hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 98,667 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 98,667 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/25/2014 6:45:00 PM)

    Mitos Jane Nepomuceno I could only repeat what Rohani Daud said
    'You're a great poet.. Never fade a passion and knowledge Mr Hasmukh
    - Manzil Rajput 'nice sir ji '

    ... Pls send me the English version :)))
    ... I believe them, You really are! ! !
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  • Gold Star - 98,667 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/21/2014 7:12:00 AM)

    face the bullet

    Much Appreciated

    Syed Mudasir37 minutes ago
    I respect both the individuals like Mahatma Gandhiji as well as Martin Luther; But there is no comparison in terms of Gandhi, he is an individual and a great personality. This poem had brilliant imagery which talks about the loss of the last century and there is no worst tragedy then Gandhiji's Assasination, he was a pillar of Asia... A great poem which is very honest and we all know great people are either disappeared or assasinated.... Much Appreciated
    Comment +1
    A clear point made

    Steven Curphey32 minutes ago
    Well the second political poem i have just reviewed on the bounce. This one maybe doesn't read as fluently as I have a preference for, however, if you are making a political point why not say it straight up like this one as we have plenty of politicians who don't say what we want them to and who hide behind masks in speaking terms, so well done for saying it like it is.
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    Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago
    this real and has nothing to do with politics. people should fight for themselves now
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  • Gold Star - 98,667 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/18/2014 5:27:00 PM)

    Poetry is no joke......Rick R
    Well put I am in awe that those with English as a second language can create very good English poems I have enough trouble with one language

    Well taken sir..words of wisdom from a great poet himself! Thank you for the guidelines!

  • Gold Star - 98,667 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/16/2014 6:57:00 PM)

    just behave, , , , , ,

    My dear Hasmukh Bhai,

    I had a similar experience recently while giving a talk to young children. I stopped the noise by reciting a devotional song of Purandara Dasa. Its English vesion is the one given below:

    “Make no noise, make no noise

    I will fall at your feet, be wise

    Those who are asleep might wake up

    And with questions might come up.”

    Had your ‘Madame, ’ known Kannada she would have certainly made use of this song. I know not which ‘Madame’ you are referring to. I hope she is not Madame Bovary of Flaubert.

    KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343
    Jan 16,2014

  • Gold Star - 98,667 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/11/2014 10:08:00 AM)

    When I look.....en I Look At by Hansmukh Mehta is a nice poetic endeavour to present the universe as the poet sees it.

    Kesavan Subramanian8 minutes ago
    It is a good Nature poem. I like it.
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    Keek Ruiz21 minutes ago
    I enjoyed reading your perspective on how you see life.

  • Gold Star - 98,667 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2014 5:29:00 PM)

    I shall....transformation is a true change- righteousness is a free gift.. strive for excellence, do not condemn.

    Jo Anna Mike Simmons5 minutes ago
    Very good.... His light is always with you, if you mess up it is okay, He forgives. When you spend time with God and in His Word, you have a relationship with Him and it is easier to go through life. :)))))))))))))
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    C Castro7 minutes ago
    Very nice message.. Keep up the good work

  • Gold Star - 98,667 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2014 5:25:00 PM)

    Heartless as human.....So wonderful

    krishna Middela11 minutes ago
    We express our views, though they understand, some are keen to observe the grammar.after english is not my mother tongue.neither they know my mother tongue to share.
    Let beauty of expression be appreciated.
    But your grammar is perfect.
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    Greg Obrecht12 minutes ago
    This. Is. Awesome.

  • Gold Star - 98,667 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2014 4:53:00 PM)

    Try to judge
    Wise words

    Abbey Gillespie8 minutes ago
    These words so wise and noble. They show passion and express that has been put into the poem. Beautiful and truthful peace

  • Gold Star - 98,667 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2014 4:15:00 PM)

    Masterly writing.Facts of life well composed

    Shantanu Chindhade7 hours ago
    Writing of high order.Philosophical but with real truth,
    Shantanu chindhade
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    Good stlye

    Asia Crockett7 hours ago
    Decent good thoughts

    To change without, first change within...

    Anthony V7 hours ago
    Only two problems; week should be weak and date should be a word which rhymes with guide. Otherwise, answering the question of morality; how does one go from an evil person to one of good character? Simply put: Remember deeds done and amend them.

  • Gold Star - 98,667 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/8/2014 7:41:00 PM)

    Not all....A spiritual poem with firm faith and discipline.

    Amir Samji21 minutes ago
    After reading your poem, I can say, we forgot, honesty, and piety, that was jewels of societies. This is the reason we see chaos worldwide, and lies are prevailing over the Truth.
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    piously Simple

    prema das32 minutes ago
    preachers preach
    laymen listen
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    Don't talk to me about God

    Mary-Elin Rollins34 minutes ago
    no disrespect meant, but I gave up on him a long time ago because he fed me to the dogs and never did anything to help my family

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