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hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/29/2010 5:54:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/29/2010 5: 42: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23739958 - At and each moment
    Member: Alicia Moore
    Comment: Life is a proposal 4 better or 4 worse this poem extends the meaning, the understanding. Just n case u dont know wat i mean... its good: ]



    Date & Time: 6/29/2010 5: 30: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23703457 - A nice to recall
    Member: Kial Whitmire
    Comment: Such a tantalizing poem! Very appealing to the minds of the many readers my friend, keep this work

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/28/2010 10:04:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 6/28/2010 3: 17: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23694579 - A belief not common
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK
    Comment: ‘Let us ignite the passion for humanity…Race, color, skin may differ but there ma y remain
    pure soul’…

    Sir I’ve changed the order of sentence sequence as in poetry…[excuse me] the first is ritual and second is the result…marvelous poetry true reflection of Indian Vedic Wisdom…what the turbulent present day world needs now most …thanks sharing…
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/28/2010 1:45:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 6/27/2010 11: 35: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23689151 - A basis for philosophy
    Member: Antonio Liao
    Comment: You’ll Philosophize the moment you read this poem....like the sand in the seashore, the
    more you dig the more you're inside of the womb of Wisdom of Philosophy...a 10 +++



    Date & Time: 6/27/2010 10: 13: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23739958 - At and each moment
    Member: Leonard Dabydeen
    Comment: Sometimes life can be so full of disillusionment.



    Date & Time: 6/26/2010 10: 49: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23620197 - A burning desire
    Member: Hanadi Azaiza
    Comment: I like this poem a lot. Especially the way some words just pop. like the second line 'He can’t hide it from anybody under some cover' desire is something no one can hide. well i think so

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/27/2010 11:05:00 PM)

    T
    trust i need no wine i always feel fine when i go to dine te rhyme keeps coming and its not forced at alll it flows nicely a playful quality that works so very well oh it works
    on Nice ideas by jadia4708au, on June 23
    be
    shut the violence that speaks to me about people in a community that who shut their windows and doors and refuse to be part of the solution out of fear...nice provoking write

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/27/2010 11:04:00 PM)

    Re: Burial place
    Hi Jadia! !

    This poem has a very haunting vibe to it, as I read from stanza to stanza it seem to build with passion and draw me in.
    A sad but very exciting read, thank you for sharing,

    Kind regards,

    Steve.

    © Steve Twydell

    Wed Jun 23,2010 2: 37 pm

    Re: Burial place

    A sad write indeed Jadia but enjoyable.

    © Graham

    Sat Jun 26,2010 11: 58 am

    Re: Burial place

    The two things we have in common with all countries of the world..is death...not pleasant to think about as one gets older..Your command of English is really getting better each write..Keep it up..lol and God bless..Kathie

    © Valentine

    Sun Jun 27,2010 12: 44 am

    Re: Am not at ease

    Another right on the spot piece Jadia.. I read this twice, the words so effected me..


    Way to go guy!

    Hugs to ya
    Moonie xx
    Re: Am not at ease

    This flowed brilliantly.
    © Chris

    Sat Jun 26,2010 3: 26 pm

    Re: Direct poser

    Wonderful statements here Jadia! I had to agree with many aspects to this piece.. Keep that pen flowing guy!
    Hugs,
    Moonie xx

    Re: Direct poser

    Very well written and I to agree with many of the aspects of your writing.
    Ladybug

    © Ladybug
    Fri Jun 25,2010 10: 06 pm
    Re: Direct poser

    A good deed is it's own reward.

    © Chris

    Sat Jun 26,2010 3: 26 pm

    • 25 Jun
    • interesting rhyming lessons for everyone..the butcher, the baker and the candle stick maker.... on Direct poser
    From Nikunj 25 Jun
    • The length of this poem and the rhymes are amazing! ! ! ! on Direct poser
    From sridevi 25 Jun
    • 24 Jun
    • i do not agree with the whole poem but maybe rest assured that i agree with most of the thought presented here... maybe 90% or above... on Aim in life
    From Obed Dela Cruz 24 Jun
    • Very interesting and thought provoking piece to read! on Aim in life
    From T A Ramesh 24 Jun
    • YOUR LAST LINE REMINDS ME OF THAT OLD SAYING, - after the game of Life gets over, the King, the Queen and the humble Rook - all go back to that same old (black) box! -Raj on Burial place
    From RAJ NANDY 24 Jun
    • and when you uncover intuition philosophy will smile from every flower on Basis for philosophy
    From wojja fink 24 Jun
    • Philosophy comes from the Greek word 'philosophia' meaning the love of wisdom. It was the ancient Greeks who first broke away from Mythological and mystical explanations of nature of things replacing it with logical reasoning! Thus Thales during the 5th century became the Father of Philosophy & first of the Seven Sages of Greece! I Enjoyed Reading Your Poem and in support quote, - 'The quest for knowledge is the biggest goal, Merely digging in sand in a bottomless hole! ' Sir, I am a student of Philosophy & have written The History of Greek Philosophy in VERSE, which I have yet to publish! There will be hardly any takers for these things, since what sells are poems on sex & love! I THANK YOU FOR CHOSINING TO WRITE ON PHILOSOPHY! -Raj on Basis for philosophy
    From RAJ NANDY 24 Jun
    • 22 Jun
    • This is wonderful, awesome lines with rhymes that makes it smooth & loosen the tongue when read orally. Very cleverly written indeed. on An end to acttivities
    From nhorlandi 22 Jun

    on Nice to recall by jadia4708au, on June 25
    T
    trust i need no wine i always feel fine when i go to dine te rhyme keeps coming and its not forced at alll it flows nicely a playful quality that works so very well oh it works
    on Nice ideas by jadia4708au, on June 23
    be
    shut the violence that speaks to me about people in a community that who shut their windows and doors and refuse to be part of the solution out of fear...nice provoking write

