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(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/13/2010 2:05:00 AM)

    Re: Closeness

    Postby Glata » Fri Jan 08,2010 6: 48 pm
    To me, this verse says more than you could possibly know...

    To cast doubt means end of cordiality
    Halt in warmth relation and start of hostility
    Hurling of abuses and accusing to each other
    May sour the relation with more to bother


    How utterly true this is! Very wonderful write, Jadia...you're a man that speaks with wisdom...
    Hugs to you, my friend...
    Glata

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/11/2010 1:14:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 1/10/2010 11: 13: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20969953 - Poems with difference
    Member: Aira Olayvar
    Comment: Very nice!

    “Ideas may suddenly emerge in sequence
    Mind may pick up and build it as consequence.”

    It is the true way of the poets/ most of the writers, and the best part of it is when we are walking, which allows us of no readiness for pens and papers. Though most often times, when we are busy doing our job that the thoughts just suddenly emerge from nowhere.

    ‘How to project it rightly may prove as acid test
    It may be looked as fine blend of poetry and best.”

    Yeah, this is well said… because if novel were the words best arrange, poetry should be the best words in its best arrangement… that’s why I am here to practice. hehe

    “You got to sail through and find the way
    Stars and sky will be yours with more to say”

    So this is it… and that’s it.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2010 9:46:00 PM)

    From : Gomer Davis (Lakeland United States; Male; 46)
    To : Hasmukh Amathalal
    Date Time : 1/10/2010 8: 20: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject : 400th mark

    Hasmukh, I just read 400th mark and find very entertaining. I want to ask you a question, that has nothing to do with this poem, but this question just popped in my head. Do you write the poems in your native language first, then translate them to english, or do you convert the thoughts in your mind before you transpose them to paper so to speak. or is the just a really stupid question? I apologize if the latter is your response. I will for sure read more of your poetry, as I do also hope that you will read mine.
    Thank you for your time and have pleasant day sir.

    reply....

    No dear this is reality I come across despite being so nice to our readers. They take it negative merely on the ground that we are simply troubling them. But it must be understood that it is necessity to reach to every readers and this is only medium available to us.

    You are right in your assumption that it may be first in native language then to the English. This is not the case so. I may be guided or influenced by the style in which have been exposed from childhood but let me assure you, it comes from heart and as instant idea. I thank God for the simple reason that He fills my mind with immediate thoughts and I immediately execute it. I am not aware of any apprehension but simply follow inner conscience.u r free to ask me any question.

    Dear one heartening news if you can appreciate it. World Christianity forum has accepted my poem. Lovely life as
    Their main prayer and displayed in Ezine articles.com

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2010 9:10:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/10/2010 8: 21: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20890994 - Between lines
    Member: Ricardo Flores
    Comment: This has so much potential within it.
    it is the kind of poem that brightens me with emotion in fact.
    I admire this.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2010 9:07:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/10/2010 10: 55: 00 AM

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    Poem: 20891339 - 400th mark
    Member: Romeo Della Valle
    Comment: Excellent confession! coming from the bottom of your honest heart! Poetry is a non-stop process we go through with no time limit...Inspirations come and Inspirations go, but the ones we can hold, become the centered stage of a master piece poem...10+++

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/9/2010 5:54:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 1/8/2010 10: 31: 00 PM

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    Poem: 18254711 - Bidding farewell
    Member: Alex Nodopaka
    Comment: It seems rhyme comes easy to you but I know how difficult it is. Your mastery of teh English language is commendable.

  • John Maxwell (1/6/2010 12:04:00 PM)

    Thank you for your kind comment. I have just read your' Accept Everything.'
    What a great insight to ones everyday living, and life in general. Great write!

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/4/2010 4:30:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 1/2/2010 9: 08: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20864751 - Love to fly
    Member: Thomas Mofford
    Comment: I read many of your poems and they resonated for me.
    I garnered thoughts for my keeping. (thank you)
    I like poems that ask questions.
    Yah, it 'makes me think.'
    Sure, read my poems.
    I have an 'I am'poem.
    Happy New Year

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/4/2010 4:29:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 1/2/2010 9: 08: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20864751 - Love to fly
    Member: Thomas Mofford
    Comment: I read many of your poems and they resonated for me.
    I garnered thoughts for my keeping. (thank you)
    I like poems that ask questions.
    Yah, it 'makes me think.'
    Sure, read my poems.
    I have an 'I am'poem.
    Happy New Year

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/1/2010 7:07:00 PM)

    te & Time: 1/1/2010 6: 49: 00 PM

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    Poem: 20139791 - I miss
    Member: Flames Of Desire Consumed By The Fire
    Comment: Such interesting construction of words...I'm more of a plainly spoken person than a complication of words. Still, I felt somewhat of a connection to it's meaning. You clearly have mastered the word of poetry to my knowledge. If I'm unable to fathom it wholly, It usually means I've found a more skilled, intelligent one than myself. Grand job.

God, bless only those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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