Jinal Oswal

Rookie - 34 Points (26/05/1989)

Comments about Jinal Oswal

  • Rookie - 315 Points Koena Mokoena (3/10/2012 2:51:00 AM)

    I believe it is true that sometimes the truth can harm me as a human being, hence i don't communicate with my siblings easily like a first born at home. Your correspondence will be highly appreciated.

    Have a nice day!

    Mr. Koena France Mokoena
    Country: South Africa
    Website: www.poemhunter.com/kfmproductions

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Kiyaga Lyttle Cephas (Kay) (1/23/2012 1:40:00 PM)

    Good poems,
    I liked them

  • Veteran Poet - 1,560 Points Unwritten Soul (10/14/2011 8:20:00 AM)

    Inking good poetry could be hard, make many give up, should be interesting who likes it, even it hard...If you have good time keep writing, the hands you have can craft a good poetry and i dont think it's hard for you..All the best Jinal Oswal_Unwritten Soul

Here I Am

Here I am, in the middle of a pool,
But don’t know whether to come out or go deep inside it…

Here I am, wanting to rise up and fly independently,
But don’t know how to fly….

Here I am, listening to the music,
Hoping and wishing it comfort’s me….

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