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hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/24/2010 9:09:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 6/24/2010 7: 03: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23689151 - A basis for philosophy
    Member: Dr.tony Brahmin
    Comment: The philosophical concept is to be on right direction
    We should be prepared to go in that particular
    It can’t be confined to any particular intelligent group
    It has to be performed on stage in the form of troupe

    your conceptualisation on philosophy is very fine. thinking, emotions, feelings coined together it becomes poetic philosophy. thank u for sharing.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/24/2010 12:04:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 6/23/2010 11: 15: 00 PM

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    Poem: 21704849 - How Can I........
    Member: Argum Sheth
    Comment: How can I fly away with weak wings?
    How songs can become sweet until you sing?
    How memories can fade away till you are in safe house?
    How can I remain happy when hear no applause?
    it is readl tragedy.. nice poem....10



    Date & Time: 6/23/2010 11: 12: 00 PM

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    Poem: 23671119 - An honest always suffer
    Member: Gan Chennai
    Comment: Happy that few people like you are ready to think about Honesty. Your 60 odd years of experience give some hope about Honesty. Good



    Date & Time: 6/23/2010 11: 07: 00 PM

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    Poem: 23636757 - An ideal couple
    Member: Gan Chennai
    Comment: Great Gentle Man. Keep writing to keep your neurons active.



    Date & Time: 6/23/2010 10: 05: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20891339 - 400th mark
    Member: Amanda Shelton
    Comment: Beautiful words come out as if they fly in the wind.



    Date & Time: 6/23/2010 9: 55: 00 PM

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    Poem: 16893249 - ' Miss ', I really miss#(in 500)
    Member: Amanda Shelton
    Comment: I did injoy reading this.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/22/2010 10:06:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/22/2010 7: 39: 00 PM

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    Poem: 16893249 - ' Miss ', I really miss#(in 500)
    Member: Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee
    Comment: A very good poem indeed with sarcasm and passion mingled.



    Date & Time: 6/22/2010 3: 10: 00 PM

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    Poem: 23620197 - A burning desire
    Member: Marieta Maglas
    Comment: Vividly written and interesting to read. Excellent poem.



    Date & Time: 6/22/2010 9: 30: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23581557 - A bright tomorrow
    Member: Rosse Nor
    Comment: Sun was blazing all the way
    Striking heat waves with direct rays
    Forcing people to find shelter on the way
    but not letting any opportunity to pass or giving away
    I am very agree with what written in your poem.
    Sometimes reality of human atitude, action and reaction are actually chain of what been seen, learned and adopted thru sweet or bitter life experience.
    Well written and almast accurate with what actually happening to human nowdays.
    10 for reality poem.

  • Sarah Fleming (6/21/2010 7:05:00 AM)

    You write the nices poems

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/21/2010 6:53:00 AM)

    ate & Time: 6/21/2010 2: 13: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23581557 - A bright tomorrow
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK
    Comment: ‘Life seems full of uncertainties/One has to remain contended with varieties’…Sir always you decor corpus of poetry with nuggets …some places I find diamonded nuggets …love it most much…quoted above… thanks for sharing…
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10



    Date & Time: 6/21/2010 1: 41: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23569344 - A direct attack
    Member: Craig Mize
    Comment: It's a poem that tells a message that really needs to be told and you told it so well.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/20/2010 7:07:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 6/20/2010 12: 45: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23626637 - A little smile
    Member: Chaitanya Dorwat
    Comment: A fantastic write sir, enjoyed every word, so blessed would be that lover,
    every stanza states the thoughts that every soul feels when in love.
    Thank you for sharing such a pleasant work.



    Date & Time: 6/20/2010 12: 24: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23554601 - A notorious kids
    Member: Chaitanya Dorwat
    Comment: I just passed out 12th and left school, this poem compeled to go back to my school days.
    Thanks for sharing such a fantastic poem, sir.



    Date & Time: 6/19/2010 7: 59: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23569229 - At last she came
    Member: Rajaram Ramachandran
    Comment: The love-in-wait is difficult to bear with for anyone. Well composed.



    Date & Time: 6/19/2010 7: 56: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23545447 - A waka waka waka
    Member: Rajaram Ramachandran
    Comment: As you say, really the sports break all the barriers and unites all the world citizens at one place.



    Date & Time: 6/19/2010 7: 52: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23569344 - A direct attack
    Member: Rajaram Ramachandran
    Comment: A timely advice to the people who are the cause for this pollution around the world.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/18/2010 7:58:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/18/2010 9: 05: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23569344 - A direct attack
    Member: Swatimalya Chattopadhyay
    Comment: I was just thinking of writing a poem on global warming, Hasmukh overtook me.I was cut off from the site for quite some time and am astonished to find you have crossed 700 poems.HEARTIEST CONGRATS.My knowledge was upto your crossing 300, this is really commendable.

    The poem is very contemporary under the scorching heat prevailing for quite some time.It is well thought out.Your rhyming is always excellent.The poem reflects your enlightenment of the pertinent information and has beautifully portrayed the world bereft of soft, wet touch of the nature.I give secret voting, but of late voting no.is always slipping away.So your open vote is ten out of ten, a well deserved score.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/17/2010 8:17:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/17/2010 11: 06: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23598370 - A change that was never
    Member: Rafique Farooqi
    Comment: simply... changes we face in our life are unavoidable, and these never in our control, and finally we find ourselves bare handed

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/16/2010 8:01:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/16/2010 11: 00: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23540272 - A bye gone is bye gone
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK
    Comment: ‘It may be of no use if we lament for past and repeat same in present’…

    If stay in past and future the present we’ll loose…

    Swami Vivekananda affirmed us ‘A saint had a past and a sinner has a future’

    You’ve encouraged us to Vedic chat Charaivati [march onward] …by the way it is said that natural forgetting is but a catharsis…a vent to protect us a safety valve…

    Excellent poetry and a psychic booster and remembrencer
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10

    PS Sir with humility may I request you to delet a commentless post below mine...as I respect you so saying Sir

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/15/2010 10:37:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/15/2010 9: 53: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23475251 - A change at the end
    Member: Rosse Nor
    Comment: I can understand why poeple can change at the end. Actually they did not change but they just revealed what is truly they are. human can not never expect anything to be the same forever and last long. Time, situation and necessity will provokes changes but the choice is open; either to be ourself or to please someone else. Both ways; there are colateral and stakes to be considered before we use our freedom of choice to make decision.
    very intense of inner and self questioning poem. very well done.

God, bless only those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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