hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 26,382 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 26,382 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/12/2013 2:17:00 AM)

    Ultra Violet
    Do you know the right thing to say? It can sound good, but still be a lie. Anger is true. It's you telling you that you need to listen to you. ^-^

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  • Gold Star - 26,382 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/10/2013 8:12:00 AM)

    Sinethemba Sindane Wow..it flows man..I dont even know who am I to judge such a great piece of work..wow!
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  • Gold Star - 26,382 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/9/2013 10:26:00 PM)

    Great Writing Style


    Frank Klein IVLess than a minute ago
    Though I do not agree with what you wrote, and it seems very ideological, I like how you expressed your heart with words in meter that flowed like smooth butter, and no hurdles to trip up the tongue in my mind. Therefore, I am pleased to give you 5 stars. Keep up the great style of writing.
    Comment +1
    Beautiful

  • Gold Star - 26,382 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/9/2013 10:26:00 PM)

    joseph harlacherLess than a minute ago
    I believe this poet believes in what he wrote
    without people like him we would not have grocery stores, effective post offices, or lawyers who care.
    keep on writing like this it moves what barricades our way to living in outer space. thanks.
    Comment +1
    ok

  • Gold Star - 26,382 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/2/2013 8:52:00 PM)

    Silvia Ferri Baloch likes this. Silvia Ferri Baloch It's more than terrible.... more than terrible... and i have no words to explain how much i am feeling bad about this all that is happening.... The Human Being is just destroying everything, and EVERYONE.... i feel shame to be part of this wrong so called HUMAN RACE.... about HUMANITY there is really nothing...7 hours ago · Edited · Unlike · 1

  • Gold Star - 26,382 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/2/2013 8:51:00 PM)

    Tribhawan Kaul and Mitos Jane Nepomuceno like this.

    Tribhawan Kaul Great....you have included all gamuts of war and its repercussions on the humanity.Particularly chemical warfare.
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  • Gold Star - 26,382 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/30/2013 9:27:00 AM)

    Great work!


    Jenny WaltersLess than a minute ago
    One of my BEST comments on this site was this, which I now pass on to you.
    Keep writing!
    You have talent! ;)
    Comment +1
    BEAUTIFUL

  • Gold Star - 26,382 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/26/2013 6:57:00 AM)

    Janevera Vincent Mehta! ur hands r made of poem. i love da.......t 25 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

  • Gold Star - 26,382 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/23/2013 9:07:00 PM)

    Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
    Yes, an egotistic proclivity as well as a regular agenda of opportinistity carries questionable artistic merit. However I must say I am a bit taken aback in seeing this stance coming from someone who recommends his own work in the box that is meant to recommend poems you have read by others & were especially moved by...between that, and the obvious need to copy & paste comments you have received on other sites than this one, has admittedly got me scratching my head a tad....BTW: I believe you would garner far more positive feedback if (1) You did not alienate 80% of this sites membership by posting many of your poems in hindi, and (2) You found it in your own ego to swallow pride and actually read & critique those who have been regular loyal supporters & commentors of your work, here, on PF, despite your polarising actions. Look, don't portray me or this feedback wrogly, as it is merely an I.M.O. based on personal observation. I realise that I have NOT been one of your regular supporters, and certainly have never expected to be one of yours. I hope you take my opine and advice in as positive a vein as it may not have came across, but was meant to be. Good Luck in your literary travels & Be Well ~FjR~

    jadia4708au
    today 07.08
    i replied him as under....

    I appreciate your frankness. Some of your observations are true in the sense they are pursued by me. It is not meant to attract any attention or to get rewards.

    It is time consuming yet it has to be performed because poems must reach to readers and know who all are reading with their comments.

    I never ask anyone to read or appreciate but i am honest in putting to readers.

    I love your criticism. read and criticize. Never build opinion in haste

  • Gold Star - 26,382 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/18/2013 10:04:00 PM)

    Rufus Henderson You write so well you have a gift
    17 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

At cross road

Never but at cross road,
Are we at cross road?
Is there any load?
Why not we meet?
Even at cross road.

Are we blood thirsty?
And care for no one,
who may come but none?

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