Hi J - I thought I had better look you up as we share the same surname and first initial. I am currently writing a POEM on MEMORIES so I was glad you had a poem in that area, I like your poem although it does seem rather terminaI! I liked the line which begins MY SAD GHOST it made me think of the hundreds and cities and towns I have walked in and - in the majority making little impact! Yet in some of the cities in the UK such as Liverpool (where I was born) , , Loughborough, Leeds, where I have lived and Colchester where I now live there are a handful of people whose lives I have touched in a positive way. Thanks again for MEMORY PICTURES Yours JAK - UK
PS I am very interested in HAIKUS! I like yours!
PSS I have visited 47 of the American States and two years ago I travelled across NY State in the Fall - it is very beautiful. Most Brits think NY is only a City and they are unaware it is also one of the most beautiful States in the USA. I hope you agree. Were you born in NY State? ! ,
In Cemetery Time
whisper, gracefully beyond your existence- your most alive dreamy things destroy me, I explode because they are too bright
your sad look Sitting in cemetery time (twisting warmly, tomorrow) in the crazy palm tree garden