hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 53,114 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Comments about hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/6/2014 7:23:00 PM)

    Seize the opportunity...tgis poem says to me, , that we dont take lufe seriously enough, we look past problems instead of work them out.. We are narrow minded when going through this journey called life..We should open our minds to whats going on around us.


    Brittany Pretlow10 minutes ago
    this is a very deep and real poem, it can speak to so many people and help them better themselves and their way of thinking.. you have a true talent

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  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/6/2014 7:23:00 PM)

    Seize the opportunity...tgis poem says to me, , that we dont take lufe seriously enough, we look past problems instead of work them out.. We are narrow minded when going through this journey called life..We should open our minds to whats going on around us.


    Brittany Pretlow10 minutes ago
    this is a very deep and real poem, it can speak to so many people and help them better themselves and their way of thinking.. you have a true talent

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/6/2014 1:47:00 AM)

    On their side...
    AN AMBASSADOR OF GOOD SPEECH, LOVE, AND PEACE


    Edward Wahbe3 minutes ago
    Men and women may cease to exist
    But not their pain and agony make exit
    It shall remain as permanent part
    We need to think fresh and start

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/5/2014 8:05:00 PM)

    Face reflects......

    Brilliant


    Shofi Ahmed8 minutes ago
    Tears do speak too, you are spot on.
    Comment +1
    It speaks


    Robert Roberts8 minutes ago
    After reviewing so many poems I see your's and see your pain, your joy... Through thick and thin you have been, and the flow was unbelievable. Very good poem and if i might add, keep doing what you're doing.

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/5/2014 6:39:00 AM)

    Simple, person..

    Great


    Amy Noborikawa19 minutes ago
    Love this poem. It talks of a simple man who does not pick fights, but is picked upon just because he does not appear to live up to someone else's standards. He does not understand the inner dislikes that people have. As much as he tries to figure out why, it is a game that he probably cannot win. I totally identify with this poem.

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/4/2014 5:31:00 AM)

    o, rose

    Tibjee Kachroo Excellent, Once Milton was asked to admire rose in a sentence he said A rose is a rose is a rose.
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  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/4/2014 5:30:00 AM)

    O, rose

    My dear Hasmukh Bhai, Your poem has something rare and really great It reminds of a reply given to Romeo by Juliet A rose by any other name would smell as sweet KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 58134 Jan 04,2014.....

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/3/2014 7:45:00 PM)

    Virtue is shadow, , , , , Fantastic


    Andy Everstine10 minutes ago
    We all need support...imagine what we could accomplish in this world.
    Comment +1
    very good

    malenky malenky12 minutes ago
    nice
    Comment +1
    very enjoyable


    Kate Noble13 minutes ago
    interesting concepts explored
    ...

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/3/2014 7:14:00 PM)

    Little significance

    Fantastic advice and rhyme scheme

    Stephanie Marilyn22 minutes ago
    I don't think there's anything I would change about this. It's relatable, wise, and understandable. Well expressed, good job. Nice reflecting.
    Comment +1
    Great Poem


    Elizabeth Waters24 minutes ago
    It was full of emotion.
    Comment +1
    cool

  • Gold Star - 9,229 Points Geetha Jayakumar (12/30/2013 1:08:00 PM)

    Poet Hasmukh Amathlal
    One of the talented and respected poet.
    His poems flows freely on variety of topics.
    Its a beautiful gift you are blessed with.
    Thank you supporting me in this journey of poems.
    May you keep on contributing many valuable poems to this poetic world.
    Wishing you all the best.
    God Bless!
    Congratulations Sir, On Dec 30,2013 today you have attained #301 among the top 500 poets in PH.
    Thank You!

Best Poem of hasmukh amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss(246) /500 #

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss(246) /500 #

Never Say Die

Never say die, you have no way
As you may also go any one day,
you may be laid on grounds as soul lost,
carried by those whom you hated most,

Immortal you are not so never word spell,
Name may remain but bade farewell,
nothing is permanent, all stands to vanish,
Game will be over when you are finish,

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