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hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/25/2011 9:08:00 PM)

    Re: What is she looking at? (Score: 1)
    by ravingbeauty on Monday, April 25,2011 (17: 29: 19)
    profound and totally awesome

    2 person liked.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/4/2011 12:55:00 AM)

    True, life is a mini-circus, where one has to practice tight-rope-walking with a stick on hand to balance both sides without falling down. It is easy to swim along with the current, but difficult to go up the river swimming against the current. You have brought these points with clear solutions in your meaningful poem. Good.



    Rajaram Ramachandran, Juhu, Mumbai
    Feb 04,2011

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/4/2010 9:23:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 8/4/2010 8: 09: 00 PM
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    Poem: 24093698 - A reality alone
    Member: Dwi Utami
    Comment: He you not alone friend.
    Reality alone everyone also have these feeling.
    Ya this make me want sitting near you.and remove your feeling alone...G(o_o) D
    good idea..10+



    Date & Time: 8/4/2010 7: 53: 00 PM
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    Poem: 24003469 - A day new one
    Member: Antonio Liao
    Comment: A resurrected call of change...pushes for a while in our dreamy eyes...
    such clever poet of the century.....you got the best for our thought
    to see, more beyond than to live of what is today...thank you and
    God bless...a 10 +++

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/1/2010 9:12:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 8/1/2010 9: 09: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23598370 - A change that was never
    Member: Okan Emanet
    Comment: Really inspirational in every respect..



    Date & Time: 8/1/2010 9: 08: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23859466 - A change for while
    Member: Okan Emanet
    Comment: A splendid poem really deserving to be made song...



    Date & Time: 8/1/2010 9: 07: 00 AM
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    Poem: 24038935 - A cause for pain
    Member: Okan Emanet
    Comment: A breathtakingly excellent characterization on the structure of love and resulting pain... I really congratulate you on such a wonderful work.... a real 10 from me...



    Date & Time: 8/1/2010 7: 51: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23948453 - A birth of poet
    Member: Apoet Bangla
    Comment: His heart pains for others agony
    H doesn’t work it for gain or money

    It is perhaps the ultimate utterance to establish the necessity of a poets birth.
    Well-written. Enjoyed.

    Regards,
    pranab

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/31/2010 10:19:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 7/31/2010 9: 21: 00 PM
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    Poem: 24038935 - A cause for pain
    Member: Danielle Pongi
    Comment: This poem? my favourite(:
    thanks for posting.



    Date & Time: 7/31/2010 9: 19: 00 PM
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    Poem: 24087649 - All of my love
    Member: David Beckham
    Comment: Was it love or mere infatuation?
    Was it only eagerness for continuation?

    ...True love is in the heart. Really easy to say but hard to some. But we can never stop searching. True love never gives up.



    Date & Time: 7/31/2010 9: 16: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23922601 - A calm river flow
    Member: David Beckham
    Comment: You can hear from distance very gently...I grew up by the lake and that line evokes great memories...That's the beauty of poetry, that everyone might find different ideas from just one piece. Thanks for sharing.



    Date & Time: 7/31/2010 9: 11: 00 PM
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    Poem: 24066972 - A known enemy
    Member: David Beckham
    Comment: Today doesn’t belong to me or not in my hand
    The memory clearly plays as true friend
    I shall not make it known to the world
    I wish only to become part and come in your fold

    ....A good expression of openness and honest invitation to a friend. It lends itself to forgiveness and accepting one another. Good job



    Date & Time: 7/31/2010 9: 10: 00 PM
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    Poem: 24035209 - A real friendship
    Member: Roselyn Magbojos
    Comment: Your poem pictures out the true meaning of real friendship. It really reflects on your personality, a very faithful pal indeed.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/24/2010 7:53:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 7/24/2010 1: 44: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23927983 - After all
    Member: Hans VR
    Comment: A very important message in this poem. I think we are slowly moving to a more caring wrorld. It takes time, but once we reach a certain number of people really caring it may accelerate very fast.



