Treasure Island

Mckenzi Lew

(11.4.93 / i wanna be in the bahamas)

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  • Tracker Ogryphon (2/21/2008 3:40:00 PM)

    An internal plea for self reliance. I gave it a 10 simply because of the emotions involved. A Good write.

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  • I LOVE MY S.O.S! ! ! ALWAYS & 4 EVER..! ! .. (2/12/2008 8:58:00 AM)

    you are a good poet. i love your poems

Trying To Forget

at one time you said you loved me, but it was just a lie
are you just gonna forget me? forever say goodbye?
i say it doesn't matter, that it doesn't bother me at all
but really its kills me when you never call
i gave you my trust, my heart and my soul
but since you went and did this i think you should know
i take it all back, i'll tell them you didnt mean a thing
so maybe i can forget, forget about the pain.

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