hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 129,770 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/11/2015 9:34:00 AM)

    Res Sir
    Res Sir, I'm sorry for behaving in such manner every time asking you, how you came to know..but such things never used to happen before...i was asked to join poet-freak by one of the poets on poem hunter n since then i have been noticing not only on this site but on face-book n on other sites like a movie reel going on..something paranormal never faced before..only htose who have some sixth sense or such knowledge can understand...earlier i used to feel happy mesmerized n wonder but with time in between it got scary n now i'm fed up...no i don't believe i'm mentally sick...but i do believe somebody is playing magic upon me n such things are hard to prove n even harder to disprove..i'm really very upset...i started writing my blog n then wrote many poems too, but now i've given up completely. I've lost interest in everything...i just feel cheated n desperate to punish the culprit...somehow to stop what's going on...i'm helpless...something too wrong is definitely going on...how long i don't know...may be i'll not be there soon to see your poems some day..
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/11/2015 9:31:00 AM)

    Welcome board
    How did u come to know that i deliberately messaged someone at the eleventh hour of night yesterday only to remind that person had being telling lies n hiding n acting weird..i had to coz was too upset n it didnt matter i was offending n not at speaking terms...Again your poem'welcome board' is a coincidence: (I'm not going to remain silent unless such things stop..n i'll enquire every bit till my doubts cleared...people cannot just make me delusionary n run away declared innocent..
    5 hours ago

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/10/2015 9:39:00 PM)

    Very politically correct, I love that your words can be applied and related to political, love or friend theme, so many general truths in your writing
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/4/2015 5:52:00 PM)

    A nice tribute, Hasmukh....................



    Pearls.S.Buck expressed praise when Radhakrishnan was made the Indian president on the lines of platonic thought that philosophers need to become the kings.



    Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad
    04 Sep,2015

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/29/2015 8:18:00 PM)

    Small creaure

    : 8/29/2015 3: 26: 00 AM
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    Poem: 43051563 - Small Creature
    Member: Ramesh T A
    Comment: Each one has some talent sure. Your skill in writing your style of poetry belongs only to you!

    Hasmukhbhai, who calls you a small creature? Your certainly great with a regular contribution of verses.



    KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343
    29 Aug,2015

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/27/2015 3:00:00 AM)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/25/2015 7:13:00 PM)

    With lots of fun

    Hasmukh Bhai, you have created a beautiful poem with the Biblical idea.


    KH Prabhu, Kumta, Karnataka - 581343
    25 Aug,2015

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/23/2015 7:23:00 PM)

    Find welcome...

    Sanaa Uppal Hasmukh Mehta smile emoticon
    It is always a pleasure to have you
    your splendid words are so lovely and welcomed smile emoticon thank you
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/23/2015 11:44:00 AM)

    Difficult art.....

    Maleka Ferdous Thank you for your beautifully repply with an excellent poetry Hasmukh Meheta.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/21/2015 8:00:00 PM)

    ........................Thanks Hasmukh Sir for your poetic appraisal which are always a source of inspiration :)



    Aparna Singh, Kolkata
    21 Aug,2015

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Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I Lived Not

I lived not up to expectations
Thus raised distrust and many questions,
Had promised to keep words,
In the name of God and also Lords,

Promise is simple but after all promise,
To be observed till approach of demise,
Never to forget any and not to compromise,
Not to break any just to sprang surprise,

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