Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 242,721 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Comments about Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/30/2014 6:00:00 AM)

    Never fades away....

    Anand Brown(4/30/2014 1: 33: 00 AM)
    Excellent poem, absorbing and engaging. It bears testament to the enduring quality of love and does so with poetic zest and class. Take a bow

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/28/2014 10:24:00 AM)

    Compassionate mother.....

    A lovely poem on mother. Being a mother myself, can very well relate to this poem. Thanks Hasmukhji.

    Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, india
    Apr 28,2014

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/23/2014 9:58:00 PM)

    For protection....

    i am in love with your words of wisdom! !

    Michelle24 minutes ago
    you are truly wonderful with your energy of words and a meaningful message behind it
    Comment +1

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/23/2014 8:43:00 PM)

    Give chance...

    United from within

    Tracy Bollinger4 minutes ago
    Internal conflict from within as destructive power exceeding that of nature. Give the true nature of man a chance, instead of the few bent on power. This may happen if enough people believe it can.
    I love the message that only a poet can deliver.
    Comment +1

    KR BALAKRISHNAN8 minutes ago
    Mehtajiii, I am glad that your poems are becoming brighter and brighter day by day. Reaching greater heights....
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    Stephen Kister9 minutes ago
    good idea

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/16/2014 9:51:00 PM)

    Cuckoo remind...

    I love the abstract feeling!

    Sydney ParkLess than a minute ago
    I find it really interesting when poems are written without an explanation or without being straightforward. I love how i really had to read into it and interpret to find what I think the meaning of it is. It is not a cliche poem with lots of rhyming. This is true poetry with what seems to be a deep purpose.
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    Metaphor really stood as something else

    Chelsea TrianoLess than a minute ago
    Great way of expanding the idea of being inspired and changed in heart through metaphorical ways
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/12/2014 2:28:00 AM)


    I am your si..
    Let us be respectful
    And make it successful
    That human tragedy is avoidable
    If we remain united and face the struggle

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/12/2014 2:27:00 AM)

    Life must release..

    catherine lajul
    You are God sent, with briliant poems

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/1/2014 10:20:00 AM)

    Flow in limit....

    sage advice indeed

    barbara greaves1 hour ago
    Prophetic words. Thanks for sharing
    Comment +1
    wonderfully done

    Billy Stephens1 hour ago
    keep up the good work
    Comment +1
    Good written

    Nabil Akif1 hour ago
    Good content..
    Comment +1
    Good flow

    Judith Newby1 hour ago
    Full of positive affirmations.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/30/2014 7:12:00 PM)

    Can afford....


    Piusha Singh7 hours ago
    True Hasmukh ji, political and religious big game.Dividing people across the border, spreading hatred in the air.
    Good write.
    Comment +1
    Jai Hind!

    Srirama Jayam6 hours ago
    There are no options really, for people in the defence services of the country, except to do their utmost and protect our beloved motherland. The political ramifications that are involved in making strategic moves in safeguarding our borders are not really easy to understand for the common man. The verses may be empowered with metre and rhyme to make it an enjoyable poem with a message.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/22/2014 8:56:00 PM)

    Freedom of expression...H..
    ammer down as is the nature of truth, I have heard this hammer work, it will bring down walls love has power, this poem holds love
    22 Mar by leafsailors Ghost to Freedom of expression

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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"Sir, take this as gift"
I could not shift eyes
He was old and poor peasant
Very humble in approach and visibly upset

"I am running from pillar to post
No one is paying heed and I am lost

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