hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 44,856 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/9/2015 2:29:00 AM)

    With the reason

    All truth herein woven with such skilfull pen. I admire your choice of words, so wonderful to read. Thank you for sharing this deep poetry, and thank you for the lessons I have learned here, Hasmukh Sir.
    5 hours ago by Sylvia Frances Chan to With the reason

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  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/2/2015 2:07:00 AM)

    Final wish

    Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (6/1/2015 10: 35: 00 PM)
    Commendable work... Your last 2 stanzas are strong and eloquently express passion and romance in equivalence to the majestic beauty of the image of the Rose you posted below your poem...Try and be more cognizant of prepositions, and certain nouns that require the use of the preposition ''THE preceding it...///// IE: ' '''And staying On floor', really should read 'Staying on 'THE' floor'. And, if I could be so bold to further suggest that...''Lying on the floor' might even make your effort shine brighter...however, that's your call, not mine...Just an IMO, is all ~FjR~ (Report)

  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/1/2015 7:31:00 PM)

    Golden fame

    Dear Mehta-ji
    To share
    The knowledge of universe
    With message of co-existence and peace
    You've brought out the essence of the publication in 'The Statesman'


    Rajat Das Gupta, Kolkata
    Jun 01,2015

  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/25/2015 7:51:00 PM)

    Inward happiness

    Hasmukh ji, as usual your poetic appreciation takes me years back when you had a stanza or two for each poem on Your Space. You keep the fire burning. Thank you, dear friend

  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/19/2015 7:11:00 PM)

    Same way to exist...

    Omotosho Craig Olanrewaju Mr Hasmukh Mehta... You have got the rhythm, I look up to being a great writer like you when I get to your age...
    You always have my RESPECT and admiration...
    I Love what you do...Sir
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  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/18/2015 6:24:00 AM)

    Life is exciting...

    Unni Krishnan Atiyodi Birth days come and go/ How fruitfully we use our time is important/In that you have every reason to be satisfied/You spend time fruitfully/Your poems may be thousands in number!
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  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/17/2015 7:54:00 PM)

    Life is exciting...

    Pamela Moorehead I to like to rhyme it sounds good phoenetically and takes on the rhythm of music. Poetry is also about vibration for me as a writer, meter registers for me in rhyme or I choose not to rhyme. I personally have no favorite style of poetry when it comes to enjoying others. Happy Birthday MV Venkatraman, fluent Poet and smooth to my ear
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  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/17/2015 6:59:00 AM)

    God shall not

    Malik Zafar likes this.

    Malik Zafar Yes of course heaven is in the feet of mothers. He who make her happy will be granted best place in heaven. Love mums eaen heaven and alse get blessings of Allah
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  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/16/2015 7:06:00 PM)

    In waste seldom

    This is a poem from a true soldier which is inspiring. Many thanks for this poetic gift to me.


    Rajat Das Gupta, Kolkata
    May 16,2015

  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/15/2015 6:05:00 PM)

    Mastermind

    You think very fast! Indeed,
    The soul is taken away to frighten mankind
    As main key lies with creator or mastermind
    This is true. Even a saint like person like Tagore apprehends though not mortal death but death in people's mind after he passes away. He has no answer.


    Rajat Das Gupta, Kolkata
    May 15,2015

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Miss ', I Really Miss(246) /500 #

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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At Cross Road

Never but at cross road,
Are we at cross road?
Is there any load?
Why not we meet?
Even at cross road.

Are we blood thirsty?
And care for no one,
who may come but none?

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