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/27/2010 11:03:00 PM)

    Sandhya Sudhish posted 2 days ago
    the last two lines summarise the whole situation.
    but no one seems to notice the droughts or floods as an outcome of their acts. it is always something 'unfortunate'.
    liked this
    sandhya


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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/27/2010 9:55:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/26/2010 10: 49: 00 PM

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    Poem: 23620197 - A burning desire
    Member: Hanadi Azaiza
    Comment: I like this poem a lot. Especially the way some words just pop. like the second line 'He can’t hide it from anybody under some cover' desire is something no one can hide. well i think so

  • Argum Sheth (6/25/2010 7:58:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/25/2010 4: 35: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23598370 - A change that was never
    Member: Maria Shipka
    Comment: Just so...simply! It was written maybe on my order...wasn't it Hasmukh? ? ?
    Sometimes with few words you can express more like with long-long- complicated
    tractate....to leave some space also for readers...to could read also between lines,
    to engage also their imagination :)



    Date & Time: 6/25/2010 4: 20: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23582017 - A black and bright
    Member: Maria Shipka
    Comment: ...just so as mentioned before me Vijay...to me also remind a bit philosophical tractate...or rather Shakespeare' s 'To be or not to be? ? ? ' (that is a question)
    I like this ine verse:
    'Success or failure, black and light form integral part
    They may not be felt from the very beginning or from the start'



    Date & Time: 6/25/2010 4: 03: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23365932 - A beautiful song
    Member: Maria Shipka
    Comment: Very interesting poem! I was the most captures with this expression:
    'Nation can survive and remain at peace without any worry '.
    As the whole again enough hard for myself!



    Date & Time: 6/25/2010 3: 43: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23555866 - A barren way
    Member: Maria Shipka
    Comment: This barren way was barren also for me, .
    by reading and trying to understand all
    poet inside you wanted to describe....
    there was some whiles I caught the right tone
    but presently I again lost myself and stopped.
    Of course it is not your fault I so hardly combated,
    It' s me who have to more try to grow up
    if ever when I will be able reaching up your level :)



    Date & Time: 6/25/2010 2: 04: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23689289 - A nice idea
    Member: Maria Shipka
    Comment: Really great and so complete ideas my friend!
    Your poem said on ine breath so much ideas!
    It's visible you're the descendant of Gandhi
    in all respect, impressiveness and power :)

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/25/2010 5:39:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 6/25/2010 1: 49: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23689151 - A basis for philosophy
    Member: C.n.prem Kumar
    Comment: There is imaginative construction to show superiority
    No one has gone deeply into this perception with serenity
    There is no logical road which strengthen this belief
    Momentarily it provides some solace or relief.............Very significant in this world of competition and strife, even in the field of knowledge.



    Date & Time: 6/25/2010 12: 19: 00 AM
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    Poem: 22921848 - A difficult separation
    Member: Geeta Ashok
    Comment: Such a touching and emotional string of words built up to form a beautiful garland!



    Date & Time: 6/25/2010 12: 13: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23569344 - A direct attack
    Member: Geeta Ashok
    Comment: A very impressive write on some of the man-made problems and their consequences that we face today and those that will continue to torment us in future, too. The last stanza is the best:

    We may still survive and last long
    The path chosen by us is very wrong
    Nature and mankind must live side by side
    The gulf should not be created wide and wide



    Date & Time: 6/25/2010 12: 08: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23704561 - A direct poser
    Member: Geeta Ashok
    Comment: You must feel proud of your being in this world
    You actions must speak louder than the words

    Very impressive lines. These 2 lines say it all.



    Date & Time: 6/24/2010 11: 22: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23703457 - A nice to recall
    Member: Lady Grace
    Comment: owwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.....a nice work dear friend...

    kida remains in our hearts
    in heaven he is always safe
    no more sickness, no more foes
    everlasting life he's enjoying now...

    i love u so much my kidadang
    we treat u not a cat but a baby
    u really know how much we love you
    even neighbors and some friends love you too...

    to hasmukh, , , if this is for my kida...thanks a lot for this poem...i do hope u will always be fine, thanks alot...cheers to ur hundred poems...smileeeeeeeeee



    Date & Time: 6/24/2010 11: 01: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23704561 - A direct poser
    Member: Kial Whitmire
    Comment: This truly speaks out and demands a reaction. To question many things we ourselves need to answer. 'It is He who helps, alters and reshapes' great line many need to read and learn.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/24/2010 9:09:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 6/24/2010 7: 03: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23689151 - A basis for philosophy
    Member: Dr.tony Brahmin
    Comment: The philosophical concept is to be on right direction
    We should be prepared to go in that particular
    It can’t be confined to any particular intelligent group
    It has to be performed on stage in the form of troupe

    your conceptualisation on philosophy is very fine. thinking, emotions, feelings coined together it becomes poetic philosophy. thank u for sharing.

In my ears

I miss you each moment
With day and night at present
It leads me to darkness
I bear worry on face

I fear separation
Sometimes it may sever our relation
That thought grips me
I feel prisoner and not free

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