hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 38,812 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 38,812 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/15/2012 9:49:00 PM)

    Payal Pasha
    thank u for such a lovely poem sir... I like ur poems very much...they are with feeling for humanity or environment around ur or based on peace and sufferings....it shows ur character..

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  • Gold Star - 38,812 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/15/2012 7:20:00 AM)

    Fafa M. StephenGow Mehta, I appreciate. Your verses are even more appreciated and moving
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  • Gold Star - 38,812 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/9/2012 9:41:00 AM)

    Abdul Wahab i am thinking to give you a suggestion, but afrid you might mind it..i know you for a long time....you have evry thing as a poet and you got more than 3000 poems too..this a great achievement...i belive so...but yr form of poetry is classic one /old one......i like you to experiment with the post modernism....
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  • Gold Star - 38,812 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/7/2012 9:16:00 AM)

    Michael Kozubek (United States ;)
    Mehta hasmukh amathalal
    Date Time:
    7/4/2012 12: 58: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
    a prolific poet
    You are a prolific poet and the same age as I am as well. Keep writing. I am glad I finally read your message and some of your poems.

  • Gold Star - 38,812 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/5/2012 8:23:00 PM)


    Lines flow meticulously in your poems! Correct rhymes and novel ideas. All the best

    u k atiyodi, kandangali, payyanur, kerala 670307
    July 05,2012

  • Gold Star - 38,812 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/2/2012 3:45:00 AM)

    Re: Slow poison (Score: 1)
    by vexations on Sunday, July 01,2012 (10: 20: 30)
    Powerful words. | Delete this message

    Karen Sinclair(7/2/2012 3: 26: 00 AM)
    So true... the powers that be (i am reacting to this write in my own country's sorry state of affairs) , they sit in their glory holes stroking their own egos forgetting their promises to the masses with no due care and attention... they honestly do believe (i think) that they are above all explanations once they are in power and its sickening that this goes on century after century (worldwide)
    A lot of members of parliament here (within the last year) have been found to be fixing their taxes and us the public have been paying for second homes, wives or girlfriends getting paid as secretaries and all sorts of shenanigans, well thats how i understand it.
    Your write is so relevant to not just one country, its a worldwide sickening accepted behaviour of the wealthy using their pulling power and contacts to just get an easy ride at everyone else's expense...
    Sorry for my vent but your write just got me going...slow poison indeed

  • Gold Star - 38,812 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/28/2012 12:06:00 AM)

    Owoyale Oluwafemi I am your fan: -)

  • Gold Star - 38,812 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/24/2012 11:54:00 PM)

    Sirajali Kalima (leeds United Kingdom; Male; 34)
    Mehta hasmukh amathalal
    Date Time:
    6/23/2012 7: 17: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)
    no black and white love poem
    a very beautiful and well written poem. it is a very profound poem but very nice. keep on writing.

  • Gold Star - 38,812 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/24/2012 8:52:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem, I called attention to choose your maturity, speaks of a beautiful person who thinks and has a beautiful content within your being, kiss, Henry

  • Gold Star - 38,812 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/19/2012 10:33:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/19/2012 7: 31: 00 PM
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    Poem: 31577461 - His presence
    Member: M. J Darracott
    Comment: Thank you for inviting me into your world of poetry. I am glad that I came. I am of the opinion that poets are brothers in mankind as much as soldiers in combat. I see that the thoughts of a poet are shared worldwide. I would strongly urge you to continue writing and I will continue to look for more of your poems in my search for answers to Life as well. Again, thank you.

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