Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 264,427 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/11/2014 9:53:00 PM)

    Premilah Ramnauth Hasmukh Mehta am no poet nor poetress..neither do I aspire to be one....am simple woman...I keep repeating it...u r a prized author....I salute you Sir

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/6/2014 8:38:00 PM)

    Girl for you.....Deep


    Michal Cendrowski9 hours ago
    a pre-determined love?
    Comment +1
    Great

    Michael Sechrest9 hours ago
    Very lovely poem, and I feel that your accent seems to bleed into your writing which I find interesting it gives the writing a certain tone you dont see too often. The idea of finding that special someone from an early age is a good topic to write on and you clearly have done so from a unique perspective, so I rather like this poem.

  • Amir Mohammad Islami Chalandar (6/6/2014 7:02:00 AM)

    excellent poems. you are great in explaining your feels. i invite you to read my poem

  • Richard Beevor Richard Beevor (5/29/2014 2:33:00 AM)

    Thank you for your comments, much appreciated and an honour from someone as you, I would like to be considered one of the top 500 poets, you stand in exalted company and well deserved too, I have read many of your poems and they are extremely high standard, please keep writing, its a pleasure to read your work.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/28/2014 5:46:00 PM)

    You write......Feeling the Nature around

    Bhuwan Joshi20 hours ago
    Definitely a nice pointer to those of us who have no time to stand and stare the gifts of Nature......
    Comment +1
    Good but could be better

    Arsi Anon20 hours ago
    It sounds incomplete. You should revise the ending. Also, you have a few grammar mistakes. But the idea is there and it is strong. It's a pretty creative idea, I guess, writing about writing. I like it, but you could improve it. :)

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/28/2014 5:25:00 PM)

    Let nobody......Thank you! I think that relationships between man and man or woman or woman are not as strong...the thing is if I am a woman, I already know what a woman is like so it is somewhat boring to keep on experiencing the same thing and if I make friends with a man it will be different and it tends to be more fun because I am learning how man are like. Beautiful write but I think woman and woman or man and man can get along fine, it is a matter of understanding that is all.
    9 hours ago by Munashe Mumbama | Reply

  • Richard Beevor Richard Beevor (5/24/2014 10:12:00 AM)

    excellent poems sir, I wonder if you could read some of mine and give me your advice please, I would like to improve, thank you, I am http: //www.poemhunter.com/richard-allen-beevor/

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/18/2014 12:20:00 AM)

    I turn 67...

    Re: I turn sixty seven (Score: 1)
    by maryanns on Saturday, May 17,2014 (12: 12: 02)
    From another one maintaining in time I must applaud this lovely piece of thoughtful artwork - and wish you a very happy birthday, too!

    Love that last stanza; good for you! Smile

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/15/2014 8:45:00 AM)

    Story of desertion....

    chills chills wow

    Joshua Bissot6 minutes ago
    i totally understand my mother has gone through that same loss and i feel so bad for her it deeply hurts her and by virtue hurts me: (thank you for sharing such a personal introspective poem it is really good

    i recently attempted suicide and was found basically found dead -
    here is my recollection of where i was. http: //www.poetry.com/poems/1257276-content-n-resolve-

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/15/2014 7:31:00 AM)

    Re: Quite happy (Score: 1)
    by b.b.w.(Tulsa) on Wednesday, May 14,2014 (22: 20: 05)
    These are honest emotions well expressed. There is an old proverb:
    The best reply to ignorance is silence. Don't be discouraged. Keep
    up the good work.

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    Re: Quite happy (Score: 1)
    by jadia4708au on Thursday, May 15,2014 (08: 29: 38)
    Oh sir so nice of you. I am guest poet here. readers keep distance from me here. I still give best of me to them.. regards

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Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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Born Poor

Born poor

He was born poor
Brought up by neighbors
Whole life he labored
But not a second m happily snored

He struggled
And led

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