hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 44,856 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/27/2012 4:22:00 PM)

    Re: Go away (Score: 1)
    by Ego_Rocks2x on Sunday, June 10,2012 (10: 54: 49)
    You are so wise. All of your poems are really good, and i really liked this one. It makes sense. I feel the meaning of your words and they touch me on such a different level that I can't describe it. I'm telling you this as a friend: Never stop writing.

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  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/26/2012 4:33:00 AM)

    3: 01pm
    Thanks Hasmukh for accepting my friend request, much appreciated, I must also say I enjoy reading your poetry, which is always interesting. Best wishes, NEil.

  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/18/2012 10:15:00 PM)

    Hasmukhji, your creativity in responding to a verse with a verse is great. Thanks for your time. Warm regards.


    Safiyyah, UK
    Aug 18,2012

  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/12/2012 2:15:00 AM)

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    Somebody tells that children are the enemies of our previous birth! I don't really know. Some of them for sure, do not return love. You observe everything around, and put it in writing. Really exciting


    U K Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur, Kerala
    Aug 11,2012

  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/12/2012 2:14:00 AM)

    Mehta sir, I am so fond of your poetry for they poignantly portray human values, love and affection etc.. Language and thought flow together in your poems. With regards.

    Thummuri Sharath Babu, Warangal (A.P)
    Aug 12,2012

  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2012 9:10:00 PM)

    come to me....Abdul Wahab beautiful is yr poem, more beautiful is yr wisdom of rhyme, and marvellous are the thoughts expressed craftly in an exquiste poem, i love it..
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  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/28/2012 7:46:00 PM)

    Dear Shri Hasmukh Mehta ji, Many many thanks for your comments and your beautiful poem. Your ability to produce instantly, meaningful and beautiful poetry is amazing Sir. With best regards,


    Sathyanarayana, Nellore
    Jul 28,2012

  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/28/2012 7:03:00 PM)

    One of the holy object....Jyotsna Gandhi thank you so much Hasmukh Mehta ji i am so much thankful for such humble and lovely words which have certainly came out of your heart. i am glad to see your generosity... thanks alot :)
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  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/28/2012 6:41:00 PM)

    Ekaterina Polishchuk when i read the poem: long or short i always enjoyed the melody it sounds (since my childhood) . and i tell if the melody flows, the poem is successfull. i mean it has its own mystic energy to give us a massage. i like thi poem because of its rhyme structure and contest, it sonds bright.
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  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/25/2012 11:29:00 PM)

    Kitty Savage I'm excited to read some of your poetry Hasmukh! Don't be a stranger with it!
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