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hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/11/2010 9:58:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 4/11/2010 11: 16: 00 AM

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    Poem: 22395309 - A desire
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK
    Comment: ‘…Love …It is beautiful union of two souls…’

    Yeah and yeah Sir…soul in our culture [Indic] is different from others… its Ataman…

    Yeah discourse of Yagyanyablaka and Maitri had talk on this Soul was discussed…
    In today’s reality the meaning of Soul has come to soul…
    Thanks Uncle
    Voted 10++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/10/2010 2:24:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 4/9/2010 2: 02: 00 PM
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    Poem: 22249305 - A day to start with....
    Member: Mark Nwagwu
    Comment: If birds don’t ignore the nature then why do we?
    Why we remove the trees and make them refugee
    We loose the shed and they loose the home
    We know nothing and aimlessly roam

    this is brilliant, hasmukh, all of it - birds are far more sensible than we are, but they don't have a free will, we do, and what do we do with our freedom, we 'remove the trees', home of the birds. loved this a lot

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/5/2010 10:13:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 4/5/2010 9: 56: 00 PM

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    Poem: 22277802 - A poet can
    Member: Leonard Dabydeen
    Comment: Intense and very thoughtful write, Hasmukh. It seems as if you're in a minstrel courtyard, presenting your case for the poet: ' Why poets of modern age are considered pawn in their game? ' And again....' Are we not in the streets for begging paltry sum in reward? ' How philosophic can you be?

    our battlefield has become more intriguing
    so full of deception, deceit and damnation
    our ocean so immense, so complex
    as it washes all shores with litanies
    oh yes! our poems are like sea shells
    always a conch echoing in the wind of time.

    Thanx for sharing.
    Blessings.
    Leonard

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/2/2010 11:21:00 PM)

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    Poem: 22189321 - A wise to be Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK Comment: ‘…It is said you must keep mum on certain occasion…’

    Like...wise knows when to stay mum unlike fools…again poet writes, ‘…You need not open all your cards and silently resolve…’

    A ready reckoner of ‘interpersonal-conduct-protocol’…and food for thought…but must be kept in mind and followed…but to many like dumb speaks and deaf hears lolol…

    Your poem always educative…Sir I envy your untiring effort to make our society pristine with high moral and value the ‘Values’…
    10++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/2/2010 11:21:00 PM)

    From : Apoet Bangla (India ;)

    To : Hasmukh Amathalal

    Date Time : 4/2/2010 6: 18: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject : RE: A live together.....

    poet, you have the inner-sight to look at the truth. This vision is very important to a poet and to an artist. This Singularity perhaps differentiate one from another. Your individual style of explaining the facts of life is interesting.
    Write more. Thank you
    prab.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/2/2010 11:07:00 PM)

    From : Deborah Cameron (United States ;)

    To : Hasmukh Amathalal

    Date Time : 4/2/2010 1: 00: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)


    Subject : Your poems

    Thank you for recommending your poems to me. You are a thoughtful wordsmith.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/1/2010 6:53:00 AM)

    We are all different Jadia. That's what makes us unique.. I so loved this for it's honesty inside it. The way we have to sometimes hide who we are, yet the ones we hurt are ourselves. Letting others in and know who we are, our feelings, is always the best.. It is up to them to either like us and take us for who we are, or walk away..

    Another fine write here.

    Hugs,
    Moonie xx


    © MoonStar Rose

    Thu Apr 01,2010 11: 42

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/1/2010 6:20:00 AM)

    From : David Dale Kush (south bend United States; Male; 58)
    To : Hasmukh Amathalal
    Date Time : 4/1/2010 1: 07: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)

    Subject : Re: dear sir

    we who write from the soul like yourself are always
    wonderful to reaqd keep up thegood work for I believe words can change the world my friend

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/27/2010 7:35:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 3/27/2010 9: 25: 00 AM

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    Poem: 21967348 - A dead end
    Member: Rajkumar Mukherjee
    Comment: Dear Hasmukhlalji,
    Thanks for your invite to read and rate your poem 'dead end'
    We are perhaps sailing in the same boat and as such our feelings match
    This is the time to introspect through our life's journey and share the profound knowledge with the younger generation.
    Your poem is a journeyin the same direction.
    The rhyming pattern of the poem is fine maintaining AA/BB pattern but no of lines you have exceeded the meter length.
    You can easily correct those by using a few imageriesor metaphors
    I find the meter counts of stanza 2 as most appropriate for this type of poem.
    A few friendly suggestion-
    1) S1 L2- a typo 'know' should bre 'known'
    2) S1 L 4 can be changed to 'no one may learn how much I succeded' This wil also create an inter-rhyming with third line.
    3) S 2 L 3 'AT' can be deleted as superflous.
    LIKED THE POEM. RATED HIGH
    Rajkumar

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/25/2010 2:03:00 AM)

    Poem: 21096246 - Woman's womb
    Member: Zafar Tahir
    Comment: Hasmukh gee adab:
    Same blood same thinking:
    Fist lesson we were tought was; there is heaven under the feet of mother:
    That is start and end of this worthy state of our being.

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