Wow! This is a really good poem. I like the way you do your rhymes on every other line. God bless the lovely lady that is the recipient of such a lovely poem
Good poem. I like the way it is written from the point of view of one who is experiencing the tricks that the mind and eye plays on oneself when sleep is nonexistent. Good to go!
Beautiful! Absolutely beautiful. I pray that you write her beautiful poems like this for the rest of your lives. I pray that she inspires you to write eternally.