Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 205,544 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/29/2014 7:23:00 AM)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/29/2014 7:20:00 AM)

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    Wind this is good but this seems to me as half-hearted attempt and with a pinch of salt on wounds... good wards but looked like you are not sincere telling good things from heart, how? look these two lines ''Muslim can not kill innocent As we are witnessing in present'' and i am not celebrating Eid as i am too sad for GAZA....if you are my neighbor, you should know in my room there a dead body.4 hrs • Unlike •

    1 Hasmukh Mehta ya it is sadness. i cnetre around festival and highlights and good things of rligion not implications Just now • Unlike • 130 minutes ago by hasmukh amathalal | Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/26/2014 9:10:00 AM)

    Wiih least humanity

    Denis Brezik hey old friend when the world is gone when evil weeps it will put out the fires of hell who can argue then we had our second to think.Nice to see you again in another group your writings always inspiring and stay with me seek peace in this world.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/25/2014 8:12:00 PM)

    wise people

    Wise people- - - valuable asset of the society- -


    Subhashchandra Adhav10 hours ago
    Good poem- - -
    Good read- -

    Well done
    Comment +1
    Nice poem

    Duane Lynch10 hours ago
    It is good fortune and grace when a leader is placed amongst us, a wise man/woman with which to put out trust in but it is not luck... That person has been put there for a reason, and who are we to question that reason.

    Great write :)
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    this was plane wise itself


    Arsi Ibro10 hours ago
    i like it

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/25/2014 8:08:00 PM)

    Wise people

    Perfect poem by seasoned poet


    Shantanu Chindhade10 hours ago
    Tells you a sort of philosophy of sophisticated society.Job well done,
    Shantanu chindhade
    Comment +1
    nice poem


    adam fox10 hours ago
    good work :)
    Comment +1
    I understand the neurotic thought


    Tom Kennedy10 hours ago
    Hidden one thinks

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/24/2014 8:43:00 AM)

    Common wealth games

    Insightful.

    darran hardwick1 minute ago
    My favorite lines are:

    Let flags of all countries rise high
    With glory and honor to our delight
    Sportsmen can create special space

    Sans color, creed and race

    Well Done.
    D. H.
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    great concept


    Crisanto Acenas3 minutes ago
    great mind behind piece

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/23/2014 9:23:00 PM)

    Rosy flower

    Nice


    Matt Griffin3 minutes ago
    I like the use of charity and kindness is world so despair
    Comment +1
    Great use of description


    Jair Massiah2 minutes ago
    Lovely words used to describe this character Rosy. Is she human, goddess or flower? The poet paints it wonderfully and leaves it up to the interpretation of the reader. There are a few grammatical errors, but that is easily fixed! ;)

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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