Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 190,818 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/5/2014 6:39:00 AM)

    Simple, person..


    Amy Noborikawa19 minutes ago
    Love this poem. It talks of a simple man who does not pick fights, but is picked upon just because he does not appear to live up to someone else's standards. He does not understand the inner dislikes that people have. As much as he tries to figure out why, it is a game that he probably cannot win. I totally identify with this poem.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/4/2014 5:31:00 AM)

    o, rose

    Tibjee Kachroo Excellent, Once Milton was asked to admire rose in a sentence he said A rose is a rose is a rose.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/4/2014 5:30:00 AM)

    O, rose

    My dear Hasmukh Bhai, Your poem has something rare and really great It reminds of a reply given to Romeo by Juliet A rose by any other name would smell as sweet KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 58134 Jan 04,2014.....

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/3/2014 7:45:00 PM)

    Virtue is shadow, , , , , Fantastic

    Andy Everstine10 minutes ago
    We all need support...imagine what we could accomplish in this world.
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    very good

    malenky malenky12 minutes ago
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    very enjoyable

    Kate Noble13 minutes ago
    interesting concepts explored

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/3/2014 7:14:00 PM)

    Little significance

    Fantastic advice and rhyme scheme

    Stephanie Marilyn22 minutes ago
    I don't think there's anything I would change about this. It's relatable, wise, and understandable. Well expressed, good job. Nice reflecting.
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    Great Poem

    Elizabeth Waters24 minutes ago
    It was full of emotion.
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  • Geetha Jayakumar Geetha Jayakumar (12/30/2013 1:08:00 PM)

    Poet Hasmukh Amathlal
    One of the talented and respected poet.
    His poems flows freely on variety of topics.
    Its a beautiful gift you are blessed with.
    Thank you supporting me in this journey of poems.
    May you keep on contributing many valuable poems to this poetic world.
    Wishing you all the best.
    God Bless!
    Congratulations Sir, On Dec 30,2013 today you have attained #301 among the top 500 poets in PH.
    Thank You!

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/17/2013 7:44:00 PM)

    Hello dear

    Mohammad Jahoorul Islam carry on with these good poems...writings are real life...fresh like new winter vege....don't stop the pen...these are good advice too...these are good medicine...bless for all good utterances....
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/16/2013 9:23:00 PM)


    Think of life.....

    Archie Voaklander8 minutes ago
    This is great good job. Loved the fourth paragraph.
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    Well written and positive. I like it.,

    stan brierly7 minutes ago
    Yes don't waste time nor days.
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    Ahmad Al_khatat9 minutes ago
    Great epic

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/16/2013 4:32:00 AM)

    Below vast sky

    An encounter of the magical kind ending in dreamland... what could be better!

    Roger Sampson4 hours ago
    The first verse got me hooked and the last left me smiling... the way it ought to be :)

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/14/2013 11:44:00 PM)

    poetical basic

    Jean Smiley The Special Souls Born With A Unique, Spiritual, N Earthly, Cosmic Realm, Can Relate 2 Your Built N Source Of Widely Vast Knowledge. That Both Your Words N Picture Conotates.2 minutes ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

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God, Bless Only Those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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