hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 38,693 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 38,693 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/7/2010 11:41:00 PM)

    Re: Hand in hand

    I know I could never write in another language..but you are doing extrememly well for someone not born here..Keep them coming..lol and God bless..Valentine

    © Valentine

    Wed Jul 07,2010 6: 58 am

    Re: An abortion bid
    by Voni on July 7th,2010,6: 56 pm
    Great piece, I so agree but take a different approach...if someone doesn't want children, he/she should take precautions before the pregnancy can occur. And if pregnancy comes despite all sensible means of prevention, then
    take this 'miracle' as a gift from God and grow with it. thanks for sharing, Jadia, did you ever post at WordChimes?

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  • Gold Star - 38,693 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/7/2010 5:51:00 AM)

    read a lesson on why God permitted sin to enter the world, i know now that i appreciate the fact that sin that can be justified ceases to be sin...its no wonder that after our first parents sinned they justified themselves and blamed everything else around them! i cannot say i never lie, and justifiable or not, it still remains a lie...only those that have been wounded, can help a beggar along the way...its ok my dear, for through forgiveness we can put the past behind us and look forward to a better, lies free future...
    may those you wrong everyday see the diamond in you and through advice offered in love polish it to much brilliance
    thank you for sharing!

  • Gold Star - 38,693 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/6/2010 8:48:00 PM)

    From : Louie -Love & Peace- Levy (California United States; Male; 84)
    To : hasmukh amathalal
    Date Time : 7/6/2010 5: 34: 00 PM (GMT -6: 00)

    Subject : Miss ', I really miss#(in 500)

    Thank you for your comment. My essay-prose was written and published 5 years ago when I felt that some intelligent humanity was ready, looking at itself in the proverbial, controversial religious mirror. I manage to discover it to print in long forgotten old file. It seems that you agreed, all faith are for sale, paid with some varied hellish torcherous debt for sinning.

    I was totally bored with your 'Miss' poem like lyric since, your random felt emotions were set aside, waiting for every other line of thought to Rhyme, ever so literally perfect. Each sentence a composed, distracted 'thought; , where 'Miss' became the title of a well solicited for,100 and 50 comments. You did better at getting that many favorable, short opinions. I could not get past 8 lines with any interest to read further.

    As for The Burial one?
    Are you feeling THAT miserable as to create such original morbid metaphors, expecting to get a prize of 'Sadism'? Having your readers sulk in your own contaminant depression?
    Please know, that as a WW II Vet, I write for Peace, where Love, Empathy and Compassion are the real enemies of 'Hate and War'.

    As for your prophesy poem? I relate as to where a poem, essay, prose or Rhyme is said to be of great literary value when it's not understood. Many classic authors like Shakespeare, played with words other than to mean what was intended. His critics continue to debate at to what his poems, plays and 14 line sonnets were about. He loved to bait and switch his reader's minds, like a riddle left with some debatable answer.

    My wise professor editor Dr Santosh Kumar selected the following quote;
    Horace (65 B.C.-8B.C.) aptly commented: 'Let your theme be what it may, provided it be simple and uniform; choose a theme suited to your powers, ye authors.' Beyond all doubt Levy's theme sprouts out of his deep instinctive wisdom, which inspires him to say that we should be aware:

    Prophet, profiteer, and activist

    All are one and the same

    ('Prophets And Predictions', Taj Mahal Review, June 2006, p.21)

    --

    I looked for your Bio, What with as many poems you've written, what does it take to title your name on one. Let your readers know who you REALLY are, or not proud to be so identified. I chose not to publicly comment nor will I ever rate any poem from 1-10. An ignorant flawed educational measure of intelligence and creativity.

    Had you not gotten the drift of my long essay, I would have not taken time to offer my honest opinions now privately.

    We need all read, with listening hearts and clear concieved vision

    Best wishes.

    louie levy

    http: //www.cyberwit.net/louie.htm

  • Gold Star - 38,693 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/6/2010 7:23:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 7/6/2010 5: 06: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23689151 - A basis for philosophy
    Member: Rabia Fazal
    Comment: Dear Friend,
    You are an owner of great mind.You are very talented and have written this poem beautifully.Keep up the good work sir.



