hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/18/2012 8:00:00 AM)

    6: 26pm

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/4/2012 9:23:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 2/4/2012 8: 45: 00 AM
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    Poem: 29647232 - I am sleepless
    Member: George Bernard Hough
    Comment: I have read the three poems that you asked me to and find them very deep and personal. I am sleepless I wasn`t sure whether to see it as a partner having left or having died. But either way a thought provoking poem.
    I think you must be the most prolific poet I have come across!
    Keep up the good work and Best Wishes

  • Jeff Nesvig (1/31/2012 9:01:00 AM)

    I have been reading your poetry and what I have read is so..from the heart and I can almost look around the place that your poetrys vision has painted.


  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/30/2012 6:45:00 AM)

    tahiratu love
    35 years old - female - Ghana
    You're so handsome that every woman would want to hold hands with you someday. Looking into your eyes alone, shows me a beautiful world. And i guess I'll be the luckiest woman getting to talk to you. If i were to present your picture in heaven, most of th

  • Lawrence H (1/8/2012 10:42:00 AM)

    Dear Sir Mehta,
    You are a good poet with a vast knowledge of poetry and understanding with wisdom how a poem should be written..within your very own voices in your poems..

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/9/2011 8:37:00 PM)

    I like the element of straightforwardness in your poetry. It is not easy to write such lines, especially in poetry form...it just comes naturally for you.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/9/2011 8:37:00 PM)

    I like the element of straightforwardness in your poetry. It is not easy to write such lines, especially in poetry form...it just comes naturally for you.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/9/2011 8:36:00 PM)

    patspoems re: Thank you jadia your work is always a pleasure to read. God...

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/8/2011 7:23:00 PM)

    Dear Sir, ,
    I'm fine and what about you, sir?
    Oh, I'm so glad now for you've invited me to comment on your poem, ,
    Do you remember or not but once you did post me a message saying that you've to keep your attention in your poems and not in these ratings and they are merely some ratings! ! ! but that time I was in the 4th position in the world by popularity..
    So I could write some good poems for me... And I could find a great deal of satisfaction in my writings! ! !
    Also I could find a lot of things from your poems in what I commented but did I comment it all with what then came to my mind...but they were all my heartfelt comments! ! !
    I hope you may enjoy my comments..
    And If time permits you, please read and comment on my poems too, ,
    I'd like to get comments from a poet who have written over 2000 poems but most of everything, you are from My Country! ! ! !
    May God bless you more, ,
    With Love and Peace
    VIPINS PUTHOORAN! ! ! ! ! !

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/7/2011 8:49:00 PM)

    From : Jose Lu (Perth Australia; Male; 22)
    To : Mehta hasmukh amathalal
    Date Time : 12/7/2011 7: 30: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
    Subject : Re: Friend

    Thank you,

    I have seen some of your poems.There's many of it, see..More than 2000 poems just will keep me around for a year.

    Great poems, I must say.You're one of some poets I know that still use the rhyme, very good indeed.I like the style very much.

    Hope you're in a good state, with a good health and have a great day.

    Cordially, keep writing.I shall wait for another poem,


God, bless only those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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