Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 189,822 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/21/2014 6:23:00 AM)

    make others...

    Good thought over poem- - - - - -


    Subhashchandra Adhav2 hours ago
    Well composed- - - - - -
    Good read
    Comment +1
    Such Beautiful Wisdom Hasmukh!

    Krystal Koru From Down Under2 hours ago
    Love your words of wisdom...to share the truth is wonderful....to share a poem
    is an honor....

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/20/2014 9:29:00 AM)

    It is garden

    The eclectic Mehta


    Richard Schwartz2 hours ago
    Interesting as always. The Mehta miracle vision.
    It is garden- God waters his plants.
    Ah...yes, I see and I believe too-
    The truth of this miracle is simply before us.
    Thank you my Lord for all your blessings and vision.
    I do see the rain.
    The song writer J.C. Fogerty wrote of this miracle
    and asked the question.. I want to know have you
    ever seen the rain? and he did exclaim furthet
    coming down in love again! . You just might want to have
    a listen Misseur Mehta. Happy listening! . You will enjoy...

    Peace!

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/20/2014 7:01:00 AM)

    Why to forget?

    John Ravenscroft8 hours ago
    Hasmukh, well done! !
    Comment +1
    great

    Melissa Carroll8 hours ago
    I love the flow. I am especially drawn to the lines, if we are in this beautiful world, nothing should be told, it has to be observed, if we feel it is deserved. For me that means that everything is beautiful, not just the things that society believes deserve to be called beautiful. I could be entirely off base here in meaning, but that's what reached out and grabbed me and what I took from it.
    Comment +1
    Everything happens for a reason and it should be embraced rather than fought

    Rebbecca Martin8 hours ago
    Insightful

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/17/2014 7:26:00 PM)

    I write...
    light


    Suzanne Hartman Johnson2 minutes ago
    I like it. Its light and fluffy.. check out some of mine...
    Comment +1
    Good to know


    Dumka Vincent6 minutes ago
    I feel your passion
    Comment +1
    A poem about writing, why people write and the enjoyment of writing, which as he describes is natural.

    Joshua FordLess than a minute ago
    ' I write' is a simple poem with a clear meaning, describing how natural poetry is to him, comparing to being a part of him as his body. There are five stanzas with four lines each and there is a near rhyming pattern of a, a, b, b, which gives the poem structure. At times i feel like he has forced words in to fit, or either chosen words merely on their accessibility to the poem, than the actual creative and moral effect. At times it loses interest and is hard to understand. The imagery is very good, using metaphors to get the message it across. The poem was good and the meaning was very clear. :)

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/17/2014 7:19:00 PM)

    Rise for all

    Rise for all- - - - -Wake up call- - -


    Subhashchandra Adhav10 hours ago
    Reflect ignorance with nature's relation- - - - - -I feel this is conveniently adopted or accepted ignorance in the name of progress and sometimes ignored ignorance for the sake of development with nature's as well as human relation too- - - - - - -I fully subscribe to the views of the poet- - - - - -
    Very thought provoking and insightful piece of work- - - - - Great job done.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/17/2014 9:16:00 AM)

    Wisdom to be wise

    Re: Wisdom to be wise (Score: 1)
    by zbird on Wednesday, July 16,2014 (12: 24: 52)
    if only the world leaders would listen to your words and at least hear that last verse. too much hatred and fighting and death when all we want is peace.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/17/2014 9:13:00 AM)

    Rise for all

    I am so in tune on how this poet states how people uses animals to fullfill many semblances on how man justifies how and what man has done to emminate how we are destructing the nature's wealth.

    Evelyn Carter4 minutes ago
    In total agreement how the poet feels how many different cultures feel about how loose existence as we all live life on earth.
    Comment +1
    I LIKE THE POEM


    jennifer daughtrey8 minutes ago
    IT WAS REALLY GOOD POEM

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/12/2014 2:48:00 AM)

    Come along
    Even if you are wrong

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/12/2014 12:35:00 AM)

    Time to waste..

    like this alot

    Betty-Gwen WalkerLess than a minute ago
    i thought this was a great way to to describe everyday life. basically everything is time and role. not who we are but what we are. not who i am, but what ethnicity i might be, or religion. i like your perspective

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/11/2014 9:47:00 AM)

    It is difficult

    You're awesome!

    Kenneth HarrisonLess than a minute ago
    You're very talented and please never stop writing!
    Creatively, KEN
    Comment +1

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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God, Bless Only Those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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