Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 214,236 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/14/2014 7:13:00 AM)

    Spare them....


    Powerful poem Helvi Salminen1 day ago about an important topic
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    Broken Lullabies 7 hours ago Very true and something everyone should read! Very nicely said.
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    You express the situation well. Tracy Bollinger7 hours ago Your moral stature and compassion bleeds through the words!

    great Joshua Bissot7 hours ago very nicely done my friend
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  • Prof.satyavrat Gaur (5/13/2014 2:20:00 AM)

    Hamari parchhaiyan a contrast to Shahir Ludhyanvi 's Tasuruvaat ki parchhaiyan. There is flow there is concern and depth of ideas.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/6/2014 10:51:00 PM)

    Your choice....

    Thoughtful

    Heidi Wilson10 minutes ago
    Good flow
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    Shakespearan recital


    norbert3 minutes ago
    I think it is ok. The Shakespearean format gives it a classic style which strangely has the disadvantage of making it seem too poetic. Sometimes a poem arouses the most intense emotions when it does not seem too deliberate, when it feels like the poet just sat down and wrote down feelings, not structured sentences.

    It is a good poem for what it is, conventional poetry. But it certainly does not evoke intense emotions
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    Nicely written


    Jessica Cooley10 minutes ago
    I got to say your good at writing.. Great I say. :)

  • Richard Beevor Richard Beevor (5/3/2014 9:55:00 AM)

    excellent work and high achievement

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/30/2014 10:15:00 PM)

    Talk poetry.....

    I like it

    David Cook1 minute ago
    This is a nice profound teacher. I like his logic. I like the way he explains what poetry is all about. Poetry is the most beautiful gift to mankind and a poet can come from the poorest of the poorest. Could be the most happiest happiest person on the face of the earth. Poetry is like a bible
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/30/2014 6:00:00 AM)

    Never fades away....

    Anand Brown(4/30/2014 1: 33: 00 AM)
    Excellent poem, absorbing and engaging. It bears testament to the enduring quality of love and does so with poetic zest and class. Take a bow

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/28/2014 10:24:00 AM)

    Compassionate mother.....

    A lovely poem on mother. Being a mother myself, can very well relate to this poem. Thanks Hasmukhji.


    Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, india
    Apr 28,2014

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/23/2014 9:58:00 PM)

    For protection....

    i am in love with your words of wisdom! !


    Michelle24 minutes ago
    you are truly wonderful with your energy of words and a meaningful message behind it
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/23/2014 8:43:00 PM)

    Give chance...

    United from within

    Tracy Bollinger4 minutes ago
    Internal conflict from within as destructive power exceeding that of nature. Give the true nature of man a chance, instead of the few bent on power. This may happen if enough people believe it can.
    I love the message that only a poet can deliver.
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    Boosted.

    KR BALAKRISHNAN8 minutes ago
    Mehtajiii, I am glad that your poems are becoming brighter and brighter day by day. Reaching greater heights....
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    interestng


    Stephen Kister9 minutes ago
    good idea

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/16/2014 9:51:00 PM)

    Cuckoo remind...

    I love the abstract feeling!

    Sydney ParkLess than a minute ago
    I find it really interesting when poems are written without an explanation or without being straightforward. I love how i really had to read into it and interpret to find what I think the meaning of it is. It is not a cliche poem with lots of rhyming. This is true poetry with what seems to be a deep purpose.
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    Metaphor really stood as something else

    Chelsea TrianoLess than a minute ago
    Great way of expanding the idea of being inspired and changed in heart through metaphorical ways
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Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

Immense Love

Immense love

Immense love from daughter
That is seen no where
It is heavenly feeling
And always healing medicine

Mother's memory brings tears
Just for us to feel and bear

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