Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 9,776 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

Comments about Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Rookie - 249 Points Ellias Anderson Jr. (11/22/2014 5:11:00 AM)

    Dear Lawrence
    your works are as fresh as a spring breeze...that will awake the humanity
    comme une lumière dans l'obscurité

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  • Rookie Amir Mohammad Islami Chalandar (6/6/2014 7:12:00 AM)

    excellent poems. you are great in explaining your feels. i invite you to read my poem

  • Rookie - 278 Points Jack Growden (7/27/2013 4:45:00 AM)

    Excellent poetry Lawrence! Please take the time to read my collection, I am a young poet and keen to learn. Jack Growden

  • Silver Star - 3,973 Points Patricia Grantham (6/24/2013 10:37:00 PM)

    Lawrence is a very good Poet. He uses his words wisely
    and with distinction. I am very honored to be a part of
    of his poetry fellowship. In plain old fashioned words he
    does not Beat around the bush in his usage of the
    English language. Thanks to you honorable poet.

  • Rookie Rachel Dowd (12/4/2012 4:58:00 PM)

    He reminds me of my beloved Grandpa His name was Lawrence too

  • Rookie - 339 Points Justin Reamer (5/17/2012 12:39:00 PM)

    Lawrence is a great poet. He knows how to make his poetry flow with good rhythm and rime, while at the same time he knows how to depict his message through his tone of voice. He is probably one of the great modern poets of all time.

  • Silver Star - 3,663 Points Wahab Abdul (5/6/2012 10:35:00 AM)

    He is one of the greatest poems among the moderns, he is one of my favorites, he is innovative and leader of our time in the field of poetry.

  • Silver Star - 4,457 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (2/19/2012 5:29:00 AM)

    As Lawrence does not write like me, I like to read his poem. His poems do not have any attachment and it looks very strange to me. A Good poet.

  • Rookie - 431 Points Ace Of Black Hearts (1/25/2012 12:49:00 AM)

    An amazing poet with both remarkable and at times baffling skill and talent. I would have to say he is one of the best modern day poets out their.

  • Rookie Hamish Morcom (1/5/2012 11:38:00 AM)

    You remind me of a young Allen Ginsberg

Best Poem of Lawrence S. Pertillar

$10 A Gallon?

$10 a gallon?
For what?

'Does that really matter now?
When it approached
One dollar per gallon...
You should have voiced your concern then!
Not when your pockets have gotten thin.
And deepened to hold more lint!
You want to make cents?
Put these sunglasses on.
Grab a twig from a bush...
And get to begging!
MAYBE...
You might gain some sympathy,
From someone who recognizes you are in disguise.
And they are in the mood,
To share with you their good attitude.
IF they have some of 'that' left! '

Read the full of $10 A Gallon?

'We The People'

We teach ignorance.
With a feeding it to feast upon.
We disrespect others to neglect them,
As human beings with emotions to feel.
To deceive, defame and character assassinate,
Amongst those who are entertained...
By a disgrace we can not eliminate 'or' erase.
To then perceive our children do not mimic us.
Or mock our actions in the same way.

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