hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 19,562 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 19,562 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/18/2010 10:45:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 9: 51: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23966094 - A princess of heart
    Member: David Beckham
    Comment: this is beautiful. Really enjoyed it



    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 9: 48: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23951282 - A smile from Buddha
    Member: Rajaram Ramachandran
    Comment: One Buddha is not enough to set right this world. How can Buddha smile at the violence spread everywhere?



    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 9: 44: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23938241 - A look at children
    Member: Rajaram Ramachandran
    Comment: Children are gifts from God, as you say, and childless parents can adopt children from orphanage homes. All flowers do not grow in our gardens. Sometime we have to get them from others' gardens.

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  • Gold Star - 19,562 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/18/2010 9:10:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 9: 06: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23948453 - A birth of poet
    Member: /Rose Koffin/
    Comment: Very interesting....insightful of the mind...moving...my friend keep writing^^



    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 7: 26: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23959677 - A nice joke
    Member: Rosse Nor
    Comment: What we wish, what we get. Eyes will tell every truth within us and sometimes in our life journey what we get, not what we want. certain aspect of life can't be written by human hand.
    Nice and real story of live.
    10 for you

  • Gold Star - 19,562 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/18/2010 6:17:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 5: 56: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23938241 - A look at children
    Member: Chulsoo Kim
    Comment: Days tiredness go off when you see them playing

    It's happiness. good work



    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 3: 58: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23941783 - A action to be
    Member: Ken E Hall
    Comment: Action all the way aka speaks louder than a thousand words important subject to write about...+++++10.....regards



    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 3: 37: 00 AM
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    Poem: 21872772 - A never ending
    Member: Elena Sandu
    Comment: 'I wish I have some treasure to share
    I searched all over but found no where'
    Well, sir, I can see your treasure
    It feeds me, I'll have a tiny slice
    if you dont mind
    Your poems, I can't measure
    nor explain how good it feels
    to have a bit of share.
    Thank you

  • Gold Star - 19,562 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/15/2010 10:25:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/15/2010 9: 50: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23820159 - A fear so often
    Member: Greenwolfe 1962
    Comment: This is not one poem, it is two. The first 6 stanzas are incomplete and I would finish them and using the same title rewrite that first poem. The last 8 stanzas are all about music. This should be the title of this poem. This second poem is complete and is quite nice as it is. It still needs a little work but people will still enjoy it as it is. - Greenwolfe 1962



    Date & Time: 7/15/2010 9: 38: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23922601 - A calm river flow
    Member: Greenwolfe 1962
    Comment: There is some wisdom and some nice lines in this piece but it is much too long. It needs to be cut down a bit and the author needs to focus on some aspect of the river. This will force the writer to focus on the precise specific point he wants to make about the river. If he does this, the problems this poem carries with it will disappear. - Greenwolfe 1962

  • Gold Star - 19,562 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/15/2010 9:36:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/15/2010 9: 30: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23881339 - A day without charm
    Member: Roselyn Magbojos
    Comment: Let us get straight on the subject
    If apology is offered then not to reject
    It may amount to be greatness on our part
    Well it is nice gesture with very good start

    Then... I hope my apology will be accepted.

  • Gold Star - 19,562 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/13/2010 5:16:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/13/2010 12: 19: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23859466 - A change for while
    Member: Whispering Rose
    Comment: 'Offer shade like tree'
    a very well written poem...contains multiple facts and very good advices
    thank you for sharing



    Date & Time: 7/13/2010 8: 32: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23779426 - A blatant lie
    Member: Apoet Bangla
    Comment: Even your enemy may not stab you from the back
    He may be your sworn enemy but not attack
    It has to be taken as reality and experience at all the stages
    Even your friends may some time surprise you in your age

    Surprisingly you are writing some truths to combat the lies. Perhaps it is the achievement of writing poem. Yes, you have got your own tongue and mission to attain. Thank you very much.

    Regards,
    10+
    Apoet Bangla

  • Gold Star - 19,562 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/12/2010 9:14:00 PM)

    But what's wrong in trying even if I'm in misery?
    Hahaha, just give me chance please
    Dr, Subhendu, I beg of you if I insist
    Hasmukh Amathalal, tell me if I shall have to quit.

  • Gold Star - 19,562 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/11/2010 9:32:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/11/2010 8: 56: 00 PM
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    Poem: 21872772 - A never ending
    Member: Dwi Dwi Utami
    Comment: hey friend i.tink you have wrong tink, about this poem.LIFE NEVER ENDING, in the world not eternely just temporary, i.tink life ending if some poeple died, but your poem realy great, God luck.



    Date & Time: 7/11/2010 8: 51: 00 PM
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    Poem: 16893249 - ' Miss ', I really miss#(in 500)
    Member: Dwi Dwi Utami
    Comment: Ha.ha.ha. Yes i.know your feel, and you want to dance.and so much missing this is good poem, i.like it, bcoz i.also women.Congrat for you my friend.

  • Gold Star - 19,562 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/9/2010 6:42:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 7/9/2010 4: 13: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23861559 - A sacrifice once again
    Member: Roselyn Magbojos
    Comment: ...We have no words except to admire.

    Words are not enough to express my great admiration to you, Hasmukh! I'm just a speck of ink when it comes to your writings....10



    Date & Time: 7/9/2010 1: 42: 00 AM
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    Poem: 22108545 - A special thank
    Member: Roselyn Magbojos
    Comment: I like the way you composed your poem, it's very clear! I can easily get the real message of it. I'm your fan..

  • Gold Star - 19,562 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/8/2010 9:47:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/8/2010 9: 33: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23869586 - A cruel joke
    Member: Rosse Nor
    Comment: Paper talking but who can walk the talk? Only people with honor, sincerity and love shall divert our wrong path of material world to the right way of humble living.

    You are very real in this poem cause in this world, power, money and status-quo will speaks therefore everybody running after it and become more selfish.



    Date & Time: 7/8/2010 9: 17: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23869586 - A cruel joke
    Member: Hope Anonymous
    Comment: Excellent poem. 'World can be won over even without battles being fought' so true



    Date & Time: 7/8/2010 8: 23: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23805071 - Another world
    Member: Merna Ibrahim
    Comment: You are talking about the Never Land or the Utopia...but unfortunately, it doesn't exist on earth.However, it is always in my mind...
    Nice Work=)



    Date & Time: 7/8/2010 8: 17: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23779426 - A blatant lie
    Member: Merna Ibrahim
    Comment: I hate lying, hypocrisy and betrayal! !
    Indeed a meaningful and beautiful poem!
    keep it up :)

On face

My love sings
As you ring
In early morning
To wish me good morning

I wake up to hear the bell
Hat sound so nice to tell
I am back in real world
You have really bowled

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