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hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/5/2012 8:23:00 PM)


    Lines flow meticulously in your poems! Correct rhymes and novel ideas. All the best

    u k atiyodi, kandangali, payyanur, kerala 670307
    July 05,2012

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/2/2012 3:45:00 AM)

    Re: Slow poison (Score: 1)
    by vexations on Sunday, July 01,2012 (10: 20: 30)
    Powerful words. | Delete this message

    Karen Sinclair(7/2/2012 3: 26: 00 AM)
    So true... the powers that be (i am reacting to this write in my own country's sorry state of affairs) , they sit in their glory holes stroking their own egos forgetting their promises to the masses with no due care and attention... they honestly do believe (i think) that they are above all explanations once they are in power and its sickening that this goes on century after century (worldwide)
    A lot of members of parliament here (within the last year) have been found to be fixing their taxes and us the public have been paying for second homes, wives or girlfriends getting paid as secretaries and all sorts of shenanigans, well thats how i understand it.
    Your write is so relevant to not just one country, its a worldwide sickening accepted behaviour of the wealthy using their pulling power and contacts to just get an easy ride at everyone else's expense...
    Sorry for my vent but your write just got me going...slow poison indeed

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/28/2012 12:06:00 AM)

    Owoyale Oluwafemi I am your fan: -)

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/24/2012 11:54:00 PM)

    Sirajali Kalima (leeds United Kingdom; Male; 34)
    Mehta hasmukh amathalal
    Date Time:
    6/23/2012 7: 17: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
    no black and white love poem
    a very beautiful and well written poem. it is a very profound poem but very nice. keep on writing.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/24/2012 8:52:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem, I called attention to choose your maturity, speaks of a beautiful person who thinks and has a beautiful content within your being, kiss, Henry

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/19/2012 10:33:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/19/2012 7: 31: 00 PM
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    Poem: 31577461 - His presence
    Member: M. J Darracott
    Comment: Thank you for inviting me into your world of poetry. I am glad that I came. I am of the opinion that poets are brothers in mankind as much as soldiers in combat. I see that the thoughts of a poet are shared worldwide. I would strongly urge you to continue writing and I will continue to look for more of your poems in my search for answers to Life as well. Again, thank you.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/13/2012 7:38:00 PM)

    miser by nature......

    I appreciate your sentiment in your poem. Yet it does not stop me thinking, isn't it Geeta that says, Do your karma, and leave the worry about its fruits to the One, Almighty. God is the One and only who will recognise our efforts, our sincerity in them efforts and reward us according and more by His Grace. Anything more is only a bonus...

    I can only speak for myself, and I do read your poems, and at times, your posts inspire me to write on a different aspect, a different perspective, of the theme you have written on.

    Thanks for sharing your thoughts on MI. Regards.

    Safiyyah, UK
    June 13,2012


  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/17/2012 10:14:00 PM)

    Oladipo Kehinde Paulposted toHasmukh Mehta
    6 hours ago
    Birthday rotates round the year
    It belongs to everybody
    It takes one back to the memory of time
    Every body celebrate
    And felicitate with you
    As theirs on the way
    You have birthday mates
    Let’s share the cake
    Today belongs to you
    Someone is being celebrated
    Out there
    As we celebrate in here
    The day you become a child again
    With lovely wishes
    We celebrate to be happy
    All the time
    Silver and gold I don’t have
    Your angel will bring your
    Birthday gifts to you
    You are special
    You truly care and share
    People like you are rare
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/5/2012 8:32:00 AM)

    nadezhda hope
    private message I'm fine. Thank you! I love your poems. God gave you a great talant!

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/25/2012 5:09:00 PM)

    A wonderful poem I only wish folks understood, thank you so much for your words, they bring me great peace

    Dear Hasmukh Bhai, Your experience is valuable to the readers. We rarely find it in the poems of others. K.H.Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343 Mar 25,2012

I lived not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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