    Story of desertion....

    chills chills wow

    Joshua Bissot6 minutes ago
    i totally understand my mother has gone through that same loss and i feel so bad for her it deeply hurts her and by virtue hurts me: (thank you for sharing such a personal introspective poem it is really good

    i recently attempted suicide and was found basically found dead -
    here is my recollection of where i was. http: //www.poetry.com/poems/1257276-content-n-resolve-

  • Gold Star - 18,582 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/15/2014 7:31:00 AM)

    Re: Quite happy (Score: 1)
    by b.b.w.(Tulsa) on Wednesday, May 14,2014 (22: 20: 05)
    These are honest emotions well expressed. There is an old proverb:
    The best reply to ignorance is silence. Don't be discouraged. Keep
    up the good work.

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    Re: Quite happy (Score: 1)
    by jadia4708au on Thursday, May 15,2014 (08: 29: 38)
    Oh sir so nice of you. I am guest poet here. readers keep distance from me here. I still give best of me to them.. regards

  • Gold Star - 18,582 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/15/2014 6:50:00 AM)

    By behavior...

    Re: By behavior (Score: 1)
    by b.b.w.(Tulsa) on Wednesday, May 14,2014 (22: 07: 53)
    I enjoyed your poem. It's good to keep in mind that there are true
    rhymes and half (or inexact) rhymes. Also, rhyme schemes can be
    irregular. Experienced poets sometimes alternate true rhymes and
    half rhymes and use irregularity for effect. To call this schizo shows
    ignorance of poetic devices. Keep up the good work.

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    Re: By behavior (Score: 1)
    by jadia4708au on Thursday, May 15,2014 (07: 49: 10)
    so encouraging words sir. Poets need to reform n say what his soul really wants to convey instead of keeping confined to rhymes or no rhymes.

  • Gold Star - 18,582 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/14/2014 9:01:00 PM)

    Simple exercise....


    x lone shoe in a dryer Daniel GarnreiterLess than a minute ago I tumble through this poem as the I feel the thoughts do in your mind. They jar against the sides of the machine banging away with such noise. Waiting and waiting for the cycle to finish. In that time we are left to wait we can be of use in so many ways and with those ways a thousand actions to do more to show who and what we are to improve ourselves so that the presence we offer is the best we can. True though, sometimes it's just time to wait. To watch the tumult inside but being there offers possibilities as well. for should the door be hit and come loose we are there to catch what falls out and to assist as we couldn't if we'd gone away
    today

  • Gold Star - 18,582 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/14/2014 8:28:00 PM)

    By behavior....

    Lovely work

    Olwen Cuttita9 hours ago
    Well done. Many take amiss of what really matters and focus on only the little things that don't really compare or stand up to other matters. This is said and written very well.

  • Gold Star - 18,582 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/14/2014 7:13:00 AM)

    Spare them....


    Powerful poem Helvi Salminen1 day ago about an important topic
    today

    Broken Lullabies 7 hours ago Very true and something everyone should read! Very nicely said.
    today

    You express the situation well. Tracy Bollinger7 hours ago Your moral stature and compassion bleeds through the words!

    great Joshua Bissot7 hours ago very nicely done my friend
    today

I lived not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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