hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/27/2010 9:55:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/26/2010 10: 49: 00 PM

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    Poem: 23620197 - A burning desire
    Member: Hanadi Azaiza
    Comment: I like this poem a lot. Especially the way some words just pop. like the second line 'He can’t hide it from anybody under some cover' desire is something no one can hide. well i think so

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  • Argum Sheth (6/25/2010 7:58:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/25/2010 4: 35: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23598370 - A change that was never
    Member: Maria Shipka
    Comment: Just so...simply! It was written maybe on my order...wasn't it Hasmukh? ? ?
    Sometimes with few words you can express more like with long-long- complicated
    tractate....to leave some space also for readers...to could read also between lines,
    to engage also their imagination :)



    Date & Time: 6/25/2010 4: 20: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23582017 - A black and bright
    Member: Maria Shipka
    Comment: ...just so as mentioned before me Vijay...to me also remind a bit philosophical tractate...or rather Shakespeare' s 'To be or not to be? ? ? ' (that is a question)
    I like this ine verse:
    'Success or failure, black and light form integral part
    They may not be felt from the very beginning or from the start'



    Date & Time: 6/25/2010 4: 03: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23365932 - A beautiful song
    Member: Maria Shipka
    Comment: Very interesting poem! I was the most captures with this expression:
    'Nation can survive and remain at peace without any worry '.
    As the whole again enough hard for myself!



    Date & Time: 6/25/2010 3: 43: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23555866 - A barren way
    Member: Maria Shipka
    Comment: This barren way was barren also for me, .
    by reading and trying to understand all
    poet inside you wanted to describe....
    there was some whiles I caught the right tone
    but presently I again lost myself and stopped.
    Of course it is not your fault I so hardly combated,
    It' s me who have to more try to grow up
    if ever when I will be able reaching up your level :)



    Date & Time: 6/25/2010 2: 04: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23689289 - A nice idea
    Member: Maria Shipka
    Comment: Really great and so complete ideas my friend!
    Your poem said on ine breath so much ideas!
    It's visible you're the descendant of Gandhi
    in all respect, impressiveness and power :)

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/25/2010 5:39:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 6/25/2010 1: 49: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23689151 - A basis for philosophy
    Member: C.n.prem Kumar
    Comment: There is imaginative construction to show superiority
    No one has gone deeply into this perception with serenity
    There is no logical road which strengthen this belief
    Momentarily it provides some solace or relief.............Very significant in this world of competition and strife, even in the field of knowledge.



    Date & Time: 6/25/2010 12: 19: 00 AM
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    Poem: 22921848 - A difficult separation
    Member: Geeta Ashok
    Comment: Such a touching and emotional string of words built up to form a beautiful garland!



    Date & Time: 6/25/2010 12: 13: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23569344 - A direct attack
    Member: Geeta Ashok
    Comment: A very impressive write on some of the man-made problems and their consequences that we face today and those that will continue to torment us in future, too. The last stanza is the best:

    We may still survive and last long
    The path chosen by us is very wrong
    Nature and mankind must live side by side
    The gulf should not be created wide and wide



    Date & Time: 6/25/2010 12: 08: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23704561 - A direct poser
    Member: Geeta Ashok
    Comment: You must feel proud of your being in this world
    You actions must speak louder than the words

    Very impressive lines. These 2 lines say it all.



    Date & Time: 6/24/2010 11: 22: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23703457 - A nice to recall
    Member: Lady Grace
    Comment: owwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.....a nice work dear friend...

    kida remains in our hearts
    in heaven he is always safe
    no more sickness, no more foes
    everlasting life he's enjoying now...

    i love u so much my kidadang
    we treat u not a cat but a baby
    u really know how much we love you
    even neighbors and some friends love you too...

    to hasmukh, , , if this is for my kida...thanks a lot for this poem...i do hope u will always be fine, thanks alot...cheers to ur hundred poems...smileeeeeeeeee



    Date & Time: 6/24/2010 11: 01: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23704561 - A direct poser
    Member: Kial Whitmire
    Comment: This truly speaks out and demands a reaction. To question many things we ourselves need to answer. 'It is He who helps, alters and reshapes' great line many need to read and learn.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/24/2010 9:09:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 6/24/2010 7: 03: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23689151 - A basis for philosophy
    Member: Dr.tony Brahmin
    Comment: The philosophical concept is to be on right direction
    We should be prepared to go in that particular
    It can’t be confined to any particular intelligent group
    It has to be performed on stage in the form of troupe

    your conceptualisation on philosophy is very fine. thinking, emotions, feelings coined together it becomes poetic philosophy. thank u for sharing.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/24/2010 12:04:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 6/23/2010 11: 15: 00 PM

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    Poem: 21704849 - How Can I........
    Member: Argum Sheth
    Comment: How can I fly away with weak wings?
    How songs can become sweet until you sing?
    How memories can fade away till you are in safe house?
    How can I remain happy when hear no applause?
    it is readl tragedy.. nice poem....10



    Date & Time: 6/23/2010 11: 12: 00 PM

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    Poem: 23671119 - An honest always suffer
    Member: Gan Chennai
    Comment: Happy that few people like you are ready to think about Honesty. Your 60 odd years of experience give some hope about Honesty. Good



    Date & Time: 6/23/2010 11: 07: 00 PM

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    Poem: 23636757 - An ideal couple
    Member: Gan Chennai
    Comment: Great Gentle Man. Keep writing to keep your neurons active.



