hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 54,246 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/28/2015 7:02:00 PM)

    Little belief

    Juha Huovilainen (Sweden ;)
    Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
    Date Time:
    6/28/2015 12: 17: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
    Re: Re: Re: Re: Little Belief
    I have seen the very impressive collection of your poems and quality has absolutely not been compensated by quantity. Reading your poems is a really inspiring excercise and from a songwriter point of view, you most often have a beatiful rhytm in your sentences making it easy to apply them to various melodies.
    Looking forward to be able to send you some ready or at least half-done matewrial based on your poems.


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  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/27/2015 10:34:00 AM)

    In your absence....

    Susan Lacovara (6/27/2015 8: 31: 00 AM)
    Absence is hard for the soul to accept. Thus, we keep looking for familiar faces, even if circumstance erases them from our daily life. Resonating piece of poetry. PEACE (Report)

  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/21/2015 7:40:00 PM)

    Midern poetry

    Date & Time: 6/21/2015 6: 50: 00 PM
    Remove this comment

    Poem: 18063236 - Modern Poetry

    Member: Kpekot Egweteng
    Comment: You have said it all. Poetry now does not define our moment.I agree our poetic soul has died long back. But we can still exhume it.

  • Bronze Star - 2,669 Points Paul Amrod (6/21/2015 4:12:00 PM)

    Anonymous- - Have you studied English grammar?

  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/17/2015 4:22:00 AM)

    It is cool...

    you're always consistent with your work good job definitely a veteran writer
    6 hours ago by Adam Sandler is God to It is cool

  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/9/2015 2:29:00 AM)

    With the reason

    All truth herein woven with such skilfull pen. I admire your choice of words, so wonderful to read. Thank you for sharing this deep poetry, and thank you for the lessons I have learned here, Hasmukh Sir.
    5 hours ago by Sylvia Frances Chan to With the reason

  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/2/2015 2:07:00 AM)

    Final wish

    Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (6/1/2015 10: 35: 00 PM)
    Commendable work... Your last 2 stanzas are strong and eloquently express passion and romance in equivalence to the majestic beauty of the image of the Rose you posted below your poem...Try and be more cognizant of prepositions, and certain nouns that require the use of the preposition ''THE preceding it...///// IE: ' '''And staying On floor', really should read 'Staying on 'THE' floor'. And, if I could be so bold to further suggest that...''Lying on the floor' might even make your effort shine brighter...however, that's your call, not mine...Just an IMO, is all ~FjR~ (Report)

  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/1/2015 7:31:00 PM)

    Golden fame

    Dear Mehta-ji
    To share
    The knowledge of universe
    With message of co-existence and peace
    You've brought out the essence of the publication in 'The Statesman'

    Rajat Das Gupta, Kolkata
    Jun 01,2015

  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/25/2015 7:51:00 PM)

    Inward happiness

    Hasmukh ji, as usual your poetic appreciation takes me years back when you had a stanza or two for each poem on Your Space. You keep the fire burning. Thank you, dear friend

  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/19/2015 7:11:00 PM)

    Same way to exist...

    Omotosho Craig Olanrewaju Mr Hasmukh Mehta... You have got the rhythm, I look up to being a great writer like you when I get to your age...
    You always have my RESPECT and admiration...
    I Love what you do...Sir
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Miss ', I Really Miss(246) /500 #

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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At Any Time

Love is bound to take place
But brings smile on face
It is found in different form
And causes no harm

I find its acceptance
With clear stance
Of coming together

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