Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 284,560 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/10/2014 8:56:00 PM)

    Papa, pqapa

    Farhana Kaamilah Abthur-Rahim What beautiful daugter you have Hasmukh Mehta Sahab? ? ? She has your eyes, face and an innocently young smile and face. May she always be safe, happy and prosperoud - ameen.
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    Farhana Kaamilah Abthur-Rahim Would you remember me in your prayers too plz as I lost my dad nearly two years ago. I hope he still prays for me from his grave but if you also prayed, that would be a bonus. May your off-springs be the coolness of your eyes, the peace of your heart and good reputation that you enjoy forever and ever - ameen xx
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    Hasmukh Mehta Farhana i feel deeply moved, My eyes turn wet as and when i state, the daughters are real care taker, mover of pain and sooth sayer, it is our fourtune that we have daughter. I wish to pray for your dad in earnest, to my sincereity and best.. be loved by your late and rmemeber him. He may calling you often in dream
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/5/2014 9:36:00 PM)

    We dream
    Well written, interesting and truthful!


    Boe Parrish7 minutes ago
    I love the flow of the poem and the topic! I have reread the poem a couple of more times and thoroughly enjoyed it. You really have a talent Hasmukh

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/4/2014 10:45:00 AM)

    If God given us mouth and teeth to speak the truth, how will you know if the person is lying to?
    12 hours ago by Aira Betita to Worship the God

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/4/2014 10:45:00 AM)

    Worship the lord

    a fine maxim is to realize that all stand with equal opportunity before God, whatever one's race or station in life... as it states: 'God made out of one man every nation of men to live on the entire surface of the earth...' (Acts 17: 26)
    12 hours ago by robyn selters to Worship the God

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/4/2014 10:40:00 AM)

    Let our prayer

    beautifull


    Paul Anderson13 minutes ago
    continue to inspire, you can do it,

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/4/2014 3:41:00 AM)

    Cry with shame

    I Do Agree 100%

    Cheryl Chandler7 minutes ago
    Well Done

    Keep writing

    Peace and Blessings
    Comment +1
    amazing


    Dushyant BholaLess than a minute ago

    “I apologize” the culprit says
    Very safe escape route and ways
    Her wife says sorry and pleads
    What is left for us to read? ................ irrefutable truth. A great work for the society.
    Comment +1
    wow


    Akira Crease6 minutes ago
    great poem such a good style and flow great read

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/3/2014 8:39:00 PM)

    Love and nature

    Nice

    Michael Suraci8 minutes ago
    Totally agree and thank you for giving me something that's different for a change on this site

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/3/2014 1:37:00 AM)

    grand pa...

    sweet poetry


    Santana Etter2 minutes ago
    This is a very thoughtful poem
    Comment +1
    good

    David Myles3 minutes ago
    I fekt that
    Comment +1
    very nice

    Eddie DevlinLess than a minute ago
    this is a very nice poem. i like how you didn't make rhyming the key aspect but still managed to fit it in to create a poetic theme of lyric patterns.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/2/2014 8:37:00 PM)

    All people...

    I love the poem


    Angel Clarke6 minutes ago
    I like the rhymes and topic, it was we'll put together and I could feel the heart in it.
    Comment +1
    Can i cry?


    Mayra Garibo7 minutes ago
    I really liked this, you put a lot into this and it shows! ,3
    Comment +1
    good

    cassidy ritcher6 minutes ago
    Should take. More time.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/1/2014 8:59:00 PM)

    Doctor's role...save sir my........................

    anonymo magnifico20 minutes ago
    ...................mother

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Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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Admit Misses

Admit misses

Yes, you must ask
And start
The day with simple prayer
With earnest offers

Just bow down
And make it know

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