Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 285,525 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/13/2014 8:48:00 AM)

    I could reach


    KR BALAKRISHNAN17 minutes ago
    good poem.I consider this poet as a revolutionary poet in the sense that he has bravely adopted to create a robust structure in most of his poems, regardless of the theme dealt with. He has opened his own path of writing poetry, which has to be appreciated.
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    Nice poem

    Nita Varma17 minutes ago
    I liked the way in which you have expressed yourself

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/13/2014 7:33:00 AM)

    Complete heaven

    Re: Complete heaven (Score: 1)
    by Lilwing on Friday, June 13,2014 (02: 21: 16)
    Such beautiful words...profoundly deep yet even someone who's never been in love, can feel your heart! ?Thank you for sharing yourself so intimately??

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    on Friday, June 13,2014 (08: 32: 09)
    welcome lilwing. kind regards

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/13/2014 7:31:00 AM)

    You are right..
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    Re: You are right (Score: 1)
    on Friday, June 13,2014 (08: 28: 21)
    welcome anthony. regards

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/11/2014 9:53:00 PM)

    Premilah Ramnauth Hasmukh Mehta am no poet nor poetress..neither do I aspire to be one....am simple woman...I keep repeating it...u r a prized author....I salute you Sir

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/6/2014 8:38:00 PM)

    Girl for you.....Deep

    Michal Cendrowski9 hours ago
    a pre-determined love?
    Comment +1

    Michael Sechrest9 hours ago
    Very lovely poem, and I feel that your accent seems to bleed into your writing which I find interesting it gives the writing a certain tone you dont see too often. The idea of finding that special someone from an early age is a good topic to write on and you clearly have done so from a unique perspective, so I rather like this poem.

  • Amir Mohammad Islami Chalandar (6/6/2014 7:02:00 AM)

    excellent poems. you are great in explaining your feels. i invite you to read my poem

  • Richard Beevor Richard Beevor (5/29/2014 2:33:00 AM)

    Thank you for your comments, much appreciated and an honour from someone as you, I would like to be considered one of the top 500 poets, you stand in exalted company and well deserved too, I have read many of your poems and they are extremely high standard, please keep writing, its a pleasure to read your work.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/28/2014 5:46:00 PM)

    You write......Feeling the Nature around

    Bhuwan Joshi20 hours ago
    Definitely a nice pointer to those of us who have no time to stand and stare the gifts of Nature......
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    Good but could be better

    Arsi Anon20 hours ago
    It sounds incomplete. You should revise the ending. Also, you have a few grammar mistakes. But the idea is there and it is strong. It's a pretty creative idea, I guess, writing about writing. I like it, but you could improve it. :)

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/28/2014 5:25:00 PM)

    Let nobody......Thank you! I think that relationships between man and man or woman or woman are not as strong...the thing is if I am a woman, I already know what a woman is like so it is somewhat boring to keep on experiencing the same thing and if I make friends with a man it will be different and it tends to be more fun because I am learning how man are like. Beautiful write but I think woman and woman or man and man can get along fine, it is a matter of understanding that is all.
    9 hours ago by Munashe Mumbama | Reply

  • Richard Beevor Richard Beevor (5/24/2014 10:12:00 AM)

    excellent poems sir, I wonder if you could read some of mine and give me your advice please, I would like to improve, thank you, I am http: //www.poemhunter.com/richard-allen-beevor/

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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God, Bless Only Those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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