hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 32,918 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 32,918 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/3/2013 7:48:00 AM)

    Great Greater Greatest


    Vijaya Sarathi Putcha4 minutes ago
    Wonderful writing. You are my lovely Poet.
    Comment +1
    It's good

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  • Gold Star - 32,918 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/29/2013 10:49:00 PM)

    Beautiful. Great.


    Vijaya Sarathi Putcha1 minute ago
    With humility I submit You are a great Poet

  • Gold Star - 32,918 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/28/2013 11:35:00 PM)

    Re: What kind of flower? (Score: 1)
    by piph on Saturday, September 28,2013 (18: 48: 47)
    the world i do not think has never missed the beauty
    only the men in the world who would like to claim to own this mystery

    vivid writing
    it seems maybe you are translating into english, forgive me if i am wrong
    the sometimes broken form seems to lend to this poems worth
    thank you

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    Re: What kind of flower? (Score: 1)
    by jadia4708au on Sunday, September 29,2013 (00: 33: 26)
    never translating. it is poem coming from heart.5000 poem sso far and all have earned acclaim. it is new to you as the form is new to u

  • Gold Star - 32,918 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/26/2013 10:56:00 PM)

    clm down, calm down....The parts I understood were very good


    Regina Lee3 minutes ago
    The parts I understood were very good. I understand the struggle of people and relationships.
    The fear of being too slow or to fast to assist.
    The feelings of being blocked by unclear words, or opposite actions.
    learned a new word = spate
    I assume the reference to blow as in a whale, with sink in the next line referring again to nautical, sea terminology, so I don't understand previous review reference to gender preference mentioned by Donald Rogerson

  • Gold Star - 32,918 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/26/2013 9:05:00 PM)

    I love to hear....
    Re: I love to hear (Score: 1)
    by Pujakins on Thursday, September 26,2013 (18: 51: 16)
    This writer is consistent in his exhortations to all and I appreciate his vivid spirit and beautiful heart. A very loving effort. Thank you. Warmly, Tasha

  • Gold Star - 32,918 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/26/2013 9:31:00 AM)

    What is ac?


    Steven Avolio1 hour ago
    I enjoyed reading this poem. It is heart felt and flowes well. The poor we will always have with us.Thanks for shairing. Keep them coming.

  • Gold Star - 32,918 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/26/2013 7:50:00 AM)

    real student

    Great! hazel Shirley6 hours ago It is worth reading and My respect always remain for the Educationist...Well written Mehtaji!

  • Rookie - 59 Points Rinku Tiwari (9/25/2013 4:58:00 AM)

    you are good poem i think you can be a popular poet

  • Gold Star - 32,918 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/23/2013 9:44:00 PM)

    For self obsession....great writing


    Johnson Vdev11 minutes ago
    This poem is concieved well... written well and as has brought out all thye feelings the poet wanted to express...very deep thoughts....thanks for sharing

  • Gold Star - 32,918 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/23/2013 6:50:00 AM)

    Hasmukh your poem reminds me of the environmental cause a famous Axlepino poetess believes in, her name is Zhivka Baltadzhieva. Can I share your beautiful poem to read? Thank you so much!
    (Maria) Alicia

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Ragging

Universities and campus prepare their grave,
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Bur on ground of morality they cave in,
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Great fall in standard and knowledge lagging,
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