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Aldrich Suarez Laoag City / Philippines, Male, 19
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  • POEM: I Am That I Am by Austin Daray (2/18/2014 10:40:00 PM)

    we cannot run away from our own shadows, . though we can feign or we can hide, who will be deceived? us...we are always the same who we are yesterday, ..we are who we are, ..and we need to accept that fact, . and face it, .. good poem, .. I'll give 10..

  • POEM: I See A Man That Others Might Not See by Kimberly Pulver (2/18/2014 10:35:00 PM)

    I'll give 10.. :) .......................................................

  • POEM: I See A Man That Others Might Not See by Kimberly Pulver (2/18/2014 10:34:00 PM)

    I like it, are good parent to your son! it is how you observe his growth, .how he became matured, ..I remember something all that were made were done with purposes and I think that he has his best foundation, , he exhausted from being like that, .so he became like this, . from bad to good, ..nice poem, .I love it, . a story of a proud mum...

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  • Aldrich Suarez (2/21/2013 3:43:00 AM) Post reply | Read 1 reply

    pls vote on my poem

  • Aldrich Suarez (2/21/2013 3:42:00 AM) Post reply | Read 2 replies


    Once upon a time, when men are not yet civilized
    there live two young men named Barry and Joey
    While wondering the beauty of earth, they criticize.
    So then the two begin their journey.
    With uncertain idea on how they will change the earth
    Or when, where and how they start
    Their small minds are now enough.
    Barry said he will use his hand to merge all separate Islands
    Joey with brave said he will sniff the wind so that they will have control
    But suddenly the two argue, who will change the water's hue?
    And an unbroken silence made until evening
    Afterwards when Barry got bored he decide to rest at the wild of wondering
    Joey then agrees that they need to meditate under a tall tree.
    At the middle of the night Joey fall asleep
    And at his dream he is in front of a talking sheep
    Joey, Joey, Joey the sheep said
    I'm the answer of all the questions you had
    Then as the sheep said, Joey ask how to change the earth
    The sheep scratch his head and act like sleepy
    And he hear a sound " Wake up Joey"
    Then cut his dreams and wake.
    When Joey is in his consciousness
    The two become happy and amaze
    " A falling pieces of water" shouting
    When at that moment a voice up above roar
    They stