Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 10,718 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Rookie - 34 Points Elliott Rosenberg (5/15/2015 1:30:00 PM)

    Hi lawrence. Your words are moving. They take semantics to exponential contexture.. Your poem Baffled is just. Please feel free to shed light on my poem Baffled as well. Nowvwe are two pioneers baffling esoteric linguistics..
    With kindness elliott rosenberg

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  • Rookie - 263 Points Ellias Anderson Jr. (11/22/2014 5:11:00 AM)

    Dear Lawrence
    your works are as fresh as a spring breeze...that will awake the humanity
    comme une lumière dans l'obscurité

  • Rookie Amir Mohammad Islami Chalandar (6/6/2014 7:12:00 AM)

    excellent poems. you are great in explaining your feels. i invite you to read my poem

  • Rookie - 278 Points Jack Growden (7/27/2013 4:45:00 AM)

    Excellent poetry Lawrence! Please take the time to read my collection, I am a young poet and keen to learn. Jack Growden

  • Silver Star - 4,095 Points Patricia Grantham (6/24/2013 10:37:00 PM)

    Lawrence is a very good Poet. He uses his words wisely
    and with distinction. I am very honored to be a part of
    of his poetry fellowship. In plain old fashioned words he
    does not Beat around the bush in his usage of the
    English language. Thanks to you honorable poet.

  • Rookie Rachel Dowd (12/4/2012 4:58:00 PM)

    He reminds me of my beloved Grandpa His name was Lawrence too

  • Rookie - 339 Points Justin Reamer (5/17/2012 12:39:00 PM)

    Lawrence is a great poet. He knows how to make his poetry flow with good rhythm and rime, while at the same time he knows how to depict his message through his tone of voice. He is probably one of the great modern poets of all time.

  • Silver Star - 3,753 Points Wahab Abdul (5/6/2012 10:35:00 AM)

    He is one of the greatest poems among the moderns, he is one of my favorites, he is innovative and leader of our time in the field of poetry.

  • Gold Star - 4,710 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (2/19/2012 5:29:00 AM)

    As Lawrence does not write like me, I like to read his poem. His poems do not have any attachment and it looks very strange to me. A Good poet.

  • Rookie - 461 Points Ace Of Black Hearts (1/25/2012 12:49:00 AM)

    An amazing poet with both remarkable and at times baffling skill and talent. I would have to say he is one of the best modern day poets out their.

Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

Choosing To Walk On The Right Path

Choosing to walk on the right path,
Is going to have its obstacles.
Temptations will be there to tease,
With attempts to weaken.
And faces familiar...
Will appear to critique.

Choosing to walk on the right path,
Isn't an easy decision one makes.
It takes one to break away,
From barriers attached...
That are difficult to unlatch.
Yet...
Can be done to escape those traps.

Choosing to walk on the right path,
Is going to have its obstacles.
And some days will seem impossible.
But that path chosen,
By the one who knows it is ...

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You Are No Longer There!

I no longer hold you like I held you
When I held you...
I no longer want to...in my mind.
I no longer see you like I see you
When I saw you...
I no longer do that, with my time!

Lemonade kisses I licked we onced shared,
I don't even want them anymore...I'm full!

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