hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 35,464 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 35,464 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/14/2013 10:20:00 PM)

    offer prayer....

    A wonderful and sensible poem.


    Amir SamjiLess than a minute ago
    After reading it, I can say, we all shall think like that. God listen to everybody; with him nobody is favorite. The one who is sincere in his/her prayers; receive first preference. One thing I want to add, since we started judging each other, atmosphere fill with bias and enmity, it should be avoided!
    Comment +1
    I like the message.

    Nicholas Torino4 minutes ago
    I think people from all faiths can appreciate this message. Well done!

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  • Gold Star - 35,464 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/13/2013 5:51:00 AM)

    Next to almighty...

    Re: Next to almighty
    by MichaelFirewalker on Tuesday, November 12,2013 (17: 49: 52)

    I do not think this poet's English is very clear...ergo, this poem is not clear, but quite difficult to understand...perhaps I am wrong, but it seems to be describing a very autocratic, controlling, and harsh man, who, despite his apparently unpleasant personality characteristics, is nevertheless loved by the family he dominates...


    Re: Next to almighty (Score: 1)
    by jadia4708au on Wednesday, November 13,2013 (06: 48: 18)
    thanks for your harsh comment..

    evaluate father in your English and post me as I shall love to your brilliance and capacity.

    regards

  • Gold Star - 35,464 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/10/2013 10:28:00 AM)

    Symbol of good reelation

    An opening up of a long suppressed feeling with trepidation of a back lash!


    Ancient Mariner3 hours ago
    There are so many times when we are afraid of expressing feelings that is always there lurking beneath the surface. This is one such time when after gathering enough courage the poet expresses his feelings for a love that may be the forbidden fruit that he is reaching out for! Or maybe an old love that he never expressed long time ago but when the paths cross again gets the strength!

    Very touching


    barbara greaves3 hours ago
    You never know until you try what reception you will get

    Awsome

    Faheem Jawaid4 hours ago

    Well written and beautifully expressed poem with innate flow in thought and in verses as well.
    I would appreciate your reviews of my poems Mr. Mehta.

  • Gold Star - 35,464 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/10/2013 10:25:00 AM)

    Symbol of good relation

    An opening up of a long suppressed feeling with trepidation of a back lash!


    Ancient Mariner3 hours ago
    There are so many times when we are afraid of expressing feelings that is always there lurking beneath the surface. This is one such time when after gathering enough courage the poet expresses his feelings for a love that may be the forbidden fruit that he is reaching out for! Or maybe an old love that he never expressed long time ago but when the paths cross again gets the strength!

  • Gold Star - 35,464 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/8/2013 4:29:00 PM)

    open up hands

    Debra Stanza Melody We owe many things for our brethren
    Who live with hardship and need something to be done
    They are not asking any favor
    Yet it is our privilege and honor to offer..... we have to take care of our own, and our own is all human life. I enjoyed your piece very much. Peace
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  • Gold Star - 35,464 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/1/2013 9:09:00 PM)

    Dipawali....

    A truly heart-felt spiritual eye-opener


    Luke Wilson15 minutes ago
    A truly heart-felt spiritual eye-opener.

    This is the kind of poetry we can use universally for true guiding inspiration.

    So brilliantly written, an instant favorite. An Ode to you, sir.
    Comment +1
    I like your style

    robert micon9 minutes ago
    You have found an interesting way of transcribing about the Festival of Lights. It works.
    Comment +1
    Intriguing


    Professor Frost17 minutes ago
    This quite the poem. I appreciated the craft and structure of it.
    Thanks for sharing, keep writing.

  • Gold Star - 35,464 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/30/2013 11:28:00 PM)

    In many places....

    wow

    Ecstacy Furubayashi19 minutes ago
    I apologize you are going through that. As they grow, they never really know why we did what we did is because we lovve them. From when they were a baby and always saying I love you, growing to teens and arguing. But you must not blame yourself. If we get hard on them its because it hurt us so much cause we want them to be better. But we can't shield them from everything. But we can talk to them and do our best to help them achieve goals.
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  • Gold Star - 35,464 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/30/2013 6:45:00 PM)

    little child

    I loved it!


    Kenji Z7 minutes ago
    Now I dont have any children of my own, but I have nieces and nephews. Watching them grow, you step in and correct the wrongs but in the end some mistakes have to be made in order to for them to grow and learn as their own. I dont mean to offend any parents, its just my take on it. Loved how your words painted a beautiful yet grim picture. Such is life.
    Comment +1
    Wow

    Faith Redfield14 minutes ago
    This is really strong: 3
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    Great! !


    Dina Yakout16 minutes ago
    Thank you for sharing this great poem that resonates with kindness and humanity :)
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    Father's love for his child


    Ifeanyi Nnadi15 minutes ago
    Yes girl child pose little problem
    Comment +1
    Needs more work

  • Gold Star - 35,464 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/30/2013 7:01:00 AM)

    Peace can conquer...




    Janay Griffin9 minutes ago
    This poem is amazing. I understood the eternal message the first few sentences.

  • Gold Star - 35,464 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/30/2013 6:54:00 AM)

    Little child.....

    Salute to you


    Vijaya Sarathi Putcha33 minutes ago
    Wow. As usual. You have expressed very great.

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