hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 53,114 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/8/2013 1:31:00 AM)

    With importance...... Re: With importance (Score: 1)
    by Seshat_Nibada on Monday, October 07,2013 (22: 43: 05)
    You know Jadia, this would have sounded great in Sanskrit. There are glimmers of something very poetic here, which I can appreciate. The rhyming did not feel forced and the Brahmin (arrogance) sounded more like translated from Bengali but captured something of the vedic consciousness just the same.

    I felt the power of renunciation and surrender to shakti throughout.

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  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/8/2013 1:28:00 AM)

    I shall remain mother

    A voice for the mothers who face similar situations..The world over!

    Philo Francis4 minutes ago
    Grateful thanks for your depictions so deep, so strong, so powerful!
    Thank you Hasmukh.
    Comment +1
    history or fact

    Guilty Pleasure13 minutes ago
    Just a powerful poem, Well Done.

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/7/2013 12:53:00 AM)

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    hussain smelter
    Really touched by your personality & the poetry, wish & pray for your long life with complete health & prosperity.
    Warm regards

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/4/2013 6:37:00 PM)

    It pays occasionally

    Excellent you have hit the nail on the head-well done.

    stan brierly11 minutes ago
    You have a good style and I liked the poem.
    Comment +1

    malenky malenky13 minutes ago
    i love it good one
    Comment +1
    Very good

    Sean Barker12 minutes ago
    words of wisdom

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/4/2013 6:24:00 PM)

    Simple entity.....

    i loved it

    El Bayoumy El Samanoudy19 minutes ago
    That I am simple entity is the base of the whole universal
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    It was really moving

    Ryan Hill19 minutes ago
    i really like the pauses it creates within the poem for the reader to reflect on the words you have written. I like the idea of the poem talking about the soul so genuinely and freely aswell as the words you have used to describe the way you feel about life. You could feel that it was genuine which is what i personally love about reading poems like this. I think you could work on expanding the ideas that you have about the soul within the poem. but overall it was really really good.

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/4/2013 6:20:00 PM)

    If you think about it. You could of dug more deeply into your emotions. Open up.Let it all hang out.

    Tony Adamo20 minutes ago
    If you think about it. You could of dug more deeply into your emotions. Open up.Let it all hang out.
    Comment +1
    it's good

    Kam Shea Avandi22 minutes ago
    it is a good i am poem i would like it more if it was more directed at the world, the reader...bc than i could feel the emotion too

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/3/2013 6:35:00 PM)

    The sea waves, , , , , Gibz Rising suffering due to our mad acts is a beautiful lesson from love, , but are we realy to blame for the devil manipulating minds disguised in another relm? the devil created all religion and wants humans to believe we all have free will so we blame our selves for the works of him, , this is not the same devil as ever described - its a entity that came to earth long ago, , from a far away galaxy, lost and alone it took refuge on earth and it only knows fear, , it has no other feelings, , , but likes to try to laugh, , this entity came with another, , a positive entity, its brother, , or sister you may even say, , man does not have free will once we have totaly manifested negativity, , it can enter your vessel and take over fully at any givin time if you are on a negative frequency, , all media is his tools to have fun, , believe only what your spirit is telling you when you are on a positive frequency, , mother earth is working with the devils brother/sister/positive to protect the planet and over throw the devil, , for the devil will not co-operate and is just a lost puppy full of thriving fear, , fear not the open words of the wise owl, , and understand them, , , for a war is coming, , and the devil may not get to be apart of it - if it continues to disrupt efforts, , i will have no choice but to destroy it myself
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    Sheila Ann Anderson If we do not protect and nurture Mother Earth, she will no longer be able to protect us and allow us to live upon her
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  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/3/2013 7:48:00 AM)

    Great Greater Greatest

    Vijaya Sarathi Putcha4 minutes ago
    Wonderful writing. You are my lovely Poet.
    Comment +1
    It's good

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/29/2013 10:49:00 PM)

    Beautiful. Great.

    Vijaya Sarathi Putcha1 minute ago
    With humility I submit You are a great Poet

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/28/2013 11:35:00 PM)

    Re: What kind of flower? (Score: 1)
    by piph on Saturday, September 28,2013 (18: 48: 47)
    the world i do not think has never missed the beauty
    only the men in the world who would like to claim to own this mystery

    vivid writing
    it seems maybe you are translating into english, forgive me if i am wrong
    the sometimes broken form seems to lend to this poems worth
    thank you

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    Re: What kind of flower? (Score: 1)
    by jadia4708au on Sunday, September 29,2013 (00: 33: 26)
    never translating. it is poem coming from heart.5000 poem sso far and all have earned acclaim. it is new to you as the form is new to u

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