Hunter Dasten

Rookie (May 3rd 1987)

Comments about Hunter Dasten

  • Rookie Jonothan Queen (1/28/2010 8:44:00 PM)

    very vivid imagery, i can picture it so clearly in my head, read mine and leave feedback, thanks, if any atlest destroyed beauty, thats my best one, thanks

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  • Rookie Brandie Ybarra (7/8/2009 4:03:00 AM)

    when I read the copper tint sky one
    I loved it I could practically smell the salt water and feel the breeze

  • Rookie - 0 Points Laclaire Mitchell Nzerem (4/4/2009 3:18:00 PM)

    dasten did you remove your poems? We wanted to read more of your work...or, where can I buy your 10 ### book, mine made amazon.com 'We All came From Borderlands' by LaClaire Mitchell Nzerem...read my lastest one Spider...comment if you like!
    Do a haiku and more visuals you work is great! ! ! ###1010101001010 10s! ! !
    Regards, Claire Nzerem

  • Rookie ~ Jon London ~ (2/28/2009 6:07:00 PM)

    If you're looking for dreamy visual reads, Hunter's work projects everything you're searching for. A fine poet, who's voice you'l enjoy visiting

  • Rookie Dr. Rupender Jeet Singh (2/2/2009 7:16:00 AM)

    Wowwwwwwww!
    Allright your Ballerina is a martyr.

    I love this one. Keep writing & in touch.

    Thanks and regards.
    Rupender

  • Rookie Nithya Raghavan (12/19/2008 5:30:00 AM)

    the poem 'an immutable act' made an interesting reading.it is true that some people who are very close to us slip away quite quickly.congratulations! keep writing!

  • Rookie brianda Hernandez (12/12/2008 1:18:00 AM)

    impressive.
    you have potential.....

  • Rookie Nithya Raghavan (11/24/2008 12:48:00 AM)

    the poem 'the dreams' was very nice.wish it were a bit longer.

  • Rookie Allysyn Bryant (11/21/2008 6:25:00 PM)

    Hunter...your poems are great. Could almost take me into a different world while reading them, like the one about the little girl. that one got me. You're a great poem. Keep it up!

  • Rookie Peter Tamburrino (11/19/2008 10:39:00 PM)

    Very well written. Definitely have a natural talent. Will look forward to reading your other works.

Best Poem of Hunter Dasten

A Ballerina's Dance

Her feet float above the stage
as if carried by some unseen force.
From my view among the generally admitted
I can hardly make out the details of her face.
But those graceful movements are so alluring
each subtle step, precise, and all consuming.

She is the most vulnerable of all artists,
performing a dance that demands every emotion soak through her skin.
Each fluid movement pulls from the reservoir of her experience.
Trained from a young age to move agilely across the stage,
bearing the weight of the world upon her shoulders;
My Ballerina has more ...

Read the full of A Ballerina's Dance

My Dream

The burden of reality, and conscious procedures
prevent me from fully recalling just how vivid your presence was
though, I can venture with enough forethought, to express it:
Your hair seemed to float in a dance of jubilation through the air,
as if animated by the most crystalline ocean of a world yet conceived.
And what myths my mind invents of your phosphorescent smile!
Together we laughed with such enthusiasm it rivaled youthful innocence
I would vanquish all ambition, all human lon

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