Mark R Slaughter


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  • Dan Reynolds (6/9/2014 4:25:00 PM)

    Re Heaven.

    Bloody love it Mark. The repetition is well-thought out, the lyricism is truly poetic. But I feel as if you've been watching me in my garden.; ¬) Next time, I'll go cross ways instead of parallel.

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  • Amir Mohammad Islami Chalandar (6/6/2014 6:59:00 AM)

    excellent poems. you are great in explaining your feels

  • Richard Beevor (5/24/2014 10:13:00 AM)

    excellent poems sir, I wonder if you could read some of mine and give me your advice please, I would like to improve, thank you, I am http: //www.poemhunter.com/richard-allen-beevor/

  • Love Poet (5/10/2014 2:05:00 PM)

    that was awesome how you manage to describe everything with simple and yet beautiful word that explain and show an imagery of passion

  • Kevin Quero (3/9/2014 4:48:00 AM)

    Cool, you inspire me.

  • Daniel Y. (2/5/2014 6:59:00 PM)

    I see you are a biologist. Makes total sense. I recently graduated with a BS in bio. Ever read a collection of science poems Radial Symmetry? You should publish your poetry. You have a really great style.

  • Cece Rodriguez (11/29/2013 4:42:00 AM)

    death smiles and so do you wow... power full its like getting involed with the bad when your innocent

  • Shameca Biggs (10/16/2013 10:44:00 AM)

    This was my favorite line shown below. You've mastered your words into a beautiful art form. I enjoyed this read. Thank you.

    Do you know your face portrays
    The colours of your soul?
    It tells me at a single glance
    Of how you burned your furnace whole
    To stay the fire in our romance.

  • Barbara Clafton (8/27/2013 6:44:00 PM)

    A tomcat tree- heart warming and beautifully inspiring. I wish I was as talented as you x

  • Barbara Clafton (8/27/2013 6:38:00 PM)

    A Dying brain- very poignant x excellent stuff x

The Chess Game

To see that regal chessboard stand -
Prominent, eminent, historically grand;
Refined in polished real-wood veneer,
Exuding class for all to revere.

But of a moment, the board stood incomplete -
No fighting ranks prepared to meet.
No chessmen stood, enticing war,
To challenge and strategise, for points to score.

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