Mckenzi Lew

Mckenzi Lew Poems

at one time you said you loved me, but it was just a lie
are you just gonna forget me? forever say goodbye?
i say it doesn't matter, that it doesn't bother me at all
but really its kills me when you never call
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so, yeah you say you love me but how do i know its real?
because you've said it to other girls but you forgot to 'seal the deal'
am i gonna be the next one to go or am i gonna stay a while?
do you even mean it when you say, 'baby, i love you and you make me smile? '
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5.

I am outgoing and talkative.
I wonder why people can be so cruel.
I hear the wind blowing.
I see the sun smiling.
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beautiful people are supposed to get far in life
they dont have any pain, hate or strife
their days go perfect
at least that's what people think
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I awoke this morning blinded by the white
bare trees, plows and 10 inches of snow was all that was in my sight
the wind blew, now watch the feathery snow go
people shoveling and cars driving slow
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here in your arms, falling too fast
trying to ponder how long this puppy love will last
will it be a week or month or two
what is it i am supposed to do?
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i want you to know how i feel but its just so hard to express
but i sure know one thing, i love you more than i 'loved' all the rest
i really thought i loved them, but that was just a lie
because i simply forgot about them and forever said goodbye
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life is rough
life is tough
life has strife
life is life
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Mckenzi Lew Biography

i'm mckenzi. i enjoy writing poetry because it helps me express who i am. please read and comment, constructive criticism welcome: ])

The Best Poem Of Mckenzi Lew

Trying To Forget

at one time you said you loved me, but it was just a lie
are you just gonna forget me? forever say goodbye?
i say it doesn't matter, that it doesn't bother me at all
but really its kills me when you never call
i gave you my trust, my heart and my soul
but since you went and did this i think you should know
i take it all back, i'll tell them you didnt mean a thing
so maybe i can forget, forget about the pain.

Mckenzi Lew Comments

Tracker Ogryphon 21 February 2008

An internal plea for self reliance. I gave it a 10 simply because of the emotions involved. A Good write.

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you are a good poet. i love your poems

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