Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 229,158 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2014 9:23:00 PM)

    Learn lot more


    Allie AllenLess than a minute ago
    it reminds me of a book
    Comment +1
    Great form, great imagery

    Elana KahnLess than a minute ago
    I love your writing! It really makes you think and feel.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2014 8:34:00 PM)

    Real embrace


    Shyanna GastonLess than a minute ago
    True potential! I love it! You got some talent there

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2014 11:20:00 AM)

    Love has not changed


    Dushyant Bhola1 minute ago
    Beautiful theme nicely penned. Like it.
    Comment +1

    Mrinmoy Choudhury5 minutes ago
    A good write - love defined nicely - I liked it.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2014 11:18:00 AM)

    like fish

    Lets face reality, right?

    Bre Robinson13 minutes ago
    Death is inevitable, follow what you believe and dream of, don't allow others to pressure you into thinking otherwise, we are all so different and unique.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/29/2014 10:09:00 AM)

    IN deep troubles


    Larry Stallings4 minutes ago
    how can they be driven away
    Comment +1

    Leila McLeod4 minutes ago
    You pose some thought provoking questions, great poem :)
    Comment +1
    Well done.

    " Doc" Rule2 minutes ago
    Your fear and unrest is not without reason. well done, Hasmukh.
    Comment +1
    i like it

    preston cochran2 minutes ago
    how indeed.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/29/2014 9:53:00 AM)

    Such an endevour

    Colleen Courtney (6/29/2014 9: 49: 00 AM)
    This is such a wonderful poem Mehta! You've included in this write all of the things which make PoemHunter such an amazing site. I too have made many friends here and a few who I speak with daily. It is so beautiful to reach out to others and learn about their cultures and lives. And as you said, a great place to get feedback from others and offer our own encouragement and insights. Love this piece! (Report)

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/29/2014 2:48:00 AM)

    I feel best

    Sir (Hasmukh Mehta) , I personally thank you for this enlightening poem and your stanza of the poem “You have heart and soul—To respond with inner call—Try to listen and carefully think—It may always uplift and not sink” brings a realization in us. Respected!

    Eagam Khaling, Darjeeling
    Jun 29,2014

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/28/2014 7:04:00 AM)

    The faith is not.....
    Oh brave wanderer...

    Sidanne Solomon4 hours ago
    ...I am reminded of a quote: Do not follow the path of others, but instead blaze your own trail and leave sparks in your wake. Go fort, brave soul, and lead the life you have infinitely imagined!

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/24/2014 7:37:00 PM)

    God is staying....

    I love it

    Kamran Minder19 minutes ago
    Comment +1

    Lilly Emery 3 minutes ago
    Very good writing
    Comment +1
    I appreciate your outlook.

    Kendon Hoover18 minutes ago
    I like this poem. It's very positive and I highly appreciate your outlook on how people should live their lives. I don't necessarily believe in God, but I will tip my hat to you sir. You have my respect.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/21/2014 9:14:00 PM)

    Vision to find.....
    Top class visionary.

    John Ravenscroft13 minutes ago
    Spiritual, most deep and forever honest, intuitive.
    Comment +1

    Constance Kabereck23 minutes ago
    your word were vividley expressed i liked it
    Comment +1

    Qoutes Homemade25 minutes ago

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

Never Say Die

Never say die, you have no way
As you may also go any one day,
you may be laid on grounds as soul lost,
carried by those whom you hated most,

Immortal you are not so never word spell,
Name may remain but bade farewell,
nothing is permanent, all stands to vanish,
Game will be over when you are finish,

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