Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 231,712 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/17/2014 7:19:00 PM)

    Rise for all

    Rise for all- - - - -Wake up call- - -


    Subhashchandra Adhav10 hours ago
    Reflect ignorance with nature's relation- - - - - -I feel this is conveniently adopted or accepted ignorance in the name of progress and sometimes ignored ignorance for the sake of development with nature's as well as human relation too- - - - - - -I fully subscribe to the views of the poet- - - - - -
    Very thought provoking and insightful piece of work- - - - - Great job done.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/17/2014 9:16:00 AM)

    Wisdom to be wise

    Re: Wisdom to be wise (Score: 1)
    by zbird on Wednesday, July 16,2014 (12: 24: 52)
    if only the world leaders would listen to your words and at least hear that last verse. too much hatred and fighting and death when all we want is peace.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/17/2014 9:13:00 AM)

    Rise for all

    I am so in tune on how this poet states how people uses animals to fullfill many semblances on how man justifies how and what man has done to emminate how we are destructing the nature's wealth.

    Evelyn Carter4 minutes ago
    In total agreement how the poet feels how many different cultures feel about how loose existence as we all live life on earth.
    Comment +1
    I LIKE THE POEM


    jennifer daughtrey8 minutes ago
    IT WAS REALLY GOOD POEM

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/12/2014 2:48:00 AM)

    Come along
    Even if you are wrong

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/12/2014 12:35:00 AM)

    Time to waste..

    like this alot

    Betty-Gwen WalkerLess than a minute ago
    i thought this was a great way to to describe everyday life. basically everything is time and role. not who we are but what we are. not who i am, but what ethnicity i might be, or religion. i like your perspective

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/11/2014 9:47:00 AM)

    It is difficult

    You're awesome!

    Kenneth HarrisonLess than a minute ago
    You're very talented and please never stop writing!
    Creatively, KEN
    Comment +1

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/10/2014 8:56:00 PM)

    Papa, pqapa

    Farhana Kaamilah Abthur-Rahim What beautiful daugter you have Hasmukh Mehta Sahab? ? ? She has your eyes, face and an innocently young smile and face. May she always be safe, happy and prosperoud - ameen.
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    Farhana Kaamilah Abthur-Rahim Would you remember me in your prayers too plz as I lost my dad nearly two years ago. I hope he still prays for me from his grave but if you also prayed, that would be a bonus. May your off-springs be the coolness of your eyes, the peace of your heart and good reputation that you enjoy forever and ever - ameen xx
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    Hasmukh Mehta Farhana i feel deeply moved, My eyes turn wet as and when i state, the daughters are real care taker, mover of pain and sooth sayer, it is our fourtune that we have daughter. I wish to pray for your dad in earnest, to my sincereity and best.. be loved by your late and rmemeber him. He may calling you often in dream
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/5/2014 9:36:00 PM)

    We dream
    Well written, interesting and truthful!


    Boe Parrish7 minutes ago
    I love the flow of the poem and the topic! I have reread the poem a couple of more times and thoroughly enjoyed it. You really have a talent Hasmukh

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/4/2014 10:45:00 AM)

    If God given us mouth and teeth to speak the truth, how will you know if the person is lying to?
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/4/2014 10:45:00 AM)

    Worship the lord

    a fine maxim is to realize that all stand with equal opportunity before God, whatever one's race or station in life... as it states: 'God made out of one man every nation of men to live on the entire surface of the earth...' (Acts 17: 26)
    12 hours ago by robyn selters to Worship the God

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Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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Your smile speaks a lot
As if having fought
The journey with crusade
To meet the dead end

Yes, life is our teacher
That offers

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