Re: Go away (Score: 1)
by Ego_Rocks2x on Sunday, June 10,2012 (10: 54: 49)
You are so wise. All of your poems are really good, and i really liked this one. It makes sense. I feel the meaning of your words and they touch me on such a different level that I can't describe it. I'm telling you this as a friend: Never stop writing.
Somebody tells that children are the enemies of our previous birth! I don't really know. Some of them for sure, do not return love. You observe everything around, and put it in writing. Really exciting
U K Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur, Kerala
One of the holy object....Jyotsna Gandhi thank you so much Hasmukh Mehta ji i am so much thankful for such humble and lovely words which have certainly came out of your heart. i am glad to see your generosity... thanks alot :)
8 hours ago · Like
Ekaterina Polishchuk when i read the poem: long or short i always enjoyed the melody it sounds (since my childhood) . and i tell if the melody flows, the poem is successfull. i mean it has its own mystic energy to give us a massage. i like thi poem because of its rhyme structure and contest, it sonds bright.
about an hour ago · Like.... dead end