Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 228,226 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/17/2016 2:36:00 AM)

    Ink's fill...Tough subject matter. This really could make one second guess humanity (if you haven't already) . Nice job.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/16/2016 7:23:00 AM)

    Deatjs on face....Manuelle Augustine Thank you for sharing this great pen Sir Hasmukh馃憤
    I recommend you post it on Poetry for Peace main wall for all to see and read鉁岋笍
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    Pantas Pangihutan S
    Pantas Pangihutan S Thanks for sharing... dear sir Hasmukh. we know, it is so bad, what a tragedy to humanlife... burning money in the air, so many souls died for... the answer still blured? just showing the power, proud of to be no.1, but so sad deep inside... i can feel it sir... so sorry to hear these. may the peace of heaven dwelled in our heart to stop the war!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/15/2016 8:35:00 PM)

    who are we?

    thabiso........awe tnx bra yeah very very good man! ! ! i salut uthabiso........awe tnx bra yeah very very good man! ! ! i salut u

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/12/2016 9:44:00 PM)

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    very powerful poem
    very encouraging

    very inspiring and very hopeful
    for the weak & meek
    for the gentle & peaceful loving Nation

    thanksssssSS

    Great Poet Hasmukh Mehta

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/12/2016 7:56:00 PM)

    No threat now...Penpen Bugtong Takipsilim [3

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    GREAT POET Hasmukh Mehta

    COUNTED.

    it doesn't stop there
    it will never stop there
    it is only the beginning
    of a never ending beginning
    in a never ending ending
    in an endless pursuit of its perfection

    WE SHALL DO IT

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/11/2016 11:09:00 AM)

    Show of strength....Radhey Shyam Varshney Thanks dear Hasmukh Mehta for your poetic observation.
    But to me Peace is not illusion, though life on earth itself is full of delusion.
    A ray of hope is in sight as Heads of Nations are visiting
    each other's people and nation, echoing their voice against
    Terror and warlike violence.
    Let us pray sanity may prevail, divinity to take over devilish
    Apprehensions. Mean while as you wish.....
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/11/2016 12:25:00 AM)

    Ashok Sharda I like the title immensely which is suggestive of the whole idea of the this poetic piece. This is how I evaluate my journey, always treating attainment of any mile stone as my starting point without a waiting for any next, any destination. Consciousness can only be attained with conscious effort. The consequential effect is always joy and beauty. Your poem imbues with this impression.
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    Hasmukh Mehta
    Hasmukh Mehta so encouraging reply. admire your skill too
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/11/2016 12:25:00 AM)

    Just beginning, ....Ashok Sharda I like the title immensely which is suggestive of the whole idea of the this poetic piece. This is how I evaluate my journey, always treating attainment of any mile stone as my starting point without a waiting for any next, any destination. Consciousness can only be attained with conscious effort. The consequential effect is always joy and beauty. Your poem imbues with this impression.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/2/2016 5:46:00 AM)

    For right place............

    Jafar Malandro I love this.we need peace in the world.I like your poem sir great job
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/27/2016 10:38:00 AM)

    stand united..Madan Vaishnava Shakunta A beautiful imagination of global village where all the people shall mine the gold of peace & brotherhood. Thanks a million, Mehta Sahab for composing a so nice & inspiring poem.
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Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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God, Bless Only Those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those鈥︹.

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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