Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 22,531 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Rookie - 171 Points Marco Antonio Solano (6/5/2015 6:46:00 PM)

    I've read a few of your poems selected at random, and I find them to be powerful, yet very well thought out. But over all, what impresess me the most, is your consistency and dedication. It is a pleasure reading your works. Greetings

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  • Rookie - 436 Points Elliott Rosenberg (5/15/2015 1:30:00 PM)

    Hi lawrence. Your words are moving. They take semantics to exponential contexture.. Your poem Baffled is just. Please feel free to shed light on my poem Baffled as well. Nowvwe are two pioneers baffling esoteric linguistics..
    With kindness elliott rosenberg

  • Rookie - 453 Points Ellias Anderson Jr. (11/22/2014 5:11:00 AM)

    Dear Lawrence
    your works are as fresh as a spring breeze...that will awake the humanity
    comme une lumière dans l'obscurité

  • Rookie Amir Mohammad Islami Chalandar (6/6/2014 7:12:00 AM)

    excellent poems. you are great in explaining your feels. i invite you to read my poem

  • Rookie - 281 Points Jack Growden (7/27/2013 4:45:00 AM)

    Excellent poetry Lawrence! Please take the time to read my collection, I am a young poet and keen to learn. Jack Growden

  • Gold Star - 5,740 Points Patricia Grantham (6/24/2013 10:37:00 PM)

    Lawrence is a very good Poet. He uses his words wisely
    and with distinction. I am very honored to be a part of
    of his poetry fellowship. In plain old fashioned words he
    does not Beat around the bush in his usage of the
    English language. Thanks to you honorable poet.

  • Rookie Rachel Dowd (12/4/2012 4:58:00 PM)

    He reminds me of my beloved Grandpa His name was Lawrence too

  • Freshman - 967 Points Justin Reamer (5/17/2012 12:39:00 PM)

    Lawrence is a great poet. He knows how to make his poetry flow with good rhythm and rime, while at the same time he knows how to depict his message through his tone of voice. He is probably one of the great modern poets of all time.

  • Silver Star - 4,076 Points Wahab Abdul (5/6/2012 10:35:00 AM)

    He is one of the greatest poems among the moderns, he is one of my favorites, he is innovative and leader of our time in the field of poetry.

  • Gold Star - 7,730 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (2/19/2012 5:29:00 AM)

    As Lawrence does not write like me, I like to read his poem. His poems do not have any attachment and it looks very strange to me. A Good poet.

Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

$10 A Gallon?

$10 a gallon?
For what?

'Does that really matter now?
When it approached
One dollar per gallon...
You should have voiced your concern then!
Not when your pockets have gotten thin.
And deepened to hold more lint!
You want to make cents?
Put these sunglasses on.
Grab a twig from a bush...
And get to begging!
You might gain some sympathy,
From someone who recognizes you are in disguise.
And they are in the mood,
To share with you their good attitude.
IF they have some of 'that' left! '

Read the full of $10 A Gallon?

Ghastly Ghoulish Rule

Why be dismayed,
By the eggs these chickens laid?
You were told that the rooster
Was a goosing hooting booster.
From the beginning it was said,
Everything he touched he poisoned dead!
And STILL you let him in your coop?
With all his stink and all his poot!
You should have given him long the boot!

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