hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 52,941 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 52,941 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/23/2013 9:07:00 PM)

    Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
    Yes, an egotistic proclivity as well as a regular agenda of opportinistity carries questionable artistic merit. However I must say I am a bit taken aback in seeing this stance coming from someone who recommends his own work in the box that is meant to recommend poems you have read by others & were especially moved by...between that, and the obvious need to copy & paste comments you have received on other sites than this one, has admittedly got me scratching my head a tad....BTW: I believe you would garner far more positive feedback if (1) You did not alienate 80% of this sites membership by posting many of your poems in hindi, and (2) You found it in your own ego to swallow pride and actually read & critique those who have been regular loyal supporters & commentors of your work, here, on PF, despite your polarising actions. Look, don't portray me or this feedback wrogly, as it is merely an I.M.O. based on personal observation. I realise that I have NOT been one of your regular supporters, and certainly have never expected to be one of yours. I hope you take my opine and advice in as positive a vein as it may not have came across, but was meant to be. Good Luck in your literary travels & Be Well ~FjR~

    today 07.08
    i replied him as under....

    I appreciate your frankness. Some of your observations are true in the sense they are pursued by me. It is not meant to attract any attention or to get rewards.

    It is time consuming yet it has to be performed because poems must reach to readers and know who all are reading with their comments.

    I never ask anyone to read or appreciate but i am honest in putting to readers.

    I love your criticism. read and criticize. Never build opinion in haste

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  • Gold Star - 52,941 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/18/2013 10:04:00 PM)

    Rufus Henderson You write so well you have a gift
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  • Gold Star - 52,941 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/17/2013 8:17:00 AM)

    adiqullah Khan You have a talent and your poetry is filled with simple virtues, gentle and humanistic.tc and keep writing.- :)
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  • Gold Star - 52,941 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/13/2013 7:31:00 AM)

    Bu Magda My friend u r really great artist of poems n I hv seen u in ur website... be best in ur life dear
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  • Gold Star - 52,941 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/12/2013 7:39:00 AM)


    Ja'Quan LaBenne37 minutes ago
    I love the final line. Great.
    Comment +1

    Barry Good37 minutes ago
    Great poem. Love the way it flows and the way you put it over to the reader love it.

  • Gold Star - 52,941 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/12/2013 6:05:00 AM)

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    Adrina Adi...god of variety..god of splender! ! ! ..nice! ! !
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  • Gold Star - 52,941 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/30/2013 9:55:00 AM)

    time to go....Lorraine Currelley likes this.

    Lorraine Currelley Always your love of humanity and profound/wise words burst forth from your poems!
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  • Gold Star - 52,941 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/12/2013 6:52:00 PM)

    12 July 2013 TO: Mr. Hasmukh mehta, & Ms. Shigufta Uzma Thanks for your kind comments. I'm particularly moved by Mr. Mehta's profound quotes- Such is faith And remains till death But in Him he finds solace In unhappiness, bright shine on face I'm inquisitive who is this great poet! Rajat Das Gupta

    Rajat Das Gupta, Kolkata
    Jul 12,2013

  • Gold Star - 52,941 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/11/2013 4:20:00 AM)

    Mitos Jane Nepomuceno and Les Bush Poet like this.

    Mitos Jane Nepomuceno awesome poet you are :))
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  • Gold Star - 52,941 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/4/2013 9:49:00 PM)

    Behind us, , , he poet details our under appreciation of divine natural occurrences that passes without any consideration.

    Mary Akinosi6 minutes ago
    My favorite part of this poem is its word choice and visual imagery that guide the reader through a delightful word party that instilled a new founded interest in the smaller things.
    Comment +1
    great work

Best Poem of hasmukh amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss(246) /500 #

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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