hey my name is Darren Westbrook and i just want to say your poem is out standing no matter
what keep god first and keep your head up and never give up. You look smart and you look beautful you write realy well if you dont mind can you check out mind.
a blessing is comeing your way.
...who shall we say love me
who can we show the bleeding tears
beautiful earth - mother
no one can be greater then her
then who shall we cry for-grieve for
if noone care you
if we are surrounded by godliness
why we not celebrate lonliness
if noone loves you
see everywhere everyone adores you
so hail high
sweet survival...
your tell me mother is touching but never lose your heart if you can seen God my dear luwi...
with love always from
lovita J R Morang
For all seeds need water to grow
When watered right
They grow into a brillant plant...
Keep growing Luwi
We are sure you'll
blossom into that brillant plant....
hey my name is Darren Westbrook and i just want to say your poem is out standing no matter
what keep god first and keep your head up and never give up. You look smart and you look beautful you write realy well if you dont mind can you check out mind.
a blessing is comeing your way.
...who shall we say love me
who can we show the bleeding tears
beautiful earth - mother
no one can be greater then her
then who shall we cry for-grieve for
if noone care you
if we are surrounded by godliness
why we not celebrate lonliness
if noone loves you
see everywhere everyone adores you
so hail high
sweet survival...
your tell me mother is touching but never lose your heart if you can seen God my dear luwi...
with love always from
lovita J R Morang
i love your poetry. its really down to earth. it gives me a sence of euphoria i guess you could say.
your poems are amazing and devastating.