I think your poem are good. Looking forward to reading more from you. Just because your man don't mean you don't have feelings. it's great that you can express them here through your poems. Good luck in the army. Good luck where ever life may take you. Keep writing.
Heartbeat is dead
Tears in my eyes when will you realize that my heart belongs to you but theres nothing more I can do I stand here staring at the ground wondering if I will make a sound but even my heartbeat is dead nothing more needs to be said I held onto you