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hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/12/2014 12:35:00 AM)

    Time to waste..

    like this alot

    Betty-Gwen WalkerLess than a minute ago
    i thought this was a great way to to describe everyday life. basically everything is time and role. not who we are but what we are. not who i am, but what ethnicity i might be, or religion. i like your perspective

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/11/2014 9:47:00 AM)

    It is difficult

    You're awesome!

    Kenneth HarrisonLess than a minute ago
    You're very talented and please never stop writing!
    Creatively, KEN
    Comment +1

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/10/2014 8:56:00 PM)

    Papa, pqapa

    Farhana Kaamilah Abthur-Rahim What beautiful daugter you have Hasmukh Mehta Sahab? ? ? She has your eyes, face and an innocently young smile and face. May she always be safe, happy and prosperoud - ameen.
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    Farhana Kaamilah Abthur-Rahim Would you remember me in your prayers too plz as I lost my dad nearly two years ago. I hope he still prays for me from his grave but if you also prayed, that would be a bonus. May your off-springs be the coolness of your eyes, the peace of your heart and good reputation that you enjoy forever and ever - ameen xx
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    Hasmukh Mehta Farhana i feel deeply moved, My eyes turn wet as and when i state, the daughters are real care taker, mover of pain and sooth sayer, it is our fourtune that we have daughter. I wish to pray for your dad in earnest, to my sincereity and best.. be loved by your late and rmemeber him. He may calling you often in dream
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/5/2014 9:36:00 PM)

    We dream
    Well written, interesting and truthful!


    Boe Parrish7 minutes ago
    I love the flow of the poem and the topic! I have reread the poem a couple of more times and thoroughly enjoyed it. You really have a talent Hasmukh

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/4/2014 10:45:00 AM)

    If God given us mouth and teeth to speak the truth, how will you know if the person is lying to?
    12 hours ago by Aira Betita to Worship the God

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/4/2014 10:45:00 AM)

    Worship the lord

    a fine maxim is to realize that all stand with equal opportunity before God, whatever one's race or station in life... as it states: 'God made out of one man every nation of men to live on the entire surface of the earth...' (Acts 17: 26)
    12 hours ago by robyn selters to Worship the God

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/4/2014 10:40:00 AM)

    Let our prayer

    beautifull


    Paul Anderson13 minutes ago
    continue to inspire, you can do it,

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/4/2014 3:41:00 AM)

    Cry with shame

    I Do Agree 100%

    Cheryl Chandler7 minutes ago
    Well Done

    Keep writing

    Peace and Blessings
    Comment +1
    amazing


    Dushyant BholaLess than a minute ago

    “I apologize” the culprit says
    Very safe escape route and ways
    Her wife says sorry and pleads
    What is left for us to read? ................ irrefutable truth. A great work for the society.
    Comment +1
    wow


    Akira Crease6 minutes ago
    great poem such a good style and flow great read

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/3/2014 8:39:00 PM)

    Love and nature

    Nice

    Michael Suraci8 minutes ago
    Totally agree and thank you for giving me something that's different for a change on this site

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/3/2014 1:37:00 AM)

    grand pa...

    sweet poetry


    Santana Etter2 minutes ago
    This is a very thoughtful poem
    Comment +1
    good

    David Myles3 minutes ago
    I fekt that
    Comment +1
    very nice

    Eddie DevlinLess than a minute ago
    this is a very nice poem. i like how you didn't make rhyming the key aspect but still managed to fit it in to create a poetic theme of lyric patterns.

God, bless only those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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