Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 230,207 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/11/2016 12:25:00 AM)

    Ashok Sharda I like the title immensely which is suggestive of the whole idea of the this poetic piece. This is how I evaluate my journey, always treating attainment of any mile stone as my starting point without a waiting for any next, any destination. Consciousness can only be attained with conscious effort. The consequential effect is always joy and beauty. Your poem imbues with this impression.
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    Hasmukh Mehta so encouraging reply. admire your skill too
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/11/2016 12:25:00 AM)

    Just beginning, ....Ashok Sharda I like the title immensely which is suggestive of the whole idea of the this poetic piece. This is how I evaluate my journey, always treating attainment of any mile stone as my starting point without a waiting for any next, any destination. Consciousness can only be attained with conscious effort. The consequential effect is always joy and beauty. Your poem imbues with this impression.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/2/2016 5:46:00 AM)

    For right place............

    Jafar Malandro I love this.we need peace in the world.I like your poem sir great job
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/27/2016 10:38:00 AM)

    stand united..Madan Vaishnava Shakunta A beautiful imagination of global village where all the people shall mine the gold of peace & brotherhood. Thanks a million, Mehta Sahab for composing a so nice & inspiring poem.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/19/2016 6:00:00 PM)

    x Nocpho Dindi Nocpho Dindi Thats great Unlike · Reply · 1 · 3 hrs
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/17/2016 9:27:00 PM)

    Christa Frazee We are meant to deliver something big
    So should not dig
    Elsewhere, where it is hardly needed
    And not even expected.

    *Really excellent...
    Thanks for sharing! ! !
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/16/2016 11:08:00 PM)

    From: Sean ScribblesGood job!
    You sir... Write so very well. Thank you for sharing and posting faithfully! : D
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/20/2016 7:23:00 PM)

    Ella Rose (4/19/2016 8: 56: 00 PM) Great poem, you have a true gift :) -EllaRose (Report) Reply 0 person liked. 0 person did not like.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/20/2016 7:22:00 PM)

    on verge...Caribbean Intl Writers I like your spiritual take in your poem. Unlike · Reply · 1 · 2 hrs
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/20/2016 7:20:00 PM)

    no liberty......

    Pamela Moorehead well written piece no pun intended; I was listening earlier to a book of the Bible that state Jesus is peace the usher and the spirit of peace; when I see people being killed because of their religious belief no matter what that belief is it concerns me, as a society we are too quick to jump to conclusions without fact checking and I come from a generation that believe in protest and was effective in that era, this poem makes me reflect in silence our world how far advanced in one way and how far behind in others
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