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hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2014 9:23:00 PM)

    Learn lot more

    good


    Allie AllenLess than a minute ago
    it reminds me of a book
    Comment +1
    Great form, great imagery


    Elana KahnLess than a minute ago
    I love your writing! It really makes you think and feel.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2014 8:34:00 PM)

    Real embrace

    Wow


    Shyanna GastonLess than a minute ago
    True potential! I love it! You got some talent there
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2014 11:20:00 AM)

    Love has not changed

    Amazing


    Dushyant Bhola1 minute ago
    Beautiful theme nicely penned. Like it.
    Comment +1
    Beautiful

    Mrinmoy Choudhury5 minutes ago
    A good write - love defined nicely - I liked it.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2014 11:18:00 AM)

    like fish

    Lets face reality, right?


    Bre Robinson13 minutes ago
    Death is inevitable, follow what you believe and dream of, don't allow others to pressure you into thinking otherwise, we are all so different and unique.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/29/2014 10:09:00 AM)

    IN deep troubles

    superb

    Larry Stallings4 minutes ago
    how can they be driven away
    Comment +1
    Nice

    Leila McLeod4 minutes ago
    You pose some thought provoking questions, great poem :)
    Comment +1
    Well done.

    " Doc" Rule2 minutes ago
    Your fear and unrest is not without reason. well done, Hasmukh.
    Comment +1
    i like it

    preston cochran2 minutes ago
    how indeed.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/29/2014 9:53:00 AM)

    Such an endevour

    Colleen Courtney (6/29/2014 9: 49: 00 AM)
    This is such a wonderful poem Mehta! You've included in this write all of the things which make PoemHunter such an amazing site. I too have made many friends here and a few who I speak with daily. It is so beautiful to reach out to others and learn about their cultures and lives. And as you said, a great place to get feedback from others and offer our own encouragement and insights. Love this piece! (Report)

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/29/2014 2:48:00 AM)

    I feel best

    Sir (Hasmukh Mehta) , I personally thank you for this enlightening poem and your stanza of the poem “You have heart and soul—To respond with inner call—Try to listen and carefully think—It may always uplift and not sink” brings a realization in us. Respected!




    Eagam Khaling, Darjeeling
    Jun 29,2014

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/28/2014 7:04:00 AM)

    The faith is not.....
    Oh brave wanderer...

    Sidanne Solomon4 hours ago
    ...I am reminded of a quote: Do not follow the path of others, but instead blaze your own trail and leave sparks in your wake. Go fort, brave soul, and lead the life you have infinitely imagined!

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/24/2014 7:37:00 PM)

    God is staying....

    I love it

    Kamran Minder19 minutes ago
    amazing
    Comment +1
    fabulous

    Lilly Emery 3 minutes ago
    Very good writing
    Comment +1
    I appreciate your outlook.


    Kendon Hoover18 minutes ago
    I like this poem. It's very positive and I highly appreciate your outlook on how people should live their lives. I don't necessarily believe in God, but I will tip my hat to you sir. You have my respect.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/21/2014 9:14:00 PM)

    Vision to find.....
    Top class visionary.


    John Ravenscroft13 minutes ago
    Spiritual, most deep and forever honest, intuitive.
    Comment +1
    beautiful


    Constance Kabereck23 minutes ago
    your word were vividley expressed i liked it
    Comment +1
    nice


    Qoutes Homemade25 minutes ago
    nice

God, bless only those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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