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hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/5/2010 8:11:00 PM)

    Re: Sixth ton
    by MoonStar Rose ยป Sat May 01,2010 12: 04 pm
    Re: Sixth ton

    Jadia all have words that we put forward and wonder on how it will be received by our fellow peers. You have the words of a true thinker. A poet with a heart that is vast and open as the sea. Your imagery carries us along so many places and sights and I am so thankful that you come forward and bring all you do, for it is a great joy to set my eyes upon such beauty..

    Thank you for being YOU!

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/5/2010 5:16:00 AM)

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    Poem: 22849007 - At the top
    Member: Venkat Ramanna

    Comment: How do you feel at the top of the ladder?
    You may look happy with enough money as trader
    Fortune smiles with top slot in the ministry as leader
    Good contracts and successful planner as bidder...... must be unique one with satisfaction, , , , ,10





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    Poem: 17423284 - Mary to merry
    Member: Erica Santana

    Comment: Great poem it really describes what a woman thinks about when she is about to get married
    I give it a 10





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    Poem: 18451154 - Humble submission
    Member: Erica Santana

    Comment: The imagery is really great I can totally picture my self in the poem





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    Poem: 16893249 - ' Miss ', I really miss#(in 500)
    Member: Mahanish Jung Thapa

    Comment: in this post-modernism era most poems are in abstract form but simplicity and clarity counts for me and that's the best part of your poem'abhi to main jawan hoon' haha....

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/3/2010 7:53:00 PM)

    satish kumar..
    we can not describing of thes poem wat's wonderfull use a word in this poem
    have a nice day!

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/3/2010 7:52:00 PM)

    Dear Mr.Hasmukh, ........Excellent poem........after reading your poem I just remember the quote of Sharon Doubiago...'My mother is a poem I'll never be able to write, though everything I write is a poem to my mother.....With love, light and peace.......Virendra Aswal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/30/2010 8:40:00 PM)

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    Poem: 22929346 - A welcome change
    Member: warner treuter

    Comment: It's true you use an abundance of words, but then you have a lot to say. Actually a bit of an overload for most of us in thought, but your poetry, I believe, lies more in the melody and harmony than in any particular theme. It would not surprise me if you were a musician as well as a poet.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/28/2010 9:06:00 AM)

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    Poem: 22921848 - A difficult separation
    Member: Seema Chowdhury

    Comment: sir,
    this is such a nice poem full of emotions and realities. your wife should be very proud of you and herself. while reading this beautiful poem, i could see the tenderness flowing through each word smoothly. very well written and well composed poem. thanks for sharing.

  • Naomi De'Luca (4/19/2010 5:23:00 PM)

    Simply riveting! I had to read more of your verses!

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/19/2010 7:42:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 4/18/2010 11: 20: 00 PM
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    Poem: 22249305 - A day to start with....
    Member: Jordan Legaspi
    Comment: Nature never deserts us and offer fine place
    How easily we can forget and replace?
    We can act thankless and invite the wrath
    It is one step away from loosing faith

    Nice poem it deals with human nature actaully -the many facets of our character, human being.
    and this verse, to me served as the focal point of the whole poem...the question on what we are doing to our 'mother earth', thus, the reality of pain and sorrow and all the unpleasant realities in our world is the cause of our human tendencies.

    all the best

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/18/2010 10:29:00 PM)

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    Poem: 22693665 - A clear emotions
    Member: Leonard Dabydeen

    Comment: A very clever play of emotions in this poem. It's like battling with the rhyme and rhythm to maintain a sober climax in its flow. I almost wanted to take each first line in the poem to create another emotional rush.....must say it's a good read.
    Thanks for sharing.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/17/2010 11:24:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 4/17/2010 9: 06: 00 PM

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    Poem: 22513851 - A magic in music
    Member: Greenwolfe 1962
    Comment: Again. This ending is not good. But this poem is a big, big improvement over 'A Desire' and it has genuine poetic qualities that I found enjoyable. The rhymes are much better and the word selections are as well. This was much, much easier to read and enjoy. In fact, I can even recommend this poem to others. I would just tell them to not pay attention to the last verse. It is really poor. This is because the worst thing you can do to a reader is not end a poem. This poem has no end. - Greenwolfe 1962

Never say die

Never say die, you have no way
As you may also go any one day,
you may be laid on grounds as soul lost,
carried by those whom you hated most,

Immortal you are not so never word spell,
Name may remain but bade farewell,
nothing is permanent, all stands to vanish,
Game will be over when you are finish,

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