hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 43,772 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

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  • Gold Star - 43,772 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/9/2015 6:11:00 AM)

    Critic'sa award.....

    For the Critique’s Award for the month we have chosen Hasmukh Mehta who has been unstinting in his appreciation and support of other’s postings.

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  • Gold Star - 43,772 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/8/2015 10:42:00 PM)

    Till the last end

    Naidz Ladia Hasmukh Mehta..thanks oldy oldy for this poem...

    you are a true friend too
    a teaser sometimes
    the man of many poems
    Hasmukh Mehta is the name...

    i wish u long life to live
    so u can write more poems in our page
    goodluck to every journey of poetic life
    be strong be healthy...GOD bless us all...
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  • Gold Star - 43,772 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/8/2015 8:33:00 AM)

    Small try...

    Anushka Ramchuran Your words carry weight and an awareness....I like that. Thank you again. It is an honourable thing to honour a woman. Let a woman respect the man who is unselfish in this expression..13 mins · Like · 1

  • Gold Star - 43,772 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/8/2015 7:23:00 AM)

    In her praise....

    Anushka Ramchuran Thank you dear Hasmukh Mehta I am deeply honoured and humbled by this kindness. To all who liked and commented my sincere thanks and appreciation. Your words are beautiful Hasmukh ji, I hope I live up to each expression. Much love...anushka.
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  • Gold Star - 43,772 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/7/2015 7:34:00 PM)

    Geetha Jayakumar (4/7/2015 11: 37: 00 AM)
    A Fantastic write on women. Very true said in few lines....

    Woman is embodiment of courage
    And she ably manages
    Her future lays in self confidence
    A rare quality with assertive stance

    Loved reading each lines. Beautiful presentation. (Report)

  • Gold Star - 43,772 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/4/2015 3:54:00 AM)

    welcome....Unni Krishnan Atiyodi Meticulous composition. You have always been a source of inspiration to me.
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  • Gold Star - 43,772 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/2/2015 8:32:00 PM)

    oxide poxide hasmukh amathalal
    power to combat is really a fine and touching poem I love it
    12 Mar

  • Gold Star - 43,772 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/31/2015 8:29:00 PM)

    Get in...
    Thanks a million!
    31 Mar by Ricardo Sexton to Get in

  • Gold Star - 43,772 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/28/2015 2:32:00 AM)

    Perform fair...

    Respected Hasmukhaji,

    Thanks for the comment.

    Please read Line 4;

    Sky simply smiled at me



    Puttu Kulkarni, Hegde, Kumta, Karnataka - 5813
    Mar 28,2015

  • Gold Star - 43,772 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/27/2015 8:37:00 PM)

    LIVING FORCE...........

    In your following lines resounds the Upanishad's hymn addressed to the God Sun represented by Tagore in his own way~
    At your splendor's brim
    Humans sighted their nobility supreme -
    That from age to age you did compile
    By the Persian gulf or Nile.
    Said they - Sons of the Immortal we are -
    Visioned that Superman
    From beyond the darkness blazing golden
    Your lines resonating above ~
    Flowers appear with typical colors
    As if to show “Yes we are child of rare showers”
    .........................
    ...........................
    We are living force
    Provide to the world real source
    Man with such qualities is welcome
    Who can convert desert into nice for someone!


    Rajat Das Gupta, Kolkata
    Mar 27,2015

Best Poem of hasmukh amathalal

Miss ', I Really Miss(246) /500 #

I was stepping in to become young
I thought it is nice journey but too long
I am afraid and take care not to go wrong
I was expecting everything for song

I am so much influenced by lady smile
She has entered in life just before while'
Life seems to be so interesting and fine
I want to dance on floor with glass of wine

Miss, you can't be so rude
For a word you have made prelude,
All warmth and affection you have included
Hate and distance you have excluded

I never expected you to cast
All doubts but trust should not last
You were the ...

Read the full of Miss ', I Really Miss(246) /500 #

Coffee Tea Bread Butter

Clever
Offer
For
Friends
Echoing
Early end…

Tactful
Entertainment
And with snakes

Breakfast with
Red cherry
Either with
Apple or
Dairy milk

Bowls finished
Under little shyness
Tea added from kettle
Table cleared
Empty stomach filled
Rolled the day with joy

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