hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 39,068 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 39,068 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/20/2013 6:56:00 PM)

    Dr. Joseph W. Schnapp, Jr.8 hours ago
    This is one of the first poems I've had the pleasure to rate & read that addresses the religion of Islam and the many millions if not billions whom follow this great path...

    The abovesaid God, The Creator, The Great Spirit, First-mover and so on and so forth goes by many different languages (tongues) yet, if you take the time to really investigate these religions- nay: every religion the world has known, there run amongst and betwixt them certain truths and teachings... many of our Christian folk would readily recognize the so-called golden rule which is in essence: Do unto others as you would have them do to you. and any other number of comparable sayings and teachings...

    One minor religion oft overlooked are the Bahai's whom follow The Bob which was their most recent prophet whom was incarcerated and died in Arab prisons in the late 1800's sadly.

    So it is with absolute equity that I rate this submitted poem four (4) stars this day and primarily due to its underlying message,

    Cheers,

    -Joe

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  • Gold Star - 39,068 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/20/2013 6:39:00 AM)

    the images.....A real poem


    Bijim Dominic14 minutes ago
    like to read the poem, poet shares his views with heart, like to read the poem, all the best
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    Temple


    Jawahar Gupta15 minutes ago
    A place to live in with pride.
    But Now
    Time Changes
    With the Changing Scenario
    No one love antique
    But Novel latest models, ,
    A Very heart touching
    And speaking the real mind,
    I Love the poem, ,
    The way it moves
    so swiftly,
    Comment 0
    Very Nice


    Ruchika Sharma18 minutes ago
    This one was good...
    Comment 0
    Wonderful

    Dana Moon18 minutes ago
    lovely thought to finish on
    Comment +1
    Beautiful...


    Liril Machaiah14 minutes ago
    Your emotions as you got back to your ancestral place is very well depicted in this poem! Am sure it was nostalgic for you...

  • Gold Star - 39,068 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/16/2013 6:36:00 PM)

    A wish for peace


    Lisa Spears3 days ago
    I sincerely like the message of this poem. Who would not wish for peace? I think on the last line maybe you mean Let skirmishes and bloodshed have no cause? I guess I'm confused on how the last line is worded. I would want skirmishes and bloodshed to have much pause vs. little pause. If skirmishes and bloodshed are paused, then they are not happening. Thanks for your message of peace my fellow poet.

  • Gold Star - 39,068 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/16/2013 6:35:00 PM)

    Love the country...shows patriotism


    Maira Javaid3 days ago
    lovely

  • Gold Star - 39,068 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/12/2013 2:17:00 AM)

    T.ravindran.
    one of the most serious and likable poem i ever read in this site. congradulations. love & regards surya

  • Gold Star - 39,068 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/12/2013 2:17:00 AM)

    Ultra Violet
    Do you know the right thing to say? It can sound good, but still be a lie. Anger is true. It's you telling you that you need to listen to you. ^-^

  • Gold Star - 39,068 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/10/2013 8:12:00 AM)

    Sinethemba Sindane Wow..it flows man..I dont even know who am I to judge such a great piece of work..wow!
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  • Gold Star - 39,068 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/9/2013 10:26:00 PM)

    Great Writing Style


    Frank Klein IVLess than a minute ago
    Though I do not agree with what you wrote, and it seems very ideological, I like how you expressed your heart with words in meter that flowed like smooth butter, and no hurdles to trip up the tongue in my mind. Therefore, I am pleased to give you 5 stars. Keep up the great style of writing.
    Comment +1
    Beautiful

  • Gold Star - 39,068 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/9/2013 10:26:00 PM)

    joseph harlacherLess than a minute ago
    I believe this poet believes in what he wrote
    without people like him we would not have grocery stores, effective post offices, or lawyers who care.
    keep on writing like this it moves what barricades our way to living in outer space. thanks.
    Comment +1
    ok

  • Gold Star - 39,068 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/2/2013 8:52:00 PM)

    Silvia Ferri Baloch likes this. Silvia Ferri Baloch It's more than terrible.... more than terrible... and i have no words to explain how much i am feeling bad about this all that is happening.... The Human Being is just destroying everything, and EVERYONE.... i feel shame to be part of this wrong so called HUMAN RACE.... about HUMANITY there is really nothing...7 hours ago · Edited · Unlike · 1

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