Jasbir Chatterjee

Bronze Star - 2,738 Points (4 March 1966 / Delhi)

Comments about Jasbir Chatterjee

  • Gold Star - 33,045 Points Fabrizio Frosini (7/25/2015 3:29:00 AM)

    your poetry comes from heart and mind in a bright flow.. a real pleasure to read.. thanks for sharing

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  • Gold Star - 5,389 Points Soul Watcher (12/11/2014 5:45:00 AM)

    You are really a great poet.

  • Rookie Amir Mohammad Islami Chalandar (6/8/2014 6:56:00 AM)

    sounds really great. you are showing your emotions nice. you will have great future in poetry. i invite you to read my poems. as a friendly look.

  • Rookie - 10 Points Anubhav Gupta (5/4/2014 9:34:00 AM)

    Read your Poem When Intimacy turns into Indifference, loved it congratulations for being selected in members poems.
    Regards

  • Rookie Paul Ganz (5/1/2014 6:27:00 AM)

    Dear Jasbir, Your subjects are universal and connect with most of us. well done. May I suggest, however, that you refrain from your use of cliché, or well-used phrases that may not have achieved the status of 'cliché.' Find the original 'Jasbir-expression' that is memorable. I'm sure you read lots of poetry, but read more. You will never find the worn, tired expressions in good poetry.

    Also, use poetry can be used as inspiration to think better of others (and the world if not to get too lofty here) . Your comment about someone fiddling with the poll numbers is disappointing.

  • Rookie Michelle Oliveira (2/16/2014 2:38:00 PM)

    Hi, my name is Michelle and when I was a teenager I used to write poems. But as I got older I stopped doing it. Now, when I try to write something I have nothing. Anyways, I was reading your poem a cloud of rain. It hit home with me. So, I wanted to say thank you for sharing your poems and I can't wait to read more.

Best Poem of Jasbir Chatterjee

When Intimacy Changes Into Indifference

Time just flows past
And you never notice
Till subtle changes come bubbling to the surface;
When intimacy turns into indifference.

Time just flows past
And you never notice
Till your close friends just drift away;
When intimacy turns into indifference.

Time just flows past
And you never notice
Till people who supported you in tough times just disappear;
When intimacy turns into indifference.

Time just flows past
And you never notice
Till one’s cross feels too heavy;
When intimacy turns into indifference.

Read the full of When Intimacy Changes Into Indifference

Autumn Of The Year 1988

When the harsh summer
Surrenders
To the charms of the gentle autumn,
Everything seems to be so beautiful…
The weather becomes so wonderful,
The soft breeze feels so good
The leaves
Rustle with a very soft tune,
The flowers

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