hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 99,158 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 99,158 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/3/2014 7:45:00 PM)

    Virtue is shadow, , , , , Fantastic

    Andy Everstine10 minutes ago
    We all need support...imagine what we could accomplish in this world.
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    very good

    malenky malenky12 minutes ago
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    very enjoyable

    Kate Noble13 minutes ago
    interesting concepts explored

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  • Gold Star - 99,158 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/3/2014 7:14:00 PM)

    Little significance

    Fantastic advice and rhyme scheme

    Stephanie Marilyn22 minutes ago
    I don't think there's anything I would change about this. It's relatable, wise, and understandable. Well expressed, good job. Nice reflecting.
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    Great Poem

    Elizabeth Waters24 minutes ago
    It was full of emotion.
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  • Gold Star - 9,262 Points Geetha Jayakumar (12/30/2013 1:08:00 PM)

    Poet Hasmukh Amathlal
    One of the talented and respected poet.
    His poems flows freely on variety of topics.
    Its a beautiful gift you are blessed with.
    Thank you supporting me in this journey of poems.
    May you keep on contributing many valuable poems to this poetic world.
    Wishing you all the best.
    God Bless!
    Congratulations Sir, On Dec 30,2013 today you have attained #301 among the top 500 poets in PH.
    Thank You!

  • Gold Star - 99,158 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/17/2013 7:44:00 PM)

    Hello dear

    Mohammad Jahoorul Islam carry on with these good poems...writings are real life...fresh like new winter vege....don't stop the pen...these are good advice too...these are good medicine...bless for all good utterances....
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  • Gold Star - 99,158 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/16/2013 9:23:00 PM)


    Think of life.....

    Archie Voaklander8 minutes ago
    This is great good job. Loved the fourth paragraph.
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    Well written and positive. I like it.,

    stan brierly7 minutes ago
    Yes don't waste time nor days.
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    Ahmad Al_khatat9 minutes ago
    Great epic

  • Gold Star - 99,158 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/16/2013 4:32:00 AM)

    Below vast sky

    An encounter of the magical kind ending in dreamland... what could be better!

    Roger Sampson4 hours ago
    The first verse got me hooked and the last left me smiling... the way it ought to be :)

  • Gold Star - 99,158 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/14/2013 11:44:00 PM)

    poetical basic

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  • Gold Star - 99,158 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/14/2013 10:20:00 PM)

    offer prayer....

    A wonderful and sensible poem.

    Amir SamjiLess than a minute ago
    After reading it, I can say, we all shall think like that. God listen to everybody; with him nobody is favorite. The one who is sincere in his/her prayers; receive first preference. One thing I want to add, since we started judging each other, atmosphere fill with bias and enmity, it should be avoided!
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    I like the message.

    Nicholas Torino4 minutes ago
    I think people from all faiths can appreciate this message. Well done!

  • Gold Star - 99,158 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/13/2013 5:51:00 AM)

    Next to almighty...

    Re: Next to almighty
    by MichaelFirewalker on Tuesday, November 12,2013 (17: 49: 52)

    I do not think this poet's English is very clear...ergo, this poem is not clear, but quite difficult to understand...perhaps I am wrong, but it seems to be describing a very autocratic, controlling, and harsh man, who, despite his apparently unpleasant personality characteristics, is nevertheless loved by the family he dominates...

    Re: Next to almighty (Score: 1)
    by jadia4708au on Wednesday, November 13,2013 (06: 48: 18)
    thanks for your harsh comment..

    evaluate father in your English and post me as I shall love to your brilliance and capacity.


  • Gold Star - 99,158 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/10/2013 10:28:00 AM)

    Symbol of good reelation

    An opening up of a long suppressed feeling with trepidation of a back lash!

    Ancient Mariner3 hours ago
    There are so many times when we are afraid of expressing feelings that is always there lurking beneath the surface. This is one such time when after gathering enough courage the poet expresses his feelings for a love that may be the forbidden fruit that he is reaching out for! Or maybe an old love that he never expressed long time ago but when the paths cross again gets the strength!

    Very touching

    barbara greaves3 hours ago
    You never know until you try what reception you will get


    Faheem Jawaid4 hours ago

    Well written and beautifully expressed poem with innate flow in thought and in verses as well.
    I would appreciate your reviews of my poems Mr. Mehta.

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God, Bless Only Those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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