Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 262,340 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/29/2014 10:09:00 AM)

    IN deep troubles

    superb

    Larry Stallings4 minutes ago
    how can they be driven away
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    Nice

    Leila McLeod4 minutes ago
    You pose some thought provoking questions, great poem :)
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    Well done.

    " Doc" Rule2 minutes ago
    Your fear and unrest is not without reason. well done, Hasmukh.
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    i like it

    preston cochran2 minutes ago
    how indeed.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/29/2014 9:53:00 AM)

    Such an endevour

    Colleen Courtney (6/29/2014 9: 49: 00 AM)
    This is such a wonderful poem Mehta! You've included in this write all of the things which make PoemHunter such an amazing site. I too have made many friends here and a few who I speak with daily. It is so beautiful to reach out to others and learn about their cultures and lives. And as you said, a great place to get feedback from others and offer our own encouragement and insights. Love this piece! (Report)

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/29/2014 2:48:00 AM)

    I feel best

    Sir (Hasmukh Mehta) , I personally thank you for this enlightening poem and your stanza of the poem “You have heart and soul—To respond with inner call—Try to listen and carefully think—It may always uplift and not sink” brings a realization in us. Respected!




    Eagam Khaling, Darjeeling
    Jun 29,2014

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/28/2014 7:04:00 AM)

    The faith is not.....
    Oh brave wanderer...

    Sidanne Solomon4 hours ago
    ...I am reminded of a quote: Do not follow the path of others, but instead blaze your own trail and leave sparks in your wake. Go fort, brave soul, and lead the life you have infinitely imagined!

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/24/2014 7:37:00 PM)

    God is staying....

    I love it

    Kamran Minder19 minutes ago
    amazing
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    fabulous

    Lilly Emery 3 minutes ago
    Very good writing
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    I appreciate your outlook.


    Kendon Hoover18 minutes ago
    I like this poem. It's very positive and I highly appreciate your outlook on how people should live their lives. I don't necessarily believe in God, but I will tip my hat to you sir. You have my respect.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/21/2014 9:14:00 PM)

    Vision to find.....
    Top class visionary.


    John Ravenscroft13 minutes ago
    Spiritual, most deep and forever honest, intuitive.
    Comment +1
    beautiful


    Constance Kabereck23 minutes ago
    your word were vividley expressed i liked it
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    nice


    Qoutes Homemade25 minutes ago
    nice

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/17/2014 11:00:00 PM)

    With response.....

    without clouds and showers

    KR BALAKRISHNAN6 minutes ago
    This is clear, my poet.
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    ok, good

    BOSS LADY6 minutes ago
    now what''s the title?
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    Extremely trying, but the gift is there.


    Shane Minor1 minute ago
    I have no doubt that you don't lack the proper capability of becoming a great poet, I absolutely believe that your messages are extremely poetic, while your poetry itself needs some work... Instead of looking for rhythmic terms, instead deliver something that is as true inside as it is written on the out..... be completely honest- because its harder to lie, therefore it takes an extremely creative person to come up with material that doesn't speak truth... but that kind of poetry is better left in fictitious novels rather than expressed through poetry.
    ..

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/17/2014 10:40:00 PM)

    For his own
    The flow is amazing!


    Chelsie Davis4 minutes ago
    I love how you can make it flow! Its amazing, I really do enjoy this poem, thank you!
    ...

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/17/2014 10:21:00 PM)

    Mirror may speak....Great words


    Anup Dutta14 hours ago
    Loved the thoughts
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    A Shakespearean eminem


    Karina Paxinos14 hours ago
    You conveyed a story with great emotion,
    The magic of failure is that we recognize it only because we have once (many times before succeeded)
    I love this!
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    good

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/17/2014 8:06:00 AM)

    Prefer corner...
    And prefer corner to be absent

    rasheeda kearney6 minutes ago
    Great work
    Comment +1
    corner to be


    sEan NoRtH6 minutes ago
    absent
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    I like it


    kashish chawla6 minutes ago
    gud job.deep thoughts
    Comment +1
    fine-craft of words


    George Charisma5 minutes ago
    okay

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Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
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I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
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Hate and distance you have excluded

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Never Say Die

Never say die, you have no way
As you may also go any one day,
you may be laid on grounds as soul lost,
carried by those whom you hated most,

Immortal you are not so never word spell,
Name may remain but bade farewell,
nothing is permanent, all stands to vanish,
Game will be over when you are finish,

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