hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 67,810 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 67,810 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/12/2015 12:33:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 8/11/2015 9: 22: 00 PM
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    Poem: 17558708 - All Dreams Not Come True###(In 500)
    Member: Bharati Nayak
    Comment: Full of positive notions the poem is a great write inspiring to work with full dedicated effort, sticking to right path and not to be daunted by failures when it says-
    -Life does not end with setting of a day
    Sun may rise again with bright ray
    Your hopes may be high and tall
    Vast horizon may lie open for all
    Try for success without any fall

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  • Gold Star - 67,810 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/9/2015 7:39:00 PM)

    Steven Jacobson I would like to share poetry with yours and be friends.

    Eternal Fountain
    Making fool

    The time translates and transcribes
    its etching on the world. the
    world forever endeared to time
    but missing the mark of ever being
    in the moment. Nature continues
    to outshine the world in both
    effervescent and existential manor.
    whether spring, summer, fall or winter
    nature portrays both an intoxicating
    and intrinsic flavor and festive
    flowing of life. the bubbling and
    birth, a fountain, pure delight
    and perfect demeanor cascading,
    glowing and growing, extravaganza.
    the Spirit in rapture with spirit
    creating an abode, an eternal sanctuary
    filled with grace and glory.

    © 2015 Steven Jacobson
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    Hasmukh Mehta oh so beautiful
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  • Gold Star - 67,810 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/7/2015 8:04:00 PM)

    Wonderful job, Hasmukh ji. The world of poesy needs you to write more. Keep going and enlighten all. Thank you very much.

    Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad
    07 Aug,2015

  • Gold Star - 67,810 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/7/2015 8:02:00 PM)

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    Rajnish Manga (Faridabad India; Male; 64)
    To:
    Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal
    Date Time:
    8/7/2015 12: 57: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
    Subject:
    Namaskar Sir!
    I feel highly obliged by your wonderful words of appreciation in your unique poetic style. This is indeed an encouragement to me. Thank you very much.
    Regards

  • Gold Star - 67,810 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/4/2015 9:07:00 AM)

    With full blossom

    Hannira Richerr likes this.

    Hannira Richerr Oh Flower my flower... when u grow on the rever... that makes me warmer.. nd i cant believed, that u r charmer... oh Lover my Lover.. u come nd go, to be closer.... i cant believed that u a here... makes me feel life, together... thanx Hasmukh Mehta.. i love ur poem.. nd u r a great poemer smile emoticon heart emoticon
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  • Gold Star - 67,810 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/4/2015 1:06:00 AM)

    Theholy place exists

    Shirley Macclean A woman's world

    Many come
    and
    many go
    some come slow
    others like wind blow
    you know

    the world is made up of all
    quick ones and slow
    mostly with big ego
    after women folk they go

    damn the poetry
    let it flow
    she has the wings
    heaven knows
    a butter flies show
    here, into the flames
    she vanishes
    and
    many a lover
    all she banishes

    'tis the woman's world
    she all reins does hold!

  • Gold Star - 67,810 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/27/2015 7:14:00 PM)

    The star is no more

    Very respectful honor given. You have words of pure admiration.
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  • Gold Star - 67,810 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/22/2015 7:00:00 PM)

    If I ask................


    Date & Time: 7/22/2015 8: 49: 00 AM
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    Poem: 42781244 - If I Ask
    Member: Kinyua Karanja
    Comment: I'm surprised how words can be used with ease to form something so sweet to read like this. this great.

  • Gold Star - 67,810 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/19/2015 1:12:00 AM)

    Violate or tease...

    Shirley Macclean ur views r also GREAT GR8888 at any @...
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    Shirley Macclean TO SIR WITH LOVE!

    You are a great poet
    now I can see
    their lies inner beauty
    in thee
    some what
    like it does
    a minuscule few
    not many

    hence
    I HAVE INCLUDED YOU AS A POET
    FRIENDLY

    compose and read more poetry
    for universally free
    like me
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  • Gold Star - 67,810 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/15/2015 11:05:00 PM)

    Miserably fail

    You always write so well hasmukh! Thank you for sharing this! : D
    2 hours ago by Sean Scribbles | Reply

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