Treasure Island

Keith Young

(July,10,1984 / Thousand Palms but live in San Diego now)

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  • Tomy Blob (3/31/2012 2:05:00 PM)

    Keith, I'm sorry for popping up like this out of nowhere. I was reading your poems here and your biography, both left deep impact on me. We live in two totally different worlds, continents to be exact. I don't even know why I'm writing this to you, probably because I wanted to let you know something that you already do know and heard it so many times. You are just great. I wrote only one poem in my life. Every time I start writing something I burst into tears, I don't even know why! ? Actually I do know why but I guess I don't want to admit it to myself. I was thinking if I could somehow, someway send you my poem for a review or opinion! ?

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Why

Why do we live a lie
Why do we live a sad life
No faith
No love
No one there
No hope for life
We all live one big lie
Why Why Why
Why live a life of lies
Why live a life of hate
Why care
Why love
We are all one in life with christ

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