hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 99,676 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 99,676 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/11/2013 8:10:00 PM)

    Re: My pen goes dry (Score: 1)
    by Seshat_Nibada on Friday, October 11,2013 (16: 59: 48)
    You definitely have the inner inspiration, all you are missing is a bit of finish and polish. But I find many of your poems have a lot of soul-food! Very Happy

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  • Gold Star - 99,676 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/11/2013 6:49:00 AM)

    Unlimited desire....

    Post The goodness of humans..blurred beyond recognition! Philo Francis4 hours ago Your words resonate all the truth..But we seem to have left our conscience behind.. Way too far behind! TQ Hasmukh for an awesome write! Comment +1 About human values

  • Gold Star - 99,676 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/11/2013 6:48:00 AM)

    Just a guess... Logan Geise28 minutes ago...is this about a song bird? The way life sometimes gets in the way of a person appreciating the simple/natural things that go on around them as time passes? I dunno. That's what I felt and agree with. Comment 0 Beautiful expressions great lines.

  • Gold Star - 99,676 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/10/2013 9:08:00 AM)

    WAO! A true wish

    Roland 'KingShip' EdiareLess than a minute ago
    Very well done, many have paid the price...to bring us to where we are, but the plight of the world today does not reflect much about what they fought and died for. I say Amen! To we need God once again.

  • Gold Star - 99,676 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/9/2013 7:08:00 PM)

    I love word

    Re: I love word (Score: 1)
    by Seshat_Nibada on Wednesday, October 09,2013 (12: 23: 16)
    I like how you explore topics, I feel on some level you are an ethical poet.

  • Gold Star - 99,676 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/8/2013 1:31:00 AM)

    With importance...... Re: With importance (Score: 1)
    by Seshat_Nibada on Monday, October 07,2013 (22: 43: 05)
    You know Jadia, this would have sounded great in Sanskrit. There are glimmers of something very poetic here, which I can appreciate. The rhyming did not feel forced and the Brahmin (arrogance) sounded more like translated from Bengali but captured something of the vedic consciousness just the same.

    I felt the power of renunciation and surrender to shakti throughout.

  • Gold Star - 99,676 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/8/2013 1:28:00 AM)

    I shall remain mother

    A voice for the mothers who face similar situations..The world over!

    Philo Francis4 minutes ago
    Grateful thanks for your depictions so deep, so strong, so powerful!
    Thank you Hasmukh.
    Comment +1
    history or fact

    Guilty Pleasure13 minutes ago
    Just a powerful poem, Well Done.

  • Gold Star - 99,676 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/7/2013 12:53:00 AM)

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    hussain smelter
    Really touched by your personality & the poetry, wish & pray for your long life with complete health & prosperity.
    Warm regards

  • Gold Star - 99,676 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/4/2013 6:37:00 PM)

    It pays occasionally

    Excellent you have hit the nail on the head-well done.

    stan brierly11 minutes ago
    You have a good style and I liked the poem.
    Comment +1

    malenky malenky13 minutes ago
    i love it good one
    Comment +1
    Very good

    Sean Barker12 minutes ago
    words of wisdom

  • Gold Star - 99,676 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/4/2013 6:24:00 PM)

    Simple entity.....

    i loved it

    El Bayoumy El Samanoudy19 minutes ago
    That I am simple entity is the base of the whole universal
    Comment 0
    It was really moving

    Ryan Hill19 minutes ago
    i really like the pauses it creates within the poem for the reader to reflect on the words you have written. I like the idea of the poem talking about the soul so genuinely and freely aswell as the words you have used to describe the way you feel about life. You could feel that it was genuine which is what i personally love about reading poems like this. I think you could work on expanding the ideas that you have about the soul within the poem. but overall it was really really good.

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Miss ', I Really Miss(246) /500 #

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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