Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 189,354 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/6/2015 9:15:00 PM)

    your work is never void of meaning. It's brilliant and wise and i feel like whenever I read any of I'm forced to stop and think about what direction my actions are taking me.
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  • V S (10/23/2015 12:18:00 AM)

    Hasmukh Amathalal is a great poet, who touches every aspects of life with gentle words.. I admire his caliber and enthusiasm in informing the stubborn world about the truth of life...Thank you Brother Smiling Face Amathalal! !

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/19/2015 10:36:00 PM)

    18 October 2015 TO: Hashmukh-ji With your gifted talent you have instantly penned down your poem aptly depicting our half hearted respect we at times show for our great leaders who have with enormous sacrifice brought us freedom. Maybe, Netaji was most neglected until to-day, particularly by our crooked leaders. I have a write-up on Netaji, somewhat longish, which the limited space offered by Muse India may not accommodate. However, I'm trying to post it soon and just take a chance hoping it may be published by MI. Rajat Das Gupta

    Rajat Das Gupta, Kolkata

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/18/2015 11:17:00 PM)

    You have immense intelligence and knowledge, very impressive, great to know there are some paying attention to the world as a whole, very nice job.
    1 hour ago by Livie.. | Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti Abdulrazak Aralimatti (10/16/2015 6:57:00 AM)

    Sir Hasmukh Amathalal is an adorable poet.
    I read his initial poems and they are a great treasure

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/14/2015 4:46:00 AM)

    agdish Sahai Sharma · Friends with Shalini Samuel
    Dear brother Hasmukhmehta
    Glad to know.that
    u r a good poet.
    I find humour in ur poem.
    Best wishes.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/10/2015 10:49:00 PM)

    The success tale

    Date & Time: 10/10/2015 9: 12: 00 AM
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    Poem: 43419241 - The Success Tale
    Member: Luis Estable
    Comment: This reads more like a prose poem though I do not like to use the term for I am of the opinion that a poem is a poem or it is not. I like here the story that your tell even though it is not told in a very poetic way.

    I urge you to force yourself to go a bit more into the poetic way and try not to sound too much like prose, but in all fairness, I had fun reading this try.. Keep it up! You showed me that you have the ability to tell a story.

    Luis Estable

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/4/2015 3:02:00 AM)

    The world and people

    A passionate verse, most thoughtful! Dorothy APWLTS
    8 hours ago by Dorothy A. Holmes to The world and people

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti Abdulrazak Aralimatti (10/2/2015 11:59:00 AM)

    Verily, pain, endurance and morality source a poet for his poetry........10

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/30/2015 8:24:00 PM)

    Lovely tribute to Mother!

    When it comes to mother all become a poet. So much said and unsaid things all carry inside.

    Mom you are ‘Wow’

    But always ‘How’?

    Maaya Dev, Hyderabad
    30 Sep,2015

Best Poem of Hasmukh Amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss (101) /500 ###


Universities and campus prepare their grave,
In the guise of education they put front brave,
Bur on ground of morality they cave in,
Line drawn clear but education thin,

Great fall in standard and knowledge lagging,
More efforts on fashion and thrust on ragging,
Many loose their lives on name of flogging,
It is blot or shame and prestige more dragging,

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