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hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Jeff Nesvig (1/31/2012 9:01:00 AM)

    I have been reading your poetry and what I have read is so..from the heart and I can almost look around the place that your poetrys vision has painted.

    Jeff.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/30/2012 6:45:00 AM)

    tahiratu love
    35 years old - female - Ghana
    You're so handsome that every woman would want to hold hands with you someday. Looking into your eyes alone, shows me a beautiful world. And i guess I'll be the luckiest woman getting to talk to you. If i were to present your picture in heaven, most of th

  • Lawrence H (1/8/2012 10:42:00 AM)

    Dear Sir Mehta,
    You are a good poet with a vast knowledge of poetry and understanding with wisdom how a poem should be written..within your very own voices in your poems..

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/9/2011 8:37:00 PM)

    I like the element of straightforwardness in your poetry. It is not easy to write such lines, especially in poetry form...it just comes naturally for you.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/9/2011 8:37:00 PM)

    Deletecyclopseven
    I like the element of straightforwardness in your poetry. It is not easy to write such lines, especially in poetry form...it just comes naturally for you.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/9/2011 8:36:00 PM)

    patspoems re: Thank you jadia your work is always a pleasure to read. God...

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/8/2011 7:23:00 PM)

    Dear Sir, ,
    I'm fine and what about you, sir?
    Oh, I'm so glad now for you've invited me to comment on your poem, ,
    Do you remember or not but once you did post me a message saying that you've to keep your attention in your poems and not in these ratings and they are merely some ratings! ! ! but that time I was in the 4th position in the world by popularity..
    So I could write some good poems for me... And I could find a great deal of satisfaction in my writings! ! !
    Also I could find a lot of things from your poems in what I commented but did I comment it all with what then came to my mind...but they were all my heartfelt comments! ! !
    I hope you may enjoy my comments..
    And If time permits you, please read and comment on my poems too, ,
    I'd like to get comments from a poet who have written over 2000 poems but most of everything, you are from My Country! ! ! !
    May God bless you more, ,
    With Love and Peace
    VIPINS PUTHOORAN! ! ! ! ! !

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/7/2011 8:49:00 PM)

    From : Jose Lu (Perth Australia; Male; 22)
    To : Mehta hasmukh amathalal
    Date Time : 12/7/2011 7: 30: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
    Subject : Re: Friend

    Thank you,

    I have seen some of your poems.There's many of it, see..More than 2000 poems just will keep me around for a year.

    Great poems, I must say.You're one of some poets I know that still use the rhyme, very good indeed.I like the style very much.

    Hope you're in a good state, with a good health and have a great day.

    Cordially, keep writing.I shall wait for another poem,

    Jose

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/7/2011 8:48:00 PM)

    Hello Mehta. I am new to this website and do not visit it too often. Thank you for your message and your trust in me to comment. My comments will not be of literary value, but only what I felt when I read it. I printed them and will read them when everything is quiet around me, but I do want to say this...reading them made me sad and am I correct to say it is your own life you are talking about? Or am I too stupid to hear? Can I send them to a friend of mine in Zimbabwe? He is also a poet and I always said he must publish his poems, but being at a University, time is limited
    Whenever this old lady has time, I am going to read your poems as it seems there are a lot.
    Keep well friend!

  • Ramesh Rai (12/2/2011 3:57:00 AM)

    Sir, i bow my head before u. hw did i miss u, really i astonish. i must go trough ur all poems.i also like to get ur comments on my poems.
    with kindest regards
    ramesh rai

Never say die

Never say die, you have no way
As you may also go any one day,
you may be laid on grounds as soul lost,
carried by those whom you hated most,

Immortal you are not so never word spell,
Name may remain but bade farewell,
nothing is permanent, all stands to vanish,
Game will be over when you are finish,

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