hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 38,007 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/12/2012 2:14:00 AM)

    Mehta sir, I am so fond of your poetry for they poignantly portray human values, love and affection etc.. Language and thought flow together in your poems. With regards.

    Thummuri Sharath Babu, Warangal (A.P)
    Aug 12,2012

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  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2012 9:10:00 PM)

    come to me....Abdul Wahab beautiful is yr poem, more beautiful is yr wisdom of rhyme, and marvellous are the thoughts expressed craftly in an exquiste poem, i love it..
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  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/28/2012 7:46:00 PM)

    Dear Shri Hasmukh Mehta ji, Many many thanks for your comments and your beautiful poem. Your ability to produce instantly, meaningful and beautiful poetry is amazing Sir. With best regards,


    Sathyanarayana, Nellore
    Jul 28,2012

  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/28/2012 7:03:00 PM)

    One of the holy object....Jyotsna Gandhi thank you so much Hasmukh Mehta ji i am so much thankful for such humble and lovely words which have certainly came out of your heart. i am glad to see your generosity... thanks alot :)
    8 hours ago · Like

  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/28/2012 6:41:00 PM)

    Ekaterina Polishchuk when i read the poem: long or short i always enjoyed the melody it sounds (since my childhood) . and i tell if the melody flows, the poem is successfull. i mean it has its own mystic energy to give us a massage. i like thi poem because of its rhyme structure and contest, it sonds bright.
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  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/25/2012 11:29:00 PM)

    Kitty Savage I'm excited to read some of your poetry Hasmukh! Don't be a stranger with it!
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  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/24/2012 1:32:00 AM)

    Mehta ji, Thank you very much. Your response is in the form of a poem as usual, by filling in the absent part of my poem. I really astonish at your spontaneity. A gifted poet.

    K. Sadasivan, Chennai
    Jul 24,2012

  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/19/2012 12:01:00 AM)

    I have read your poems one that stuck out to me was life is beautiful i have not lived long enough to understand or comprehend life but you certainly have :) i can tell you are a wise old me and thank you for your invitation Best hopes: Richie(Venus)

  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/15/2012 10:04:00 PM)

    Efe Light Sakpere ?3300 poems! whao! hasmukh, u're indeed an industry of intellectual creation added to the fabric of humanity! lol.
    8 hours ago · Like

    Efe Light Sakpere lovely lovely, meaningful poem. this is great hasmukh!
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  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/15/2012 9:49:00 PM)

    Payal Pasha
    thank u for such a lovely poem sir... I like ur poems very much...they are with feeling for humanity or environment around ur or based on peace and sufferings....it shows ur character..

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Miss ', I Really Miss(246) /500 #

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
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Ragging

Universities and campus prepare their grave,
In the guise of education they put front brave,
Bur on ground of morality they cave in,
Line drawn clear but education thin,

Great fall in standard and knowledge lagging,
More efforts on fashion and thrust on ragging,
Many loose their lives on name of flogging,
It is blot or shame and prestige more dragging,

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