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Looking Up. (July 15,1999 / Barinas)
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Hello readers,
It has been a pleasure for me to present my poems and I must say that this is the end of Looking Up. In four months I have made many friends and gotten so many great experiences that I can't express the regret I have for reading 'legit' criticisms regarding to the way I write my poems. This is the last you will hear of me as Looking Up, and it's my hope this farewell ... more »
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About Looking Up! ! !
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Tales thought by skies-written in rain, papered clouds-stories of pain,
Prophecies and myths never told, could night be light and skies fold.
Could shadows be slaves and stars pain, could stone cry and break rain,
These broken shadows once known, onto future present to be shown.
When i read these lines i could not believe my senses as a reader then a thought hit my mind... yes it's upon God...He can make fertile minds and brillint wit...what is it that He can't do...after reading 3-4 poems, i thought to write here about LU, and i can say with confidence that we all can look up to much good work from you as a great poet in a tender age with precocious mind...Best! ! !
Lu, that first comment about you was from when I had only just set my curious eyes upon you and your work. And I can say that you have progressed faster than I have in these past couple of months! You are truly astonishing.
And I can also say that it has been a pleasure to stand before you and watch you grow into an amazing poet. Keep writing! I'm sure you'll achieve many greater things in the future.