Mahfooz Ali

Rookie - 21 Points (28 October / Lucknow (U.P.) India)

Comments about Mahfooz Ali

  • Rookie Seham M (7/12/2010 12:23:00 AM)

    I just found this site, and have to say that after reading a bunch of poems from others and yourself, you have a real interesting state of mind. Your thoughts are unique and the way you describe and portray your thoughts is very thoughtful and well put. I also write poems and short stories. They usually come from feelings that are sometimes hard to depict to others in word of speech. But when I write them down it makes me understand my feelings and frame of mind better. I read the peom about your mother, I thought it was lovely. And Inshallah She knew and continues to know how much you love her. Keep up your good work, so we can continue enjoying your beautiful works of literature. Take care, Ma'salama

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  • Rookie acharya gopinath (3/11/2009 10:47:00 AM)

    You are writing immensely and have deep rooted affections. Let a Xanthic Flower give fragrance in your life. I am proud of reading your poems but it is too late. Allah never let down any one nor put you to suffer. Always hopes bring light.

  • Rookie Maryam Khan (1/7/2009 3:45:00 AM)

    an amazing poet with deep thoughts.
    i like his creativity n almost all of his poems are reaalt cute n interesting.
    Keep up your good work!
    Maryam

  • Rookie Amani B (4/5/2008 7:40:00 AM)

    a brilliant poet with lovely ideas
    very impressive

  • Rookie Mikoto (6/13/2006 4:36:00 AM)

    Thank you for comment.
    I like your poems.
    Keep it up.
    Thank you.

    Mikoto

Thank You, Father

Fathers hold you when you have bad dreams
And they comfort you when all is lost it seems.
Fathers teach you to dribble a basketball and shoot a free throw
And they lead you as you grow.
Fathers teach you how to drive a car
And they try to teach you how to putt for par.
Fathers wipe the tears of your broken heart
And they hold your hand when you don't know how to start.
Fathers quiz the boys who take you on a date

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