Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 230,207 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Richard Beevor Richard Beevor (5/24/2014 10:12:00 AM)

    excellent poems sir, I wonder if you could read some of mine and give me your advice please, I would like to improve, thank you, I am http: //www.poemhunter.com/richard-allen-beevor/

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/18/2014 12:20:00 AM)

    I turn 67...

    Re: I turn sixty seven (Score: 1)
    by maryanns on Saturday, May 17,2014 (12: 12: 02)
    From another one maintaining in time I must applaud this lovely piece of thoughtful artwork - and wish you a very happy birthday, too!

    Love that last stanza; good for you! Smile

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/15/2014 8:45:00 AM)

    Story of desertion....

    chills chills wow

    Joshua Bissot6 minutes ago
    i totally understand my mother has gone through that same loss and i feel so bad for her it deeply hurts her and by virtue hurts me: (thank you for sharing such a personal introspective poem it is really good

    i recently attempted suicide and was found basically found dead -
    here is my recollection of where i was. http: //www.poetry.com/poems/1257276-content-n-resolve-

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/15/2014 7:31:00 AM)

    Re: Quite happy (Score: 1)
    by b.b.w.(Tulsa) on Wednesday, May 14,2014 (22: 20: 05)
    These are honest emotions well expressed. There is an old proverb:
    The best reply to ignorance is silence. Don't be discouraged. Keep
    up the good work.

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    Re: Quite happy (Score: 1)
    by jadia4708au on Thursday, May 15,2014 (08: 29: 38)
    Oh sir so nice of you. I am guest poet here. readers keep distance from me here. I still give best of me to them.. regards

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/15/2014 6:50:00 AM)

    By behavior...

    Re: By behavior (Score: 1)
    by b.b.w.(Tulsa) on Wednesday, May 14,2014 (22: 07: 53)
    I enjoyed your poem. It's good to keep in mind that there are true
    rhymes and half (or inexact) rhymes. Also, rhyme schemes can be
    irregular. Experienced poets sometimes alternate true rhymes and
    half rhymes and use irregularity for effect. To call this schizo shows
    ignorance of poetic devices. Keep up the good work.

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    Re: By behavior (Score: 1)
    by jadia4708au on Thursday, May 15,2014 (07: 49: 10)
    so encouraging words sir. Poets need to reform n say what his soul really wants to convey instead of keeping confined to rhymes or no rhymes.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/14/2014 9:01:00 PM)

    Simple exercise....


    x lone shoe in a dryer Daniel GarnreiterLess than a minute ago I tumble through this poem as the I feel the thoughts do in your mind. They jar against the sides of the machine banging away with such noise. Waiting and waiting for the cycle to finish. In that time we are left to wait we can be of use in so many ways and with those ways a thousand actions to do more to show who and what we are to improve ourselves so that the presence we offer is the best we can. True though, sometimes it's just time to wait. To watch the tumult inside but being there offers possibilities as well. for should the door be hit and come loose we are there to catch what falls out and to assist as we couldn't if we'd gone away
    today

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/14/2014 8:28:00 PM)

    By behavior....

    Lovely work

    Olwen Cuttita9 hours ago
    Well done. Many take amiss of what really matters and focus on only the little things that don't really compare or stand up to other matters. This is said and written very well.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/14/2014 7:13:00 AM)

    Spare them....


    Powerful poem Helvi Salminen1 day ago about an important topic
    today

    Broken Lullabies 7 hours ago Very true and something everyone should read! Very nicely said.
    today

    You express the situation well. Tracy Bollinger7 hours ago Your moral stature and compassion bleeds through the words!

    great Joshua Bissot7 hours ago very nicely done my friend
    today

  • Prof.satyavrat Gaur (5/13/2014 2:20:00 AM)

    Hamari parchhaiyan a contrast to Shahir Ludhyanvi 's Tasuruvaat ki parchhaiyan. There is flow there is concern and depth of ideas.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/6/2014 10:51:00 PM)

    Your choice....

    Thoughtful

    Heidi Wilson10 minutes ago
    Good flow
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    Shakespearan recital


    norbert3 minutes ago
    I think it is ok. The Shakespearean format gives it a classic style which strangely has the disadvantage of making it seem too poetic. Sometimes a poem arouses the most intense emotions when it does not seem too deliberate, when it feels like the poet just sat down and wrote down feelings, not structured sentences.

    It is a good poem for what it is, conventional poetry. But it certainly does not evoke intense emotions
    Comment 0
    Nicely written


    Jessica Cooley10 minutes ago
    I got to say your good at writing.. Great I say. :)

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Never say die, you have no way
As you may also go any one day,
you may be laid on grounds as soul lost,
carried by those whom you hated most,

Immortal you are not so never word spell,
Name may remain but bade farewell,
nothing is permanent, all stands to vanish,
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