Manonton Dalan

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  • Ena N. Mori (2/27/2016 5:02:00 PM)

    What I read is a journal of a simple man who draws on the rhythms of daily living. Your written communication is naturally honest and poetic. It gives us a glimpse of the event and the emotion is re-created. Keep at it, G.

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  • Cosheila Bihag Cosheila Bihag (1/22/2012 4:36:00 PM)

    i like your poem, is it ok that will add this as my poemlist?

  • p.a. noushad p.a. noushad (11/10/2008 2:02:00 AM)

    your poems inspire me much

  • Esther Fernandez (9/5/2008 2:08:00 AM)

    Hi Manong MD,
    You are a very versatile writer and you have been my inspiration to write in our dialect since I started reading your works in Pangasinan Online. Mas lalo akong naiintriga sayo. I wish I could meet you in person and see who is behind the keys (pen) . When I read your poems, they always make my day. Responding to your poems is even honing my knowledge and ability to speak our dialect.
    Thanks for the inspiration.

    From your avid fan.

I Feel It

gentle moving cumulus
painted bundled roses
white tint of smokes
cloudy; mud in brooks

hugging mountaintops
bare-naked shiny rocks
moist dripping down cliff
to ferns; grandpas on earth

water flows down river
shallow yet it sparkles
like your smile in morning mist
i could feel it, i could even taste

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