hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 53,114 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Comments about hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/30/2013 11:28:00 PM)

    In many places....

    wow

    Ecstacy Furubayashi19 minutes ago
    I apologize you are going through that. As they grow, they never really know why we did what we did is because we lovve them. From when they were a baby and always saying I love you, growing to teens and arguing. But you must not blame yourself. If we get hard on them its because it hurt us so much cause we want them to be better. But we can't shield them from everything. But we can talk to them and do our best to help them achieve goals.
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  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/30/2013 6:45:00 PM)

    little child

    I loved it!


    Kenji Z7 minutes ago
    Now I dont have any children of my own, but I have nieces and nephews. Watching them grow, you step in and correct the wrongs but in the end some mistakes have to be made in order to for them to grow and learn as their own. I dont mean to offend any parents, its just my take on it. Loved how your words painted a beautiful yet grim picture. Such is life.
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    Wow

    Faith Redfield14 minutes ago
    This is really strong: 3
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    Great! !


    Dina Yakout16 minutes ago
    Thank you for sharing this great poem that resonates with kindness and humanity :)
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    Father's love for his child


    Ifeanyi Nnadi15 minutes ago
    Yes girl child pose little problem
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    Needs more work

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/30/2013 7:01:00 AM)

    Peace can conquer...




    Janay Griffin9 minutes ago
    This poem is amazing. I understood the eternal message the first few sentences.

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/30/2013 6:54:00 AM)

    Little child.....

    Salute to you


    Vijaya Sarathi Putcha33 minutes ago
    Wow. As usual. You have expressed very great.

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/29/2013 8:28:00 PM)

    Send off.....smart


    meagan w10 hours ago
    you can tell from the poem that you are an intelligent person

    i like the line tears of happiness role out as a play on the common phrase roll out it gives the line a double meaning

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/25/2013 9:26:00 AM)

    Everyday I miss...

    I miss her yet I see her every day.


    Steven Avolio7 minutes ago
    This poem is filled with beauty and heart felt images. It is moving and moves with a good cadence. Well done and KUDOS...
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    Well written

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/23/2013 9:44:00 PM)

    My only child

    Great!


    Danielle Erin2 minutes ago
    I love the use of the child here, and the way you alluded to faith, but never had to mention it to get your point across.

    My favourite line was, my feet were dancing.
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    good child


    Shakil Ahmed Baliyavi2 minutes ago
    well children are treasure and always child in the eyes of parents, well done poem

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/23/2013 9:42:00 PM)

    MY only child.....Your child is you most wonderful gift to the world

    Steven Gress1 minute ago
    Thank you for sharing your poem.

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/23/2013 9:37:00 PM)

    It speaks truth.......Ahh the beuty of art. Herein is the beauty of language.


    Lynn Petty23 minutes ago
    Is there a little Tagore here? This is something he would write.
    Very thoughtful. Good construction. Good language,

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/18/2013 7:21:00 PM)

    Simple home...
    hussain smelter
    believe me Dear, it seems that your every poem is written on me, i have a very big house on 44000 square feet, garden, guest house, only one daughter in class 5, when she is in school, my feelings............ some time cry loudly, but again thanks God, billions of people have not all these

    i can keep on writing on this but you have God gifted ability to say all these in one stanza, be blessed with complete health

Best Poem of hasmukh amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss(246) /500 #

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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God, Bless Only Those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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