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hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/4/2014 10:45:00 AM)

    If God given us mouth and teeth to speak the truth, how will you know if the person is lying to?
    12 hours ago by Aira Betita to Worship the God

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/4/2014 10:45:00 AM)

    Worship the lord

    a fine maxim is to realize that all stand with equal opportunity before God, whatever one's race or station in life... as it states: 'God made out of one man every nation of men to live on the entire surface of the earth...' (Acts 17: 26)
    12 hours ago by robyn selters to Worship the God

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/4/2014 10:40:00 AM)

    Let our prayer

    beautifull


    Paul Anderson13 minutes ago
    continue to inspire, you can do it,

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/4/2014 3:41:00 AM)

    Cry with shame

    I Do Agree 100%

    Cheryl Chandler7 minutes ago
    Well Done

    Keep writing

    Peace and Blessings
    Comment +1
    amazing


    Dushyant BholaLess than a minute ago

    “I apologize” the culprit says
    Very safe escape route and ways
    Her wife says sorry and pleads
    What is left for us to read? ................ irrefutable truth. A great work for the society.
    Comment +1
    wow


    Akira Crease6 minutes ago
    great poem such a good style and flow great read

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/3/2014 8:39:00 PM)

    Love and nature

    Nice

    Michael Suraci8 minutes ago
    Totally agree and thank you for giving me something that's different for a change on this site

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/3/2014 1:37:00 AM)

    grand pa...

    sweet poetry


    Santana Etter2 minutes ago
    This is a very thoughtful poem
    Comment +1
    good

    David Myles3 minutes ago
    I fekt that
    Comment +1
    very nice

    Eddie DevlinLess than a minute ago
    this is a very nice poem. i like how you didn't make rhyming the key aspect but still managed to fit it in to create a poetic theme of lyric patterns.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/2/2014 8:37:00 PM)

    All people...

    I love the poem


    Angel Clarke6 minutes ago
    I like the rhymes and topic, it was we'll put together and I could feel the heart in it.
    Comment +1
    Can i cry?


    Mayra Garibo7 minutes ago
    I really liked this, you put a lot into this and it shows! ,3
    Comment +1
    good

    cassidy ritcher6 minutes ago
    Should take. More time.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/1/2014 8:59:00 PM)

    Doctor's role...save sir my........................

    anonymo magnifico20 minutes ago
    ...................mother

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/1/2014 8:38:00 PM)

    Doctor's role
    Excellent


    Just A Hack Named Guilty4 minutes ago
    The role of the doctor, bring him to a human level for better or worse...
    Comment +1
    i like it

    preston cochranLess than a minute ago
    doctors are important. i am very glad that a person would want to devote so many years of their to learn how to help me. here! here!

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2014 9:23:00 PM)

    Learn lot more

    good


    Allie AllenLess than a minute ago
    it reminds me of a book
    Comment +1
    Great form, great imagery


    Elana KahnLess than a minute ago
    I love your writing! It really makes you think and feel.

Ragging

Universities and campus prepare their grave,
In the guise of education they put front brave,
Bur on ground of morality they cave in,
Line drawn clear but education thin,

Great fall in standard and knowledge lagging,
More efforts on fashion and thrust on ragging,
Many loose their lives on name of flogging,
It is blot or shame and prestige more dragging,

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