hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 67,392 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2014 4:53:00 PM)

    Try to judge
    Wise words

    Abbey Gillespie8 minutes ago
    These words so wise and noble. They show passion and express that has been put into the poem. Beautiful and truthful peace

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  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2014 4:15:00 PM)

    Masterly writing.Facts of life well composed


    Shantanu Chindhade7 hours ago
    Writing of high order.Philosophical but with real truth,
    Shantanu chindhade
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    Good stlye

    Asia Crockett7 hours ago
    Decent good thoughts

    To change without, first change within...

    Anthony V7 hours ago
    Only two problems; week should be weak and date should be a word which rhymes with guide. Otherwise, answering the question of morality; how does one go from an evil person to one of good character? Simply put: Remember deeds done and amend them.

  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/8/2014 7:41:00 PM)

    Not all....A spiritual poem with firm faith and discipline.


    Amir Samji21 minutes ago
    After reading your poem, I can say, we forgot, honesty, and piety, that was jewels of societies. This is the reason we see chaos worldwide, and lies are prevailing over the Truth.
    Comment +1
    piously Simple

    prema das32 minutes ago
    preachers preach
    laymen listen
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    Don't talk to me about God


    Mary-Elin Rollins34 minutes ago
    no disrespect meant, but I gave up on him a long time ago because he fed me to the dogs and never did anything to help my family

  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/8/2014 6:43:00 PM)

    From 1 to ten...Some Girl
    You might find this interesting The core of Krishnamurti's teaching is contained in the statement he made in 1929 when he said 'Truth is a pathless land'. Man cannot come to it through any organisation, through any creed, through any dogma, priest or ritual, not through any philosophical knowledge or psychological technique. He has to find it through the mirror of relationship, through the understanding of the contents of his own mind, through observation and not through intellectual analysis or introspective dissection. Man has built in himself images as a fence of security - religious, political, personal. These manifest as symbols, ideas, beliefs. The burden of these images dominates man's thinking, his relationships and his daily life. These images are the causes of our problems for they divide man from man. His perception of life is shaped by the concepts already established in his mind. The content of his consciousness is his entire existence. This content is common to all humanity. The individuality is the name, the form and superficial culture he acquires from tradition and environment. The uniqueness of man does not lie in the superficial but in complete freedom from the content of his consciousness, which is common to all mankind. So he is not an individual. Your poem made me think of this concept :)

    Wtevr
    I love it. It makes me think.

  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/6/2014 8:03:00 PM)

    with positive attitude...
    Date & Time: 1/6/2014 4: 23: 00 PM
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    Poem: 37632050 - With Positive Attitude
    Member: marvin brato
    Comment: Faith is kinda a positive attitude... believing for good things in life is an example! Thought provoking sentiments. Thanks for sharing sir.

  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/6/2014 7:24:00 PM)

    tgis poem says to me, , that we dont take lufe seriously enough, we look past problems instead of work them out.. We are narrow minded when going through this journey called life..We should open our minds to whats going on around us.


    Brittany Pretlow10 minutes ago
    this is a very deep and real poem, it can speak to so many people and help them better themselves and their way of thinking.. you have a true talent

  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/6/2014 7:23:00 PM)

    Seize the opportunity...tgis poem says to me, , that we dont take lufe seriously enough, we look past problems instead of work them out.. We are narrow minded when going through this journey called life..We should open our minds to whats going on around us.


    Brittany Pretlow10 minutes ago
    this is a very deep and real poem, it can speak to so many people and help them better themselves and their way of thinking.. you have a true talent

  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/6/2014 7:23:00 PM)

    Seize the opportunity...tgis poem says to me, , that we dont take lufe seriously enough, we look past problems instead of work them out.. We are narrow minded when going through this journey called life..We should open our minds to whats going on around us.


    Brittany Pretlow10 minutes ago
    this is a very deep and real poem, it can speak to so many people and help them better themselves and their way of thinking.. you have a true talent

  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/6/2014 1:47:00 AM)

    On their side...
    AN AMBASSADOR OF GOOD SPEECH, LOVE, AND PEACE


    Edward Wahbe3 minutes ago
    Men and women may cease to exist
    But not their pain and agony make exit
    It shall remain as permanent part
    We need to think fresh and start

  • Gold Star - 67,392 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/5/2014 8:05:00 PM)

    Face reflects......

    Brilliant


    Shofi Ahmed8 minutes ago
    Tears do speak too, you are spot on.
    Comment +1
    It speaks


    Robert Roberts8 minutes ago
    After reviewing so many poems I see your's and see your pain, your joy... Through thick and thin you have been, and the flow was unbelievable. Very good poem and if i might add, keep doing what you're doing.

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