hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 38,007 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/18/2010 6:17:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 5: 56: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23938241 - A look at children
    Member: Chulsoo Kim
    Comment: Days tiredness go off when you see them playing

    It's happiness. good work



    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 3: 58: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23941783 - A action to be
    Member: Ken E Hall
    Comment: Action all the way aka speaks louder than a thousand words important subject to write about...+++++10.....regards



    Date & Time: 7/18/2010 3: 37: 00 AM
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    Poem: 21872772 - A never ending
    Member: Elena Sandu
    Comment: 'I wish I have some treasure to share
    I searched all over but found no where'
    Well, sir, I can see your treasure
    It feeds me, I'll have a tiny slice
    if you dont mind
    Your poems, I can't measure
    nor explain how good it feels
    to have a bit of share.
    Thank you

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  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/15/2010 10:25:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/15/2010 9: 50: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23820159 - A fear so often
    Member: Greenwolfe 1962
    Comment: This is not one poem, it is two. The first 6 stanzas are incomplete and I would finish them and using the same title rewrite that first poem. The last 8 stanzas are all about music. This should be the title of this poem. This second poem is complete and is quite nice as it is. It still needs a little work but people will still enjoy it as it is. - Greenwolfe 1962



    Date & Time: 7/15/2010 9: 38: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23922601 - A calm river flow
    Member: Greenwolfe 1962
    Comment: There is some wisdom and some nice lines in this piece but it is much too long. It needs to be cut down a bit and the author needs to focus on some aspect of the river. This will force the writer to focus on the precise specific point he wants to make about the river. If he does this, the problems this poem carries with it will disappear. - Greenwolfe 1962

  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/15/2010 9:36:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/15/2010 9: 30: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23881339 - A day without charm
    Member: Roselyn Magbojos
    Comment: Let us get straight on the subject
    If apology is offered then not to reject
    It may amount to be greatness on our part
    Well it is nice gesture with very good start

    Then... I hope my apology will be accepted.

  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/13/2010 5:16:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/13/2010 12: 19: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23859466 - A change for while
    Member: Whispering Rose
    Comment: 'Offer shade like tree'
    a very well written poem...contains multiple facts and very good advices
    thank you for sharing



    Date & Time: 7/13/2010 8: 32: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23779426 - A blatant lie
    Member: Apoet Bangla
    Comment: Even your enemy may not stab you from the back
    He may be your sworn enemy but not attack
    It has to be taken as reality and experience at all the stages
    Even your friends may some time surprise you in your age

    Surprisingly you are writing some truths to combat the lies. Perhaps it is the achievement of writing poem. Yes, you have got your own tongue and mission to attain. Thank you very much.

    Regards,
    10+
    Apoet Bangla

  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/12/2010 9:14:00 PM)

    But what's wrong in trying even if I'm in misery?
    Hahaha, just give me chance please
    Dr, Subhendu, I beg of you if I insist
    Hasmukh Amathalal, tell me if I shall have to quit.

  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/11/2010 9:32:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/11/2010 8: 56: 00 PM
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    Poem: 21872772 - A never ending
    Member: Dwi Dwi Utami
    Comment: hey friend i.tink you have wrong tink, about this poem.LIFE NEVER ENDING, in the world not eternely just temporary, i.tink life ending if some poeple died, but your poem realy great, God luck.



    Date & Time: 7/11/2010 8: 51: 00 PM
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    Poem: 16893249 - ' Miss ', I really miss#(in 500)
    Member: Dwi Dwi Utami
    Comment: Ha.ha.ha. Yes i.know your feel, and you want to dance.and so much missing this is good poem, i.like it, bcoz i.also women.Congrat for you my friend.

  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/9/2010 6:42:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 7/9/2010 4: 13: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23861559 - A sacrifice once again
    Member: Roselyn Magbojos
    Comment: ...We have no words except to admire.

    Words are not enough to express my great admiration to you, Hasmukh! I'm just a speck of ink when it comes to your writings....10



    Date & Time: 7/9/2010 1: 42: 00 AM
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    Poem: 22108545 - A special thank
    Member: Roselyn Magbojos
    Comment: I like the way you composed your poem, it's very clear! I can easily get the real message of it. I'm your fan..

  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/8/2010 9:47:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/8/2010 9: 33: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23869586 - A cruel joke
    Member: Rosse Nor
    Comment: Paper talking but who can walk the talk? Only people with honor, sincerity and love shall divert our wrong path of material world to the right way of humble living.

    You are very real in this poem cause in this world, power, money and status-quo will speaks therefore everybody running after it and become more selfish.



