hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/21/2010 9:31:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/21/2010 9: 14: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23992682 - A warm welcome
    Member: Lady Grace
    Comment: You have touched me like high speed wind
    I was flying with emotions and couldn’t find
    It was immense pleasure to hold on in grip
    Tears almost rolled on cheeks but couldn’t weep

    As you closed on to paste the warm welcome
    The whole world seemed to have nearly come
    I was wondering what it was all about
    It was slow whispering and not big shout...

    i like the presentation of this..it is full of sense...brief, short and rhymed is nicer dear than lengthy poem...sometimes, due of too much words, the thought is already lost so, better like this...hope u r fine....very nice presentation...



    Date & Time: 7/21/2010 7: 53: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23987484 - A real poem
    Member: Ken E Hall
    Comment: What is a real poem indeed...you have just wrote one hasmukh, a diifferent slant on poems great idea well put ++++10 regard

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/19/2010 8:28:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 7/19/2010 8: 29: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23941783 - A action to be
    Member: Mark Lewis Berryann
    Comment: The base has to be strong for any good foundation
    No one may prefer to go for or against without any recommendation
    There has to be sincere efforts for calling a day
    You can hold roots with firm commitment to say

    I find value in the entire poem still, the verse copied above was my favorite! A strong poem. Sharing value and understanding of our world!



    Date & Time: 7/19/2010 7: 14: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23951397 - A candle to melt
    Member: David Beckham
    Comment: Very reflective and a poem to take every where with you. Nicely done 10



    Date & Time: 7/19/2010 3: 12: 00 AM
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    Poem: 16893249 - ' Miss ', I really miss#(in 500)
    Member: Kaa.na. Kalyanasundaram
    Comment: Great write. Thanks for sharing; Really I have not missed your pen; with good wishes: Kaa.na.kalyan.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/18/2010 10:45:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 9: 51: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23966094 - A princess of heart
    Member: David Beckham
    Comment: this is beautiful. Really enjoyed it



    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 9: 48: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23951282 - A smile from Buddha
    Member: Rajaram Ramachandran
    Comment: One Buddha is not enough to set right this world. How can Buddha smile at the violence spread everywhere?



    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 9: 44: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23938241 - A look at children
    Member: Rajaram Ramachandran
    Comment: Children are gifts from God, as you say, and childless parents can adopt children from orphanage homes. All flowers do not grow in our gardens. Sometime we have to get them from others' gardens.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/18/2010 9:10:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 9: 06: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23948453 - A birth of poet
    Member: /Rose Koffin/
    Comment: Very interesting....insightful of the mind...moving...my friend keep writing^^



    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 7: 26: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23959677 - A nice joke
    Member: Rosse Nor
    Comment: What we wish, what we get. Eyes will tell every truth within us and sometimes in our life journey what we get, not what we want. certain aspect of life can't be written by human hand.
    Nice and real story of live.
    10 for you

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/18/2010 6:17:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 5: 56: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23938241 - A look at children
    Member: Chulsoo Kim
    Comment: Days tiredness go off when you see them playing

    It's happiness. good work



    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 3: 58: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23941783 - A action to be
    Member: Ken E Hall
    Comment: Action all the way aka speaks louder than a thousand words important subject to write about...+++++10.....regards



    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 3: 37: 00 AM
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    Poem: 21872772 - A never ending
    Member: Elena Sandu
    Comment: 'I wish I have some treasure to share
    I searched all over but found no where'
    Well, sir, I can see your treasure
    It feeds me, I'll have a tiny slice
    if you dont mind
    Your poems, I can't measure
    nor explain how good it feels
    to have a bit of share.
    Thank you

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/15/2010 10:25:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/15/2010 9: 50: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23820159 - A fear so often
    Member: Greenwolfe 1962
    Comment: This is not one poem, it is two. The first 6 stanzas are incomplete and I would finish them and using the same title rewrite that first poem. The last 8 stanzas are all about music. This should be the title of this poem. This second poem is complete and is quite nice as it is. It still needs a little work but people will still enjoy it as it is. - Greenwolfe 1962



    Date & Time: 7/15/2010 9: 38: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23922601 - A calm river flow
    Member: Greenwolfe 1962
    Comment: There is some wisdom and some nice lines in this piece but it is much too long. It needs to be cut down a bit and the author needs to focus on some aspect of the river. This will force the writer to focus on the precise specific point he wants to make about the river. If he does this, the problems this poem carries with it will disappear. - Greenwolfe 1962

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/15/2010 9:36:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/15/2010 9: 30: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23881339 - A day without charm
    Member: Roselyn Magbojos
    Comment: Let us get straight on the subject
    If apology is offered then not to reject
    It may amount to be greatness on our part
    Well it is nice gesture with very good start

    Then... I hope my apology will be accepted.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/13/2010 5:16:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/13/2010 12: 19: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23859466 - A change for while
    Member: Whispering Rose
    Comment: 'Offer shade like tree'
    a very well written poem...contains multiple facts and very good advices
    thank you for sharing



    Date & Time: 7/13/2010 8: 32: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23779426 - A blatant lie
    Member: Apoet Bangla
    Comment: Even your enemy may not stab you from the back
    He may be your sworn enemy but not attack
    It has to be taken as reality and experience at all the stages
    Even your friends may some time surprise you in your age

    Surprisingly you are writing some truths to combat the lies. Perhaps it is the achievement of writing poem. Yes, you have got your own tongue and mission to attain. Thank you very much.

    Regards,
    10+
    Apoet Bangla

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/12/2010 9:14:00 PM)

    But what's wrong in trying even if I'm in misery?
    Hahaha, just give me chance please
    Dr, Subhendu, I beg of you if I insist
    Hasmukh Amathalal, tell me if I shall have to quit.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/11/2010 9:32:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/11/2010 8: 56: 00 PM
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    Poem: 21872772 - A never ending
    Member: Dwi Dwi Utami
    Comment: hey friend i.tink you have wrong tink, about this poem.LIFE NEVER ENDING, in the world not eternely just temporary, i.tink life ending if some poeple died, but your poem realy great, God luck.



    Date & Time: 7/11/2010 8: 51: 00 PM
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    Poem: 16893249 - ' Miss ', I really miss#(in 500)
    Member: Dwi Dwi Utami
    Comment: Ha.ha.ha. Yes i.know your feel, and you want to dance.and so much missing this is good poem, i.like it, bcoz i.also women.Congrat for you my friend.

God, bless only those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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