hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 45,721 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 45,721 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/18/2014 7:52:00 PM)

    The God is...Mohan Lohani I have enjoyed reading your poems in the past and good to know that you have continued writing such beautiful and nice poems.
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  • Gold Star - 45,721 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/17/2014 10:52:00 PM)

    By words...
    Scott Ransopher It has key to ignition there is lot more compassion emanating from kind heart almost written in form an art words are molded like river water some times it flows slower sometimes with fury and totally in spate there are many more things to relate poetry can make you to cry it can make you to fly even with weak wings in sky it helps to boost morale with concentrated try words have immense thrust it can be coupled with trust it may cut through slice with determined bid of promises words do come from mind but it has inner core and shield heart pushes real ambition and desire words play nicely with shape to admire. Good lines. Good poem.
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  • Gold Star - 45,721 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/25/2014 6:45:00 PM)

    Mitos Jane Nepomuceno I could only repeat what Rohani Daud said
    'You're a great poet.. Never fade a passion and knowledge Mr Hasmukh
    Metha..
    - Manzil Rajput 'nice sir ji '

    ... Pls send me the English version :)))
    ... I believe them, You really are! ! !
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  • Gold Star - 45,721 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/21/2014 7:12:00 AM)

    face the bullet


    Much Appreciated

    Syed Mudasir37 minutes ago
    I respect both the individuals like Mahatma Gandhiji as well as Martin Luther; But there is no comparison in terms of Gandhi, he is an individual and a great personality. This poem had brilliant imagery which talks about the loss of the last century and there is no worst tragedy then Gandhiji's Assasination, he was a pillar of Asia... A great poem which is very honest and we all know great people are either disappeared or assasinated.... Much Appreciated
    Comment +1
    A clear point made


    Steven Curphey32 minutes ago
    Well the second political poem i have just reviewed on the bounce. This one maybe doesn't read as fluently as I have a preference for, however, if you are making a political point why not say it straight up like this one as we have plenty of politicians who don't say what we want them to and who hide behind masks in speaking terms, so well done for saying it like it is.
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    Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago
    this real and has nothing to do with politics. people should fight for themselves now
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  • Gold Star - 45,721 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/18/2014 5:27:00 PM)

    Poetry is no joke......Rick R
    Well put I am in awe that those with English as a second language can create very good English poems I have enough trouble with one language

    marvinbrato
    Well taken sir..words of wisdom from a great poet himself! Thank you for the guidelines!

  • Gold Star - 45,721 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2014 6:57:00 PM)

    just behave, , , , , ,

    My dear Hasmukh Bhai,

    I had a similar experience recently while giving a talk to young children. I stopped the noise by reciting a devotional song of Purandara Dasa. Its English vesion is the one given below:

    “Make no noise, make no noise

    I will fall at your feet, be wise

    Those who are asleep might wake up

    And with questions might come up.”

    Had your ‘Madame, ’ known Kannada she would have certainly made use of this song. I know not which ‘Madame’ you are referring to. I hope she is not Madame Bovary of Flaubert.



    KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343
    Jan 16,2014

  • Gold Star - 45,721 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/11/2014 10:08:00 AM)

    When I look.....en I Look At by Hansmukh Mehta is a nice poetic endeavour to present the universe as the poet sees it.

    Kesavan Subramanian8 minutes ago
    It is a good Nature poem. I like it.
    Comment +1
    nice

    Keek Ruiz21 minutes ago
    I enjoyed reading your perspective on how you see life.

  • Gold Star - 45,721 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2014 5:29:00 PM)

    I shall....transformation is a true change- righteousness is a free gift.. strive for excellence, do not condemn.

    Jo Anna Mike Simmons5 minutes ago
    Very good.... His light is always with you, if you mess up it is okay, He forgives. When you spend time with God and in His Word, you have a relationship with Him and it is easier to go through life. :)))))))))))))
    Comment +1
    Nice


    C Castro7 minutes ago
    Very nice message.. Keep up the good work

  • Gold Star - 45,721 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2014 5:25:00 PM)

    Heartless as human.....So wonderful


    krishna Middela11 minutes ago
    We express our views, though they understand, some are keen to observe the grammar.after english is not my mother tongue.neither they know my mother tongue to share.
    Let beauty of expression be appreciated.
    But your grammar is perfect.
    Comment +1
    Excellent


    Greg Obrecht12 minutes ago
    This. Is. Awesome.

  • Gold Star - 45,721 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2014 4:53:00 PM)

    Try to judge
    Wise words

    Abbey Gillespie8 minutes ago
    These words so wise and noble. They show passion and express that has been put into the poem. Beautiful and truthful peace

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