    Date & Time: 7/24/2010 1: 11: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23984747 - An unusual meeting
    Member: Hans VR
    Comment: There is a lot of feeling in this poem. Great use of images and very smooth rhyme. Good work,



    Date & Time: 7/24/2010 12: 58: 00 AM
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    Poem: 24011496 - A time to think
    Member: Hans VR
    Comment: Very nice indeed to sit down and reflect.
    I really believe all of us should do this more often, just take some time to think. The reflection in this poem seems to be far reaching. It made me think a bit about the famous song, I did it my way. I throughly enjoyed reading the poem, reflection is all important. Thanks for sharing this wonderful write.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/23/2010 7:47:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 7/23/2010 7: 35: 00 AM
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    Poem: 24004619 - All eyes
    Member: Unwritten Soul
    Comment: wow this is so worth to ponder! Everyone may ask 1000 question, anything that God creates can question all of them..and everything make us close to Him if we always think! ..
    That make this poem so worth, stand with it's own value..love it, thanks for sharing

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/22/2010 4:12:00 AM)

    • 21 Jul
    • I like the intent of the poem here. But many of the lines seemed forced for the rhyme. Writing the meaning through the rhyme will help the contextual flow of the lines. And a stronger internal rhythm to the lines will be accomplished as well. Just a thought. A set rhyme scheme will also set a pace to the music of the rhymes as well. A poet friend// RH Peat on Any aim
    From Ron Peat 21 Jul
    • Interesting rhymes. But I'm not so sure poetry is nice words at all. This is one of big misnomers about writing poetry. Poetry is meant to enflame or move readers toward new concepts, physically, emotionally, & spiritually which means a poem needs internal conflict of some sort in its turning point, which is later conjoined in some way with the opening of the poem, when the closure on the poem is finally made. Stephen Crane's 'black rider' poems from the 1800's are haunting, scary, fearful and fearless. Yet they reveal much about people and various kinds of closed consciousness. (a knell) is a bell ringing for a death, a for whom the bell tolls kind of a thing. I think you mean 'kneel.' I misspell words all the time and I really appreciate it when someone brings it to my attention. I hope you are the same way. a poet friend/RH Peat on A poetic world
    From Ron Peat 21 J

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/22/2010 4:12:00 AM)

    • Flow of musical words from the pen o f poet give message of all kinds! on A real poem
    From T A Ramesh 21 Jul
    • it is all you wrote on A real poem
    From carol 21 Jul
    • All these thing and sometimes anger and rage. Poems, for me are the language of the heart. on A real poem
    From Paddy Martin 21 Jul
    • A THOUGHTFUL POEM WELL WRITTEN! -Raj on A real poem
    From RAJ NANDY 21 Jul
    • methinks you've answered the question, imaginative write... on A real poem
    From wojja fink 21 Jul

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/21/2010 9:31:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/21/2010 9: 14: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23992682 - A warm welcome
    Member: Lady Grace
    Comment: You have touched me like high speed wind
    I was flying with emotions and couldn’t find
    It was immense pleasure to hold on in grip
    Tears almost rolled on cheeks but couldn’t weep

    As you closed on to paste the warm welcome
    The whole world seemed to have nearly come
    I was wondering what it was all about
    It was slow whispering and not big shout...

    i like the presentation of this..it is full of sense...brief, short and rhymed is nicer dear than lengthy poem...sometimes, due of too much words, the thought is already lost so, better like this...hope u r fine....very nice presentation...



    Date & Time: 7/21/2010 7: 53: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23987484 - A real poem
    Member: Ken E Hall
    Comment: What is a real poem indeed...you have just wrote one hasmukh, a diifferent slant on poems great idea well put ++++10 regard

Never say die

Never say die, you have no way
As you may also go any one day,
you may be laid on grounds as soul lost,
carried by those whom you hated most,

Immortal you are not so never word spell,
Name may remain but bade farewell,
nothing is permanent, all stands to vanish,
Game will be over when you are finish,

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