What is described in your poem is reality. However, what I like about it is the title: it doesn't point to the problem, but gives a suggestion that will no doubt will to the desired solution. i encourage you to set the trend and be the change you want to see.
(5/10/2009 12:21:00 AM)
For a second? I felt it long after I finished reading. The last lines bring out a similar idea as expressed in Martin Carter's poem '...the mouth is muzzled by the food it eats to live' and Lear's exclamation in Shakespesre's 'King Lear', 'Is it not as this mouth should tear this hand for lifting food to't? '
(5/10/2009 12:02:00 AM)
Attractive title-summarises the pom and the story behind it.This shared experience will probably save me some bald spots in the future (I won't have to pull my hair like your friend) .