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  • Dave Tanwar (7/22/2009 2:42:00 AM) Post reply

    If I'll die today drinking this precious wine
    I'll regret only why i never had enough wine
    Of all the mortal pleasure that i could choose
    Elvis Presley's blues or liquor's booze
    reasons i have none why liquor i should deprive
    after it's consumption even necrosis are revive
    so worry not my lady & fill up another glass or two
    drink this nectar & let not ecstasy flew
    when booze filled glass beckoned delight
    in every sip of carouse when enthrall incite
    embrace creed of wyne & cease your reservations
    give wings to your desires & devour this sensation
    we all have to sleep in the grave in the end
    but serve me first with wine & scotch whiskey blend
    this is something that not even angels despise
    and yet being human to deny this wouldn't be wise
    For we die tomorrow let we live today
    Cheers the glass & let night appears like day...

    Dave Tanwar

  • Dave Tanwar (7/19/2009 3:50:00 PM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    when you are praised you are motivated to write something better. whereas if you just criticise but can't tell the person where to improve then your words are worthless.

  • Dave Tanwar (7/19/2009 3:54:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    i added one new poem today 'The Carouse'... would like some comments :)

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