    Date & Time: 6/23/2010 10: 05: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20891339 - 400th mark
    Member: Amanda Shelton
    Comment: Beautiful words come out as if they fly in the wind.



    Date & Time: 6/23/2010 9: 55: 00 PM

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    Poem: 16893249 - ' Miss ', I really miss#(in 500)
    Member: Amanda Shelton
    Comment: I did injoy reading this.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/22/2010 10:06:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/22/2010 7: 39: 00 PM

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    Poem: 16893249 - ' Miss ', I really miss#(in 500)
    Member: Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee
    Comment: A very good poem indeed with sarcasm and passion mingled.



    Date & Time: 6/22/2010 3: 10: 00 PM

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    Poem: 23620197 - A burning desire
    Member: Marieta Maglas
    Comment: Vividly written and interesting to read. Excellent poem.



    Date & Time: 6/22/2010 9: 30: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23581557 - A bright tomorrow
    Member: Rosse Nor
    Comment: Sun was blazing all the way
    Striking heat waves with direct rays
    Forcing people to find shelter on the way
    but not letting any opportunity to pass or giving away
    I am very agree with what written in your poem.
    Sometimes reality of human atitude, action and reaction are actually chain of what been seen, learned and adopted thru sweet or bitter life experience.
    Well written and almast accurate with what actually happening to human nowdays.
    10 for reality poem.

  • Sarah Fleming (6/21/2010 7:05:00 AM)

    You write the nices poems

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/21/2010 6:53:00 AM)

    ate & Time: 6/21/2010 2: 13: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23581557 - A bright tomorrow
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK
    Comment: ‘Life seems full of uncertainties/One has to remain contended with varieties’…Sir always you decor corpus of poetry with nuggets …some places I find diamonded nuggets …love it most much…quoted above… thanks for sharing…
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10



    Date & Time: 6/21/2010 1: 41: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23569344 - A direct attack
    Member: Craig Mize
    Comment: It's a poem that tells a message that really needs to be told and you told it so well.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/20/2010 7:07:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 6/20/2010 12: 45: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23626637 - A little smile
    Member: Chaitanya Dorwat
    Comment: A fantastic write sir, enjoyed every word, so blessed would be that lover,
    every stanza states the thoughts that every soul feels when in love.
    Thank you for sharing such a pleasant work.



    Date & Time: 6/20/2010 12: 24: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23554601 - A notorious kids
    Member: Chaitanya Dorwat
    Comment: I just passed out 12th and left school, this poem compeled to go back to my school days.
    Thanks for sharing such a fantastic poem, sir.



    Date & Time: 6/19/2010 7: 59: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23569229 - At last she came
    Member: Rajaram Ramachandran
    Comment: The love-in-wait is difficult to bear with for anyone. Well composed.



    Date & Time: 6/19/2010 7: 56: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23545447 - A waka waka waka
    Member: Rajaram Ramachandran
    Comment: As you say, really the sports break all the barriers and unites all the world citizens at one place.



    Date & Time: 6/19/2010 7: 52: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23569344 - A direct attack
    Member: Rajaram Ramachandran
    Comment: A timely advice to the people who are the cause for this pollution around the world.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/18/2010 7:58:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/18/2010 9: 05: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23569344 - A direct attack
    Member: Swatimalya Chattopadhyay
    Comment: I was just thinking of writing a poem on global warming, Hasmukh overtook me.I was cut off from the site for quite some time and am astonished to find you have crossed 700 poems.HEARTIEST CONGRATS.My knowledge was upto your crossing 300, this is really commendable.

    The poem is very contemporary under the scorching heat prevailing for quite some time.It is well thought out.Your rhyming is always excellent.The poem reflects your enlightenment of the pertinent information and has beautifully portrayed the world bereft of soft, wet touch of the nature.I give secret voting, but of late voting no.is always slipping away.So your open vote is ten out of ten, a well deserved score.

Two Minor Girls

The report of cruel art
That existed in primitive age
Where sex was wildly managed

Even animals observe
True period and serve
For their family expansion
And traditional mating session

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