Syed Mudasir37 minutes ago
I respect both the individuals like Mahatma Gandhiji as well as Martin Luther; But there is no comparison in terms of Gandhi, he is an individual and a great personality. This poem had brilliant imagery which talks about the loss of the last century and there is no worst tragedy then Gandhiji's Assasination, he was a pillar of Asia... A great poem which is very honest and we all know great people are either disappeared or assasinated.... Much Appreciated
A clear point made
Steven Curphey32 minutes ago
Well the second political poem i have just reviewed on the bounce. This one maybe doesn't read as fluently as I have a preference for, however, if you are making a political point why not say it straight up like this one as we have plenty of politicians who don't say what we want them to and who hide behind masks in speaking terms, so well done for saying it like it is.
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Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago
this real and has nothing to do with politics. people should fight for themselves now
I shall....transformation is a true change- righteousness is a free gift.. strive for excellence, do not condemn.
Jo Anna Mike Simmons5 minutes ago
Very good.... His light is always with you, if you mess up it is okay, He forgives. When you spend time with God and in His Word, you have a relationship with Him and it is easier to go through life. :)))))))))))))
C Castro7 minutes ago
Very nice message.. Keep up the good work
krishna Middela11 minutes ago
We express our views, though they understand, some are keen to observe the grammar.after english is not my mother tongue.neither they know my mother tongue to share.
Let beauty of expression be appreciated.
But your grammar is perfect.
Shantanu Chindhade7 hours ago
Writing of high order.Philosophical but with real truth,
Asia Crockett7 hours ago
Decent good thoughts
To change without, first change within...
Anthony V7 hours ago
Only two problems; week should be weak and date should be a word which rhymes with guide. Otherwise, answering the question of morality; how does one go from an evil person to one of good character? Simply put: Remember deeds done and amend them.
Not all....A spiritual poem with firm faith and discipline.
Amir Samji21 minutes ago
After reading your poem, I can say, we forgot, honesty, and piety, that was jewels of societies. This is the reason we see chaos worldwide, and lies are prevailing over the Truth.
prema das32 minutes ago
Don't talk to me about God
Mary-Elin Rollins34 minutes ago
no disrespect meant, but I gave up on him a long time ago because he fed me to the dogs and never did anything to help my family
From 1 to ten...Some Girl
You might find this interesting The core of Krishnamurti's teaching is contained in the statement he made in 1929 when he said 'Truth is a pathless land'. Man cannot come to it through any organisation, through any creed, through any dogma, priest or ritual, not through any philosophical knowledge or psychological technique. He has to find it through the mirror of relationship, through the understanding of the contents of his own mind, through observation and not through intellectual analysis or introspective dissection. Man has built in himself images as a fence of security - religious, political, personal. These manifest as symbols, ideas, beliefs. The burden of these images dominates man's thinking, his relationships and his daily life. These images are the causes of our problems for they divide man from man. His perception of life is shaped by the concepts already established in his mind. The content of his consciousness is his entire existence. This content is common to all humanity. The individuality is the name, the form and superficial culture he acquires from tradition and environment. The uniqueness of man does not lie in the superficial but in complete freedom from the content of his consciousness, which is common to all mankind. So he is not an individual. Your poem made me think of this concept :)