Jasbir Chatterjee

Veteran Poet - 1,515 Points (4 March 1966 / Delhi)

Comments about Jasbir Chatterjee

  • Silver Star - 3,186 Points Soul Watcher (12/11/2014 5:45:00 AM)

    You are really a great poet.

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  • Rookie Amir Mohammad Islami Chalandar (6/8/2014 6:56:00 AM)

    sounds really great. you are showing your emotions nice. you will have great future in poetry. i invite you to read my poems. as a friendly look.

  • Rookie - 10 Points Anubhav Gupta (5/4/2014 9:34:00 AM)

    Read your Poem When Intimacy turns into Indifference, loved it congratulations for being selected in members poems.
    Regards

  • Rookie Paul Ganz (5/1/2014 6:27:00 AM)

    Dear Jasbir, Your subjects are universal and connect with most of us. well done. May I suggest, however, that you refrain from your use of cliché, or well-used phrases that may not have achieved the status of 'cliché.' Find the original 'Jasbir-expression' that is memorable. I'm sure you read lots of poetry, but read more. You will never find the worn, tired expressions in good poetry.

    Also, use poetry can be used as inspiration to think better of others (and the world if not to get too lofty here) . Your comment about someone fiddling with the poll numbers is disappointing.

  • Rookie Michelle Oliveira (2/16/2014 2:38:00 PM)

    Hi, my name is Michelle and when I was a teenager I used to write poems. But as I got older I stopped doing it. Now, when I try to write something I have nothing. Anyways, I was reading your poem a cloud of rain. It hit home with me. So, I wanted to say thank you for sharing your poems and I can't wait to read more.

The Third Eye

Do you know?
A camera can be one’s third eye...
It notices things we don’t see with our own eyes.

Recently, I happened to pass by
A Palash tree, slim, leafless, tall,
With red, passionate flowers on each branch,
Like flowers in a beautiful woman’s hair,
Standing gracefully under a benevolent, smiling sun,

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