hasmukh amathalal

(17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/28/2014 7:04:00 AM)

    The faith is not.....
    Oh brave wanderer...

    Sidanne Solomon4 hours ago
    ...I am reminded of a quote: Do not follow the path of others, but instead blaze your own trail and leave sparks in your wake. Go fort, brave soul, and lead the life you have infinitely imagined!

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/24/2014 7:37:00 PM)

    God is staying....

    I love it

    Kamran Minder19 minutes ago
    amazing
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    fabulous

    Lilly Emery 3 minutes ago
    Very good writing
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    I appreciate your outlook.


    Kendon Hoover18 minutes ago
    I like this poem. It's very positive and I highly appreciate your outlook on how people should live their lives. I don't necessarily believe in God, but I will tip my hat to you sir. You have my respect.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/21/2014 9:14:00 PM)

    Vision to find.....
    Top class visionary.


    John Ravenscroft13 minutes ago
    Spiritual, most deep and forever honest, intuitive.
    Comment +1
    beautiful


    Constance Kabereck23 minutes ago
    your word were vividley expressed i liked it
    Comment +1
    nice


    Qoutes Homemade25 minutes ago
    nice

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/17/2014 11:00:00 PM)

    With response.....

    without clouds and showers

    KR BALAKRISHNAN6 minutes ago
    This is clear, my poet.
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    ok, good

    BOSS LADY6 minutes ago
    now what''s the title?
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    Extremely trying, but the gift is there.


    Shane Minor1 minute ago
    I have no doubt that you don't lack the proper capability of becoming a great poet, I absolutely believe that your messages are extremely poetic, while your poetry itself needs some work... Instead of looking for rhythmic terms, instead deliver something that is as true inside as it is written on the out..... be completely honest- because its harder to lie, therefore it takes an extremely creative person to come up with material that doesn't speak truth... but that kind of poetry is better left in fictitious novels rather than expressed through poetry.
    ..

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/17/2014 10:40:00 PM)

    For his own
    The flow is amazing!


    Chelsie Davis4 minutes ago
    I love how you can make it flow! Its amazing, I really do enjoy this poem, thank you!
    ...

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/17/2014 10:21:00 PM)

    Mirror may speak....Great words


    Anup Dutta14 hours ago
    Loved the thoughts
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    A Shakespearean eminem


    Karina Paxinos14 hours ago
    You conveyed a story with great emotion,
    The magic of failure is that we recognize it only because we have once (many times before succeeded)
    I love this!
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    good

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/17/2014 8:06:00 AM)

    Prefer corner...
    And prefer corner to be absent

    rasheeda kearney6 minutes ago
    Great work
    Comment +1
    corner to be


    sEan NoRtH6 minutes ago
    absent
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    I like it


    kashish chawla6 minutes ago
    gud job.deep thoughts
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    fine-craft of words


    George Charisma5 minutes ago
    okay

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/16/2014 9:07:00 AM)

    Full of compassion

    good

    KR BALAKRISHNAN20 minutes ago
    For the up and down musical resonance of this poem, no separate background music from the poet is required. The readers can very well enjoy the innate music in it.

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/13/2014 8:05:00 PM)

    Holy concept....

    Savita Tyagi (6/12/2014 10: 46: 00 PM)
    I feel very much part......and start with daily routine to keep holy concept of divine. Beautiful lines and the only way to keep peace of mind in face of all the pain and suffering going around. Thank you so much. (Report)

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/13/2014 7:15:00 PM)

    With you all

    Robin Pauley Nice write too
    May 16 at 7: 53pm · Like · 1

    JayLou Santos I love yOur smile
    June 12 at 8: 43pm · Unlike · 1

God, bless only those

I pray the God to shower bless
Who commit more sins and not less
Who are most wanted and dreaded
professional killer and guilty but not pleaded
God only bless those…….

I am feeble and also very weak,
Future not bright and look very bleak
I pledge and vow not to kill

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