hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 55,073 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 55,073 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/17/2013 7:44:00 PM)

    Hello dear


    Mohammad Jahoorul Islam carry on with these good poems...writings are real life...fresh like new winter vege....don't stop the pen...these are good advice too...these are good medicine...bless for all good utterances....
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  • Gold Star - 55,073 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/16/2013 9:23:00 PM)

    Wow


    Think of life.....

    Archie Voaklander8 minutes ago
    This is great good job. Loved the fourth paragraph.
    Comment +1
    Well written and positive. I like it.,


    stan brierly7 minutes ago
    Yes don't waste time nor days.
    Comment +1
    Nice


    Ahmad Al_khatat9 minutes ago
    Great epic

  • Gold Star - 55,073 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/16/2013 4:32:00 AM)

    Below vast sky

    An encounter of the magical kind ending in dreamland... what could be better!

    Roger Sampson4 hours ago
    The first verse got me hooked and the last left me smiling... the way it ought to be :)

  • Gold Star - 55,073 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/14/2013 11:44:00 PM)

    poetical basic


    Jean Smiley The Special Souls Born With A Unique, Spiritual, N Earthly, Cosmic Realm, Can Relate 2 Your Built N Source Of Widely Vast Knowledge. That Both Your Words N Picture Conotates.2 minutes ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

  • Gold Star - 55,073 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/14/2013 10:20:00 PM)

    offer prayer....

    A wonderful and sensible poem.


    Amir SamjiLess than a minute ago
    After reading it, I can say, we all shall think like that. God listen to everybody; with him nobody is favorite. The one who is sincere in his/her prayers; receive first preference. One thing I want to add, since we started judging each other, atmosphere fill with bias and enmity, it should be avoided!
    Comment +1
    I like the message.

    Nicholas Torino4 minutes ago
    I think people from all faiths can appreciate this message. Well done!

  • Gold Star - 55,073 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/13/2013 5:51:00 AM)

    Next to almighty...

    Re: Next to almighty
    by MichaelFirewalker on Tuesday, November 12,2013 (17: 49: 52)

    I do not think this poet's English is very clear...ergo, this poem is not clear, but quite difficult to understand...perhaps I am wrong, but it seems to be describing a very autocratic, controlling, and harsh man, who, despite his apparently unpleasant personality characteristics, is nevertheless loved by the family he dominates...


    Re: Next to almighty (Score: 1)
    by jadia4708au on Wednesday, November 13,2013 (06: 48: 18)
    thanks for your harsh comment..

    evaluate father in your English and post me as I shall love to your brilliance and capacity.

    regards

  • Gold Star - 55,073 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/10/2013 10:28:00 AM)

    Symbol of good reelation

    An opening up of a long suppressed feeling with trepidation of a back lash!


    Ancient Mariner3 hours ago
    There are so many times when we are afraid of expressing feelings that is always there lurking beneath the surface. This is one such time when after gathering enough courage the poet expresses his feelings for a love that may be the forbidden fruit that he is reaching out for! Or maybe an old love that he never expressed long time ago but when the paths cross again gets the strength!

    Very touching


    barbara greaves3 hours ago
    You never know until you try what reception you will get

    Awsome

    Faheem Jawaid4 hours ago

    Well written and beautifully expressed poem with innate flow in thought and in verses as well.
    I would appreciate your reviews of my poems Mr. Mehta.

  • Gold Star - 55,073 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/10/2013 10:25:00 AM)

    Symbol of good relation

    An opening up of a long suppressed feeling with trepidation of a back lash!


    Ancient Mariner3 hours ago
    There are so many times when we are afraid of expressing feelings that is always there lurking beneath the surface. This is one such time when after gathering enough courage the poet expresses his feelings for a love that may be the forbidden fruit that he is reaching out for! Or maybe an old love that he never expressed long time ago but when the paths cross again gets the strength!

  • Gold Star - 55,073 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/8/2013 4:29:00 PM)

    open up hands

    Debra Stanza Melody We owe many things for our brethren
    Who live with hardship and need something to be done
    They are not asking any favor
    Yet it is our privilege and honor to offer..... we have to take care of our own, and our own is all human life. I enjoyed your piece very much. Peace
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  • Gold Star - 55,073 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/1/2013 9:09:00 PM)

    Dipawali....

    A truly heart-felt spiritual eye-opener


    Luke Wilson15 minutes ago
    A truly heart-felt spiritual eye-opener.

    This is the kind of poetry we can use universally for true guiding inspiration.

    So brilliantly written, an instant favorite. An Ode to you, sir.
    Comment +1
    I like your style

    robert micon9 minutes ago
    You have found an interesting way of transcribing about the Festival of Lights. It works.
    Comment +1
    Intriguing


    Professor Frost17 minutes ago
    This quite the poem. I appreciated the craft and structure of it.
    Thanks for sharing, keep writing.

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Miss ', I Really Miss(246) /500 #

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
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Ragging

Universities and campus prepare their grave,
In the guise of education they put front brave,
Bur on ground of morality they cave in,
Line drawn clear but education thin,

Great fall in standard and knowledge lagging,
More efforts on fashion and thrust on ragging,
Many loose their lives on name of flogging,
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