Treasure Island

katie

(1991 / Bury St Edmunds)

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  • Michelle Mcloughlin (10/17/2009 1:33:00 PM)

    no we must not forget when people should see a soldier they should thank them not hate them so yes i loved that poem cos ive had family fight and he 2 was just a boy when they sent him off to world war 2 and my fience is in airforce too

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  • Gold Flower (6/7/2007 3:23:00 PM)

    I think you are a great poet! You write fantastic stories! You might be famous someday!
    Keep writing!
    Lillianne (Lilly)

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tortured souls walk through this place
i look at face after face
and in each one i see a piece of me
their futures we try to foresee
and failiures we try to prevent
their time in hell not yet spent
so we hand them a rifle and uniform
they're sparkling boots not yet worn
as they stand proud on parade

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