Leila Kay

Rookie (UK)

Comments about Leila Kay

  • Veteran Poet - 1,336 Points Jerry Hughes (5/6/2007 6:14:00 PM)

    Young lady, you understand and write about human suffering very well. You're also very bright and perceptive - so don't let the past, however awful, smother you now. Hugs 'n' all, Jerry

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  • Rookie Andrew mark Wilkinson (5/6/2007 2:55:00 PM)

    Leila no matter what you say, you are so good and it flows from your heart with so much feeling, it makes you think and it makes you feel your writing is number one with me... Andy xxxx

  • Rookie Cecelia Warner (4/24/2007 9:12:00 PM)

    I am new to PoemHunter but I have one thing to say...AWESOME poem! ! !

So Tonight...

Place your hand in mine feel the pleasure no more the pain
Rest your weary head upon my breast and feel no more the anguish
Let me caress your pained and heavy heart with whispers of unspoken words
Caste aside the anger that once festered on betrayal let not our broken hearts taunt
So tonight...
Place your hand in mine and feel the pleasure no more the pain
Tread with me tenderly
Make it the begining of a beautiful relationship
A pure and unfailing devotion between two

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