hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 128,320 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/10/2015 4:11:00 PM)

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    Shirley Macclean
    Shirley Macclean Modern Minds

    Glad you all belong
    to an old school of thought,
    you scratch my back
    I will his

    'tis it

    but modernization can't be ignored
    salvation what
    cut greed and pollution of mind
    slice your egos
    of a Banyan kind
    and then yourself do remind

    you are just a part of a solar system
    now here soon no where
    no kith or kin
    you will ever find
    even if you alone
    have hope in a God
    will be kind
    to give you alone a second chance
    you have the option of having mine

    will be gracious of you
    O part of present loving mankind
    what salvation have you in mind,
    is theory of the past

    When many did not have a mind
    looked towards heavens and stars
    How clouds just passed
    where rain came from so fast
    they had a mind
    but half mast.....
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/8/2015 5:15:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 12/8/2015 7: 13: 00 AM
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    Poem: 44021979 - Where Can I Find
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    Comment: There is no standard when we can define either a perfect woman or a man.It depends on what we mean by perfect.It changes from person to person.When a woman discharges her duty as wife, mother smoothly with love and care she is perfect wife and mother.She may not get time to look after herself while devoting all attention to other members of family.If she is full of kindness and sympathy she is the perfect human being and the most beautiful person.Thanks for sharing a thought provoking poem.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/2/2015 2:25:00 AM)

    REAL WORLD Aruna Edula Great thoughts and feelings! Appreciated!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/1/2015 8:29:00 AM)

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    Garcia.....You are a great poet. you will go places. your poetry shall fly like birds in the sky. your poetry is commendable

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/1/2015 2:18:00 AM)

    The 10,421st gem! Great poem, you make it look really easy. Can't figure out why you aren't published in the big name publishing catalog. The writing world is silly like that by not noticing greatness, i suppose.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/1/2015 2:09:00 AM)

    So good. Feels like a life ballad.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/29/2015 12:08:00 AM)

    welcome garcia
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    x Gracia Gernale AsianPoet You have a revolutionary mind Hasmukh. Your collaboration speaks loud about bravery. I salute you for that. Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/28/2015 2:27:00 AM)

    Bravo! ! Humanity has lost much of it's humanity indeed. Beautiful poem. Hasmukh
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/27/2015 9:14:00 PM)

    Doug Groberg Very nice. As I was finishing this poem last night, I though maybe I would write a companion poem called Old Poets. Have to give it some thought. Thank you for sharing Hasmukh.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/27/2015 4:57:00 PM)

    welcome Dinesh Darji, Jane Ammogawen Ascano,
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Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
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Never Say Die

Never say die, you have no way
As you may also go any one day,
you may be laid on grounds as soul lost,
carried by those whom you hated most,

Immortal you are not so never word spell,
Name may remain but bade farewell,
nothing is permanent, all stands to vanish,
Game will be over when you are finish,

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