hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/23/2010 6:09:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 2/23/2010 2: 16: 00 AM
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    Poem: 21552083 - Child abuse
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK
    Comment: Hmmm Human Rights! ! ...Is Phonic diarrhea! Conceptual Conception? [taking from my father’s poetry]…what you say as lip service...

    The most interesting point you wrote: ‘Why it is that flower which should see light of the day is simply crushed?

    This reminds me great essayist Sd. Mujtasba Ali [in Bengali] wrote we love children do we cut their head and décor vase? Why in flower we do it?


    A humane write for Human Rights scholastic indeed...
    10++
    Ms. Nivedita

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/17/2010 10:06:00 PM)

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    Poem: 21421052 - Diamonds are forever
    Member: John Knight

    Comment: Hi Hasmukh - Theis is a megapoem with very good rhytm and rhyme. I has good flow. V 1 Diamonds are a condensed form of carbon and are valuable because of their rarity - hardness - durability and lustre. It is magic jewel that has dazzled Kings - Knights - Knaves throughout human history. V 2 Diamonds represent wealth and stability and they are the greatest symbol of love between a man and a woman. V 3 Ladies are like diamonds - priceless and multifaceted. V 4 They glow with an inner light. V 5 Jewellry crafted with daimonds is always beautiful and alwys fashionable. V 6 Each diamomnd - like each lady - have an intrinsic beauty nothing can mar. V 7 Diamond is the hardest substance known to man. The moral is: Never mess witha woman! V 8 Never underestimate a woman - like a diamomnd her value increases day by day. An older woman brings experience to all circumastances! V 9 The depth of fire - in a diamond - is unfathamable. Likewise the depth of love and devotion is infinite compared with man's shallowness. V 10 Men forget and eliminate but (V 11) Ladies remember everything - know everything - can do everything - like diamonds their love and devotion is forever. God created Adam first - he looked at the product - rechecked and revised His blueprint and created woman - PERFECTION. Thanks for sharing - Yours in Poetry - JOHN.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/17/2010 10:04:00 PM)

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    Poem: 21421052 - Diamonds are forever
    Member: Joey Valenzuela

    Comment: wow...this can be a best letter to friend....a promise that freindship will never end...the value of friendship is priceless and is never changing....

    i was so pleased you invited me to read this brightest piece....

    and another one...diamond cant be created..its natural and so is friendship...
    i should have told my friends that they are diamonds....

    thanks for this....

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/16/2010 8:10:00 AM)

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    Poem: 21085528 - What is it to me
    Member: Pratheek Praveen Kumar

    Comment: 'Life is full circle journey to be carried on
    With half hearted attempt no battle can be won'
    - 'What is it to me'.

    Very poetic and pregnant with insight.
    .
    I read your all 459 poems and enjoyed them all,
    but ones like 'What is it to me' stand out for
    their wonderful expressions.

    Also appreciated your charming expressions deep
    from heart in 'Sister-in-law'. Truly revealing and
    enjoyable. Let god give you good luck with your
    sisters-in-law. Good luck.

    - PRATHEEK PRAVEEN KUMAR

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/16/2010 8:10:00 AM)

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    Poem: 21085528 - What is it to me
    Member: Pratheek Praveen Kumar

    Comment: 'Life is full circle journey to be carried on
    With half hearted attempt no battle can be won'
    - 'What is it to me'.

    Very poetic and pregnant with insight.
    .
    I read your all 459 poems and enjoyed them all,
    but ones like 'What is it to me' stand out for
    their wonderful expressions.

    Also appreciated your charming expressions deep
    from heart in 'Sister-in-law'. Truly revealing and
    enjoyable. Let god give you good luck with your
    sisters-in-law. Good luck.

    - PRATHEEK PRAVEEN KUMAR

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/16/2010 8:08:00 AM)

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    Poem: 20428372 - Jealousy
    Member: Joey Valenzuela

    Comment: love: hate
    good: bad
    ....and for me.......
    jealousy: acceptance

    jealousy results chaos...either deep within or physical.
    on the otherhand if 'acceptance' is present you wouldn't be envy for anybody, because you can accept that you are not as good as the other.....

    the poet criticizes jealous people by setting the point of view to himself, because more probably, the author don't want to hurt them..insult them...

    why the jealous people wont be hurted? ..
    its because they'd feel that they are not alone, and feel pity to someone like them...

    the author disguises himself as one of those jealous people to criticize them and at the same time not to be hated by those said jealous people....

    actually, the approach of the author is intellegent...and he presented good ideas....no, not just good but best ideas....the author is full of wisdom...i salute him on that....

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (2/7/2010 4:25:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 2/6/2010 9: 28: 00 PM

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    Poem: 21286019 - Unknown factor
    Member: Seema Chowdhury
    Comment: sir thankyou for sharing this wonderful piece with all.
    it reflects the depth of your thoughts and experience.
    valuable lesson to be learnt from this.

  • Maia Padua (2/4/2010 10:27:00 PM)

    great..
    back to stone age....nice to imagine how is life being there...
    back to medieval times...back to the past
    nice.....
    10++++

    Maia

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/31/2010 4:25:00 AM)

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    Poem: 21096246 - Woman's womb
    Member: Fay Slimm
    Comment: Woman and the womb which bears the race who inhabit this planet deserve every line in this careful tribute which outlines the immensity of the task. Thank you friend.



    Date & Time: 1/31/2010 12: 05: 00 AM

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    Poem: 21216605 - Crusade or struggle
    Member: Fay Slimm
    Comment: Musings on life my friend take us to all sorts of conclusions and this well constructed rhyme is an example of poetic musing around the subject while there is still time.10 from Fay

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/30/2010 10:01:00 AM)

    Re: Crusade or struggle (Score: 1)
    by angeroseblue on Saturday, January 30,2010 (10: 32: 43)
    i enjoy your poems
    you put forth a lot of effort on them and
    it shows deeply
    Great! ! Very Happy

Never say die

Never say die, you have no way
As you may also go any one day,
you may be laid on grounds as soul lost,
carried by those whom you hated most,

Immortal you are not so never word spell,
Name may remain but bade farewell,
nothing is permanent, all stands to vanish,
Game will be over when you are finish,

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