    Date & Time: 7/6/2010 4: 50: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23815421 - A hand in hand
    Member: Wassila Nader
    Comment: nice to read this
    thanks for sharing :)



    Date & Time: 7/6/2010 4: 49: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23779426 - A blatant lie
    Member: Derick Murunga
    Comment: wow! this rhyme scheme is amazing, it creates musicality out of nowhere. This poem is outstanding. its long and yet not boring

  • Gold Star - 38,693 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/4/2010 10:02:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/4/2010 9: 12: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23779426 - A blatant lie
    Member: Rosse Nor
    Comment: Lies and untruth mostly comes from people we trust and close and that's nature they will take our love and care for ride & granted.
    ' We shut our eyes when realize the gravity
    We may soon find out its utility
    It may not find favor for its continuity
    There develops cracks in unity'
    the most real expression and i really happy to read this poem over and over again. It is so simple yet complicated caused everybody hide their betrayal deep within themself and shall have no confession from them ever.
    Believe me, your poem is 100% tally with what I use to face, betrayal frm friends & family and it's hurt me most.
    They are worst than our enemy and you put it in simple words that they are back-stabber and that's fact nobody can deny.
    excellent as the most real to the type of betrayal and treason frm close friend or family.
    10 for you.

  • Gold Star - 38,693 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/4/2010 8:37:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 7/4/2010 12: 50: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23749825 - A dominating force
    Member: Caio Louback
    Comment: the condition where the female role in society stands is similar to anything paradoxal in our world. it's interesting to find that women are the ones who bare life, give life, give birth to every human life and still they are to this day treated as inferior.



    Date & Time: 7/4/2010 12: 44: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23718177 - A polluted thoughts
    Member: Caio Louback
    Comment: it's sad that we've come to this point, isn't it?

    how did we get here anyway?



    Date & Time: 7/4/2010 7: 22: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23657112 - A regret for love
    Member: Rohit Sharma
    Comment: I just searched for a poem on Love in your list of 500 :) and found this one... Brilliant.... They way you express yourself..the usage of words..its all exceptional..lot to learn from you Sir..



    Date & Time: 7/4/2010 7: 19: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23689151 - A basis for philosophy
    Member: Rohit Sharma
    Comment: Its so Amazing that you think such concepts....We can learn a lot from your poems and you as a poet...



    Date & Time: 7/4/2010 7: 17: 00 AM
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    Poem: 23694579 - A belief not common
    Member: Rohit Sharma
    Comment: I just people in this world become more human....we have to spread a message of humanity....This world is loosing its beauty...We need people to understand your poem and bring a change...Thanks for sharing this poem...10 10 10 and clap clap clap

  • Gold Star - 38,693 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/3/2010 8:22:00 PM)

    on Nice to recall by jadia4708au, on June 25
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    trust i need no wine i always feel fine when i go to dine te rhyme keeps coming and its not forced at alll it flows nicely a playful quality that works so very well oh it works

  • Gold Star - 38,693 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/1/2010 5:53:00 AM)

    Recent Comments on your Poems

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    enjoyed reading this piece...and a lot of food for thought here too...great poem. on Nice end to finish
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    there is much truth to what you write. 'Love and to be loved should guide the princple' Very sound words of advice! good day to you! : -) on Fine good morning
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    very well written and very honest. I really enjoyed it. on Endless nights
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    very nice..meaningful..it sounds that you miss someone...hmmmm on Unable to understand
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    interesting rhyming lessons for everyone..the butcher, the baker and the candle stick maker.... on Direct poser
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  • Gold Star - 38,693 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/29/2010 5:54:00 PM)

    Date & Time: 6/29/2010 5: 42: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23739958 - At and each moment
    Member: Alicia Moore
    Comment: Life is a proposal 4 better or 4 worse this poem extends the meaning, the understanding. Just n case u dont know wat i mean... its good: ]



    Date & Time: 6/29/2010 5: 30: 00 PM
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    Poem: 23703457 - A nice to recall
    Member: Kial Whitmire
    Comment: Such a tantalizing poem! Very appealing to the minds of the many readers my friend, keep this work

  • Gold Star - 38,693 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/28/2010 10:04:00 AM)

    Date & Time: 6/28/2010 3: 17: 00 AM

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    Poem: 23694579 - A belief not common
    Member: Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK
    Comment: ‘Let us ignite the passion for humanity…Race, color, skin may differ but there ma y remain
    pure soul’…

    Sir I’ve changed the order of sentence sequence as in poetry…[excuse me] the first is ritual and second is the result…marvelous poetry true reflection of Indian Vedic Wisdom…what the turbulent present day world needs now most …thanks sharing…
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    10/10

Best Poem of hasmukh amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss(246) /500 #

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

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Ragging

Universities and campus prepare their grave,
In the guise of education they put front brave,
Bur on ground of morality they cave in,
Line drawn clear but education thin,

Great fall in standard and knowledge lagging,
More efforts on fashion and thrust on ragging,
Many loose their lives on name of flogging,
It is blot or shame and prestige more dragging,

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