Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 204,629 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/10/2014 8:56:00 PM)

    Papa, pqapa

    Farhana Kaamilah Abthur-Rahim What beautiful daugter you have Hasmukh Mehta Sahab? ? ? She has your eyes, face and an innocently young smile and face. May she always be safe, happy and prosperoud - ameen.
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    Farhana Kaamilah Abthur-Rahim Would you remember me in your prayers too plz as I lost my dad nearly two years ago. I hope he still prays for me from his grave but if you also prayed, that would be a bonus. May your off-springs be the coolness of your eyes, the peace of your heart and good reputation that you enjoy forever and ever - ameen xx
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    Hasmukh Mehta Farhana i feel deeply moved, My eyes turn wet as and when i state, the daughters are real care taker, mover of pain and sooth sayer, it is our fourtune that we have daughter. I wish to pray for your dad in earnest, to my sincereity and best.. be loved by your late and rmemeber him. He may calling you often in dream
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/5/2014 9:36:00 PM)

    We dream
    Well written, interesting and truthful!


    Boe Parrish7 minutes ago
    I love the flow of the poem and the topic! I have reread the poem a couple of more times and thoroughly enjoyed it. You really have a talent Hasmukh

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/4/2014 10:45:00 AM)

    If God given us mouth and teeth to speak the truth, how will you know if the person is lying to?
    12 hours ago by Aira Betita to Worship the God

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/4/2014 10:45:00 AM)

    Worship the lord

    a fine maxim is to realize that all stand with equal opportunity before God, whatever one's race or station in life... as it states: 'God made out of one man every nation of men to live on the entire surface of the earth...' (Acts 17: 26)
    12 hours ago by robyn selters to Worship the God

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/4/2014 10:40:00 AM)

    Let our prayer

    beautifull


    Paul Anderson13 minutes ago
    continue to inspire, you can do it,

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/4/2014 3:41:00 AM)

    Cry with shame

    I Do Agree 100%

    Cheryl Chandler7 minutes ago
    Well Done

    Keep writing

    Peace and Blessings
    Comment +1
    amazing


    Dushyant BholaLess than a minute ago

    “I apologize” the culprit says
    Very safe escape route and ways
    Her wife says sorry and pleads
    What is left for us to read? ................ irrefutable truth. A great work for the society.
    Comment +1
    wow


    Akira Crease6 minutes ago
    great poem such a good style and flow great read

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/3/2014 8:39:00 PM)

    Love and nature

    Nice

    Michael Suraci8 minutes ago
    Totally agree and thank you for giving me something that's different for a change on this site

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/3/2014 1:37:00 AM)

    grand pa...

    sweet poetry


    Santana Etter2 minutes ago
    This is a very thoughtful poem
    Comment +1
    good

    David Myles3 minutes ago
    I fekt that
    Comment +1
    very nice

    Eddie DevlinLess than a minute ago
    this is a very nice poem. i like how you didn't make rhyming the key aspect but still managed to fit it in to create a poetic theme of lyric patterns.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/2/2014 8:37:00 PM)

    All people...

    I love the poem


    Angel Clarke6 minutes ago
    I like the rhymes and topic, it was we'll put together and I could feel the heart in it.
    Comment +1
    Can i cry?


    Mayra Garibo7 minutes ago
    I really liked this, you put a lot into this and it shows! ,3
    Comment +1
    good

    cassidy ritcher6 minutes ago
    Should take. More time.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/1/2014 8:59:00 PM)

    Doctor's role...save sir my........................

    anonymo magnifico20 minutes ago
    ...................mother

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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