Treasure Island

Mckenzi Lew

(11.4.93 / i wanna be in the bahamas)

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  • Tracker Ogryphon (2/21/2008 3:40:00 PM)

    An internal plea for self reliance. I gave it a 10 simply because of the emotions involved. A Good write.

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  • I LOVE MY S.O.S! ! ! ALWAYS & 4 EVER..! ! .. (2/12/2008 8:58:00 AM)

    you are a good poet. i love your poems

Just One More?

so, yeah you say you love me but how do i know its real?
because you've said it to other girls but you forgot to 'seal the deal'
am i gonna be the next one to go or am i gonna stay a while?
do you even mean it when you say, 'baby, i love you and you make me smile? '
a lot of questions, i know. but i need an answer soon
i dont wanna sit around all day to wait on you.
so decide real quick, before i hit the door -
do you really love me?
or am i just one more?

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