Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 189,175 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/17/2014 11:00:00 PM)

    With response.....

    without clouds and showers

    KR BALAKRISHNAN6 minutes ago
    This is clear, my poet.
    Comment +1
    ok, good

    BOSS LADY6 minutes ago
    now what''s the title?
    Comment +1
    Extremely trying, but the gift is there.


    Shane Minor1 minute ago
    I have no doubt that you don't lack the proper capability of becoming a great poet, I absolutely believe that your messages are extremely poetic, while your poetry itself needs some work... Instead of looking for rhythmic terms, instead deliver something that is as true inside as it is written on the out..... be completely honest- because its harder to lie, therefore it takes an extremely creative person to come up with material that doesn't speak truth... but that kind of poetry is better left in fictitious novels rather than expressed through poetry.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/17/2014 10:40:00 PM)

    For his own
    The flow is amazing!


    Chelsie Davis4 minutes ago
    I love how you can make it flow! Its amazing, I really do enjoy this poem, thank you!
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/17/2014 10:21:00 PM)

    Mirror may speak....Great words


    Anup Dutta14 hours ago
    Loved the thoughts
    Comment +1
    A Shakespearean eminem


    Karina Paxinos14 hours ago
    You conveyed a story with great emotion,
    The magic of failure is that we recognize it only because we have once (many times before succeeded)
    I love this!
    Comment +1
    good

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/17/2014 8:06:00 AM)

    Prefer corner...
    And prefer corner to be absent

    rasheeda kearney6 minutes ago
    Great work
    Comment +1
    corner to be


    sEan NoRtH6 minutes ago
    absent
    Comment +1
    I like it


    kashish chawla6 minutes ago
    gud job.deep thoughts
    Comment +1
    fine-craft of words


    George Charisma5 minutes ago
    okay

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/16/2014 9:07:00 AM)

    Full of compassion

    good

    KR BALAKRISHNAN20 minutes ago
    For the up and down musical resonance of this poem, no separate background music from the poet is required. The readers can very well enjoy the innate music in it.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/13/2014 8:05:00 PM)

    Holy concept....

    Savita Tyagi (6/12/2014 10: 46: 00 PM)
    I feel very much part......and start with daily routine to keep holy concept of divine. Beautiful lines and the only way to keep peace of mind in face of all the pain and suffering going around. Thank you so much. (Report)

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/13/2014 7:15:00 PM)

    With you all

    Robin Pauley Nice write too
    May 16 at 7: 53pm · Like · 1

    JayLou Santos I love yOur smile
    June 12 at 8: 43pm · Unlike · 1

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/13/2014 7:14:00 PM)

    With you all...

    Mv Venkataraman You look very young in this one, Let your beard be undone, You are extremely handsome, Your beard-less photo is welcome, Forgive me if I am offensive, Only a kind suggestion, I now give.
    7 hrs · Unlike · 1

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/13/2014 7:14:00 PM)

    With you all...

    Mv Venkataraman You look very young in this one, Let your beard be undone, You are extremely handsome, Your beard-less photo is welcome, Forgive me if I am offensive, Only a kind suggestion, I now give.
    7 hrs · Unlike · 1

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/13/2014 8:48:00 AM)

    I could reach

    Introspection

    KR BALAKRISHNAN17 minutes ago
    good poem.I consider this poet as a revolutionary poet in the sense that he has bravely adopted to create a robust structure in most of his poems, regardless of the theme dealt with. He has opened his own path of writing poetry, which has to be appreciated.
    Comment 0
    Nice poem


    Nita Varma17 minutes ago
    I liked the way in which you have expressed yourself

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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