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hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/30/2010 8:40:00 PM)

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    Poem: 22929346 - A welcome change
    Member: warner treuter

    Comment: It's true you use an abundance of words, but then you have a lot to say. Actually a bit of an overload for most of us in thought, but your poetry, I believe, lies more in the melody and harmony than in any particular theme. It would not surprise me if you were a musician as well as a poet.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/28/2010 9:06:00 AM)

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    Poem: 22921848 - A difficult separation
    Member: Seema Chowdhury

    Comment: sir,
    this is such a nice poem full of emotions and realities. your wife should be very proud of you and herself. while reading this beautiful poem, i could see the tenderness flowing through each word smoothly. very well written and well composed poem. thanks for sharing.

  • Naomi De'Luca (4/19/2010 5:23:00 PM)

    Simply riveting! I had to read more of your verses!

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/19/2010 7:42:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 4/18/2010 11: 20: 00 PM
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    Poem: 22249305 - A day to start with....
    Member: Jordan Legaspi
    Comment: Nature never deserts us and offer fine place
    How easily we can forget and replace?
    We can act thankless and invite the wrath
    It is one step away from loosing faith

    Nice poem it deals with human nature actaully -the many facets of our character, human being.
    and this verse, to me served as the focal point of the whole poem...the question on what we are doing to our 'mother earth', thus, the reality of pain and sorrow and all the unpleasant realities in our world is the cause of our human tendencies.

    all the best

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/18/2010 10:29:00 PM)

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    Poem: 22693665 - A clear emotions
    Member: Leonard Dabydeen

    Comment: A very clever play of emotions in this poem. It's like battling with the rhyme and rhythm to maintain a sober climax in its flow. I almost wanted to take each first line in the poem to create another emotional rush.....must say it's a good read.
    Thanks for sharing.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/17/2010 11:24:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 4/17/2010 9: 06: 00 PM

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    Poem: 22513851 - A magic in music
    Member: Greenwolfe 1962
    Comment: Again. This ending is not good. But this poem is a big, big improvement over 'A Desire' and it has genuine poetic qualities that I found enjoyable. The rhymes are much better and the word selections are as well. This was much, much easier to read and enjoy. In fact, I can even recommend this poem to others. I would just tell them to not pay attention to the last verse. It is really poor. This is because the worst thing you can do to a reader is not end a poem. This poem has no end. - Greenwolfe 1962

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/11/2010 9:58:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 4/11/2010 11: 16: 00 AM

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    Poem: 22395309 - A desire
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK
    Comment: ‘…Love …It is beautiful union of two souls…’

    Yeah and yeah Sir…soul in our culture [Indic] is different from others… its Ataman…

    Yeah discourse of Yagyanyablaka and Maitri had talk on this Soul was discussed…
    In today’s reality the meaning of Soul has come to soul…
    Thanks Uncle
    Voted 10++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/10/2010 2:24:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 4/9/2010 2: 02: 00 PM
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    Poem: 22249305 - A day to start with....
    Member: Mark Nwagwu
    Comment: If birds don’t ignore the nature then why do we?
    Why we remove the trees and make them refugee
    We loose the shed and they loose the home
    We know nothing and aimlessly roam

    this is brilliant, hasmukh, all of it - birds are far more sensible than we are, but they don't have a free will, we do, and what do we do with our freedom, we 'remove the trees', home of the birds. loved this a lot

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/5/2010 10:13:00 PM)

    ate & Time: 4/5/2010 9: 56: 00 PM

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    Poem: 22277802 - A poet can
    Member: Leonard Dabydeen
    Comment: Intense and very thoughtful write, Hasmukh. It seems as if you're in a minstrel courtyard, presenting your case for the poet: ' Why poets of modern age are considered pawn in their game? ' And again....' Are we not in the streets for begging paltry sum in reward? ' How philosophic can you be?

    our battlefield has become more intriguing
    so full of deception, deceit and damnation
    our ocean so immense, so complex
    as it washes all shores with litanies
    oh yes! our poems are like sea shells
    always a conch echoing in the wind of time.

    Thanx for sharing.
    Blessings.
    Leonard

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/2/2010 11:21:00 PM)

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    Poem: 22189321 - A wise to be Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK Comment: ‘…It is said you must keep mum on certain occasion…’

    Like...wise knows when to stay mum unlike fools…again poet writes, ‘…You need not open all your cards and silently resolve…’

    A ready reckoner of ‘interpersonal-conduct-protocol’…and food for thought…but must be kept in mind and followed…but to many like dumb speaks and deaf hears lolol…

    Your poem always educative…Sir I envy your untiring effort to make our society pristine with high moral and value the ‘Values’…
    10++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

God, bless only those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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