    Date & Time: 7/8/2010 9: 17: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23869586 - A cruel joke
    Member: Hope Anonymous
    Comment: Excellent poem. 'World can be won over even without battles being fought' so true



    Date & Time: 7/8/2010 8: 23: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23805071 - Another world
    Member: Merna Ibrahim
    Comment: You are talking about the Never Land or the Utopia...but unfortunately, it doesn't exist on earth.However, it is always in my mind...
    Nice Work=)



    Date & Time: 7/8/2010 8: 17: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23779426 - A blatant lie
    Member: Merna Ibrahim
    Comment: I hate lying, hypocrisy and betrayal! !
    Indeed a meaningful and beautiful poem!
    keep it up :)

  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/8/2010 6:02:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/8/2010 11: 35: 00 AM
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    Poem: 21872772 - A never ending
    Member: Bose Perumal
    Comment: Life is a puzzle and always a novelty which is the very essence and thus it is unique. once when yama questioned Yudhistra(Dharma) in Mahabharatha,
    Which is the most strange thing in this universe? for which he answered, it is none other than man himself. why? He could have answered, it is God or the universe itself. he didnt venture into the unknown. But the imminent and the known man is too complicated and mysterious to understand. Right from birth he knows he is being trailed by the shadow of death! But even then he is so mightily blatant and believes himself to be eternal and all powerful and his insane selfishness goes even to the extent of wrecking other lives and the whole world itself. That too for no concrete reason than his own flimsy and ficle self esteem and pride. Is it not the most strange thing? I believe that life is a mystery and how we can make it a history? only by understanding life in the right spirit. see! How nonchalant and abrasive is mankind even in the face of total annihilation that threats and looms in the form of 'Global Warming'. Man doesnt understand rightly unless he can find the right way and solution to erase all misery and problems.

    Please kindly go through my poems and fend me a feedback.

    yours lovingly
    P.Bose 07/07/2010



    Date & Time: 7/8/2010 11: 22: 00 AM
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    Poem: 21725273 - A 500th poem
    Member: Bose Perumal
    Comment: Poet must find space in real scene
    It must have reflection and clearly seen
    My work may be judged tomorrow
    I must have simple ethics to follow

    in one of my poems i have the conclusive couplet written likewise.

    Even the plainest verse must propound
    The hard realities of the day.

    The unturned pages of tomorrow
    Must avoid the pangs of sorrow.

    A poet can either escape into an ethereal world or drown himself in the whirlpool turmoil of the society. The first attitude attempts to have harmony and self-revelation. it needs insight and a soaring spirit. But the second needs a tough spirit and a soft conscience. It has to fight without reason and passion to fulfill the Promise of a devoted soul and spirit to search endlessly for the answer. it is the search for creating a newer world which will make this world a haven and if possible a heavan to live in. such souls fight, knowing fully well, that they are fighting a losing battle. yet they do it with an affirmation that their noble vision and mission will be acknowledged by the world and it will appease the soul that had had fought desperately but undauntedly. anyway in a battle one can win while the other loses. it is noble to fight a losing battle rather than be a coward and a slave without salvation.

    Yours lovingly
    P.Bose 07/07/2010



    Date & Time: 7/8/2010 11: 07: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23848288 - A attempt to lie
    Member: Bose Perumal
    Comment: A treatise, a dessertation on the inner conflict and the innate being of the human spirit and soul.it is a picturisation of the possible attainment of a blemishless spirit and a blisful soul. But this world is too much complex and an individual is fickle and feeble before its oddities. inspite the soul dares to reach out for the impeccable and the impossible. that is attainment of blissful conscience which is possible only by being true to oneself and his surrounding world. its almost a theatrical drama of the conflict between Satan and God. Both are perhaps equal. But they differ in only one aspect. that is 'truthfulness' and 'falsitude'. A poem that cracks on any one to look deep into oneself and beyond!

    Yours lovingly
    P.Bose 07/07/2010

  • Gold Star - 38,007 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/7/2010 11:41:00 PM)

    Re: Hand in hand

    I know I could never write in another language..but you are doing extrememly well for someone not born here..Keep them coming..lol and God bless..Valentine

    © Valentine

    Wed Jul 07,2010 6: 58 am

    Re: An abortion bid
    by Voni on July 7th,2010,6: 56 pm
    Great piece, I so agree but take a different approach...if someone doesn't want children, he/she should take precautions before the pregnancy can occur. And if pregnancy comes despite all sensible means of prevention, then
    take this 'miracle' as a gift from God and grow with it. thanks for sharing, Jadia, did you ever post at WordChimes?

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Miss ', I Really Miss(246) /500 #

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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All, Kinds

The sky looks magnificent
As we imagine an d present
Otherwise there prevails hollowness
Yet it has great magnitude with vastness

So man can also look tall
If he has will to scale high wall
Can see through and through
And get by ability what is really due

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