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hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/9/2010 4:23:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 6/9/2010 3: 10: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23486084 - A Kidda is cat
    Member: Lady Grace
    Comment: this is nice dedication to my kida...my gosh..how i wish, he will not die..everybody loves him..even neighbors, love him too..as if i am not a successful veterinarian if i cant heal kida..coz he is our only pet here..i'll wake up in between hours at evening just to let him drink milk..and in the morning, i wrapped him a blanket and bath in the sun..but even fish he didnt eat..my gosh, only milk he want to take..i may buy pediasure so that he can recover fast, , but i dont know if he can still make it...but i am so sad, might he will die..accdg to ian, kida is old already but he is 3 years old..so, i dont know if its a sign of old age...i let him take amoxicillin 250 mg a day..hope this will work...i want to see him run and play..u know, its a grerat problem if classes will start..i cant go to work if kida is still sick..coz no one will take care for him, who will give water and milk...of course, i cant bring him to farm and office...so, thats a big problem now...and my goshhhh, ...i am thankful that u made a poem for kida..i am very proud of it...

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/8/2010 10:43:00 PM)

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    Poem: 22503984 - An open invitation
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK

    Comment: ‘Show me single place where you feel I am absent? ’…Omnipresent…

    ‘Come to me o, sons and daughters for simple salvation’…Omnipotent…Giver of salvation

    Excellent Poetry on God…Wahooo….

    Swambhabani Yoge … Yoge… Yoge ~ Gita

    Thanks Uncle for such a ‘Glory-Unto-God’ poetry

    10//10 ~ Well vote for the hallowed readers of this poetry
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/6/2010 7:50:00 PM)

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    Poem: 23434357 - A free advice
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK

    Comment: UWPRR [Un Wanted Pseudo Ready Reckoner] are of zero value…

    ‘Leaders are not crated over night…’ indeed so…reminds me Swami Vivekananda’s saying ‘first be a servant then expect to be a leader. ‘…Very much contemplative poetry Sir

    ‘It is said world can be made to bend/You act in good manner…’ wisely …prudent
    10//10++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/5/2010 7:10:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/5/2010 8: 27: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23356525 - A dark clouds
    Member: Rosse Nor
    Comment: 'Life can’t be shaped at the point of gun'
    { only who can understand beyond their need or fear can accept the karma, cycle of destiny and no body can force or make it happen without The Almighty permission}
    i really apprecieted your poem as it is at it's own class and it's for human to think more than what they see.
    Thanks

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/3/2010 9:03:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/3/2010 6: 56: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23405423 - A noble friend
    Member: Aira Olayvar
    Comment: This poem is full of meaning, I really caught with this:

    “Many friends may suggest to go to bar
    Long highway race in speeding car
    Such friends deserve complete bar
    Real friend remains very far.”

    Sometimes, actually, for the search of companionship, we are resorting to friendship, yet by far, we always end up hurting ourselves for trusting most of those we call a friend. Traitors usually come in the middle of this people. The better way we can do is to first make friends with ourselves if we are able to do that, harmony and peace will follow. No man is an island I know… but first, we must make it ourselves and then attracted the real friends. (Noble ones!)

    :)



    Date & Time: 6/3/2010 6: 48: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23394130 - A blood hots up
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK
    Comment: Terrorism [in the name of religion ethnicity, race, skin color economics &c] well poemed…why so much shed of blood?

    Are we civilized? Or,
    ‘Civilized Ignorant’ fanatic….

    You’ve hammered the brain of civil society me…to ponder…

    How to get out? You’ve prescribed, ‘I want to give message of peace/abhor the violence…’

    ]Will it reach to dead and silenced heart…I don’t say ear…
    10/10
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/2/2010 12:12:00 PM)

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    Poem: 23394130 - A blood hots up
    Member: Aira Olayvar

    Comment: To sit together and bring an end to bloodshed, it sounds easy yeah? But it is very impossible. Well, hopefully, who knows…?

    Let’s just pray… it is really a heart-ache my friend.





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    Poem: 23365932 - A beautiful song
    Member: Aira Olayvar

    Comment: “Basically human beings are social animals
    They may react lately and wait for catastrophes arrival
    It is human weakness and can’t be remedied
    It has to be given importance and studied”

    This poem indeed is very meaningful, seriously speaking; it tackles just what’s the hottest issue of this days. Though, I actually could not think of humans as animals, yet it’s true, humans are social beings, having different mind-sets, principles and beliefs and that most-often times is the same reason why we’re the once that causes the conflicts.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/1/2010 9:51:00 PM)

    Oh I so like Graham's wonderful interpretation of this piece! I totally agree Jadia. Your pieces hold such a wonderful insight and are so inspirational, that it sometimes takes my breath away.. Keep that pen flowing my friend..


    Hugs,
    Moonie xx: friends: : friends:

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/1/2010 9:50:00 PM)

    Re: An innovative way

    You have an insight sir of which many ignore, we may abuse our minds with little effect but to abuse our bodies is a quick step to demise, be kind to both body and mind and we will live longer and enjoy more of the fruits of life that it has to offer~Graham.


    © penfold18

    Mon May 31,2010 10: 58 pm

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/1/2010 9:49:00 PM)

    Re: An innovative way

    You have an insight sir of which many ignore, we may abuse our minds with little effect but to abuse our bodies is a quick step to demise, be kind to both body and mind and we will live longer and enjoy more of the fruits of life that it has to offer~Graham.


    © penfold18

    Mon May 31,2010 10: 58 pm

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/1/2010 9:48:00 PM)

    Re: Last leg

    Sometimes the last journet is so painful and slow that it breaks those who love the dyings hearts..It is not simple to lay to rest a parent or family member..The thing is to let them know how much they mean to you every day of their lives..while they are still with us..I hate cemetarys..lol and God bless..Kathie


    © Valentine

God, bless only those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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