Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 214,703 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/3/2014 8:39:00 PM)

    Love and nature

    Nice

    Michael Suraci8 minutes ago
    Totally agree and thank you for giving me something that's different for a change on this site

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/3/2014 1:37:00 AM)

    grand pa...

    sweet poetry


    Santana Etter2 minutes ago
    This is a very thoughtful poem
    Comment +1
    good

    David Myles3 minutes ago
    I fekt that
    Comment +1
    very nice

    Eddie DevlinLess than a minute ago
    this is a very nice poem. i like how you didn't make rhyming the key aspect but still managed to fit it in to create a poetic theme of lyric patterns.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/2/2014 8:37:00 PM)

    All people...

    I love the poem


    Angel Clarke6 minutes ago
    I like the rhymes and topic, it was we'll put together and I could feel the heart in it.
    Comment +1
    Can i cry?


    Mayra Garibo7 minutes ago
    I really liked this, you put a lot into this and it shows! ,3
    Comment +1
    good

    cassidy ritcher6 minutes ago
    Should take. More time.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/1/2014 8:59:00 PM)

    Doctor's role...save sir my........................

    anonymo magnifico20 minutes ago
    ...................mother

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/1/2014 8:38:00 PM)

    Doctor's role
    Excellent


    Just A Hack Named Guilty4 minutes ago
    The role of the doctor, bring him to a human level for better or worse...
    Comment +1
    i like it

    preston cochranLess than a minute ago
    doctors are important. i am very glad that a person would want to devote so many years of their to learn how to help me. here! here!

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2014 9:23:00 PM)

    Learn lot more

    good


    Allie AllenLess than a minute ago
    it reminds me of a book
    Comment +1
    Great form, great imagery


    Elana KahnLess than a minute ago
    I love your writing! It really makes you think and feel.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2014 8:34:00 PM)

    Real embrace

    Wow


    Shyanna GastonLess than a minute ago
    True potential! I love it! You got some talent there
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2014 11:20:00 AM)

    Love has not changed

    Amazing


    Dushyant Bhola1 minute ago
    Beautiful theme nicely penned. Like it.
    Comment +1
    Beautiful

    Mrinmoy Choudhury5 minutes ago
    A good write - love defined nicely - I liked it.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2014 11:18:00 AM)

    like fish

    Lets face reality, right?


    Bre Robinson13 minutes ago
    Death is inevitable, follow what you believe and dream of, don't allow others to pressure you into thinking otherwise, we are all so different and unique.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/29/2014 10:09:00 AM)

    IN deep troubles

    superb

    Larry Stallings4 minutes ago
    how can they be driven away
    Comment +1
    Nice

    Leila McLeod4 minutes ago
    You pose some thought provoking questions, great poem :)
    Comment +1
    Well done.

    " Doc" Rule2 minutes ago
    Your fear and unrest is not without reason. well done, Hasmukh.
    Comment +1
    i like it

    preston cochran2 minutes ago
    how indeed.

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

God, Bless Only Those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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