hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 54,246 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/26/2013 10:56:00 PM)

    clm down, calm down....The parts I understood were very good


    Regina Lee3 minutes ago
    The parts I understood were very good. I understand the struggle of people and relationships.
    The fear of being too slow or to fast to assist.
    The feelings of being blocked by unclear words, or opposite actions.
    learned a new word = spate
    I assume the reference to blow as in a whale, with sink in the next line referring again to nautical, sea terminology, so I don't understand previous review reference to gender preference mentioned by Donald Rogerson

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  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/26/2013 9:05:00 PM)

    I love to hear....
    Re: I love to hear (Score: 1)
    by Pujakins on Thursday, September 26,2013 (18: 51: 16)
    This writer is consistent in his exhortations to all and I appreciate his vivid spirit and beautiful heart. A very loving effort. Thank you. Warmly, Tasha

  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/26/2013 9:31:00 AM)

    What is ac?


    Steven Avolio1 hour ago
    I enjoyed reading this poem. It is heart felt and flowes well. The poor we will always have with us.Thanks for shairing. Keep them coming.

  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/26/2013 7:50:00 AM)

    real student

    Great! hazel Shirley6 hours ago It is worth reading and My respect always remain for the Educationist...Well written Mehtaji!

  • Rookie - 102 Points Rinku Tiwari (9/25/2013 4:58:00 AM)

    you are good poem i think you can be a popular poet

  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/23/2013 9:44:00 PM)

    For self obsession....great writing


    Johnson Vdev11 minutes ago
    This poem is concieved well... written well and as has brought out all thye feelings the poet wanted to express...very deep thoughts....thanks for sharing

  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/23/2013 6:50:00 AM)

    Hasmukh your poem reminds me of the environmental cause a famous Axlepino poetess believes in, her name is Zhivka Baltadzhieva. Can I share your beautiful poem to read? Thank you so much!
    (Maria) Alicia

  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/20/2013 6:56:00 PM)

    Dr. Joseph W. Schnapp, Jr.8 hours ago
    This is one of the first poems I've had the pleasure to rate & read that addresses the religion of Islam and the many millions if not billions whom follow this great path...

    The abovesaid God, The Creator, The Great Spirit, First-mover and so on and so forth goes by many different languages (tongues) yet, if you take the time to really investigate these religions- nay: every religion the world has known, there run amongst and betwixt them certain truths and teachings... many of our Christian folk would readily recognize the so-called golden rule which is in essence: Do unto others as you would have them do to you. and any other number of comparable sayings and teachings...

    One minor religion oft overlooked are the Bahai's whom follow The Bob which was their most recent prophet whom was incarcerated and died in Arab prisons in the late 1800's sadly.

    So it is with absolute equity that I rate this submitted poem four (4) stars this day and primarily due to its underlying message,

    Cheers,

    -Joe

  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/20/2013 6:39:00 AM)

    the images.....A real poem


    Bijim Dominic14 minutes ago
    like to read the poem, poet shares his views with heart, like to read the poem, all the best
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    Temple


    Jawahar Gupta15 minutes ago
    A place to live in with pride.
    But Now
    Time Changes
    With the Changing Scenario
    No one love antique
    But Novel latest models, ,
    A Very heart touching
    And speaking the real mind,
    I Love the poem, ,
    The way it moves
    so swiftly,
    Comment 0
    Very Nice


    Ruchika Sharma18 minutes ago
    This one was good...
    Comment 0
    Wonderful

    Dana Moon18 minutes ago
    lovely thought to finish on
    Comment +1
    Beautiful...


    Liril Machaiah14 minutes ago
    Your emotions as you got back to your ancestral place is very well depicted in this poem! Am sure it was nostalgic for you...

  • Gold Star - 54,246 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/16/2013 6:36:00 PM)

    A wish for peace


    Lisa Spears3 days ago
    I sincerely like the message of this poem. Who would not wish for peace? I think on the last line maybe you mean Let skirmishes and bloodshed have no cause? I guess I'm confused on how the last line is worded. I would want skirmishes and bloodshed to have much pause vs. little pause. If skirmishes and bloodshed are paused, then they are not happening. Thanks for your message of peace my fellow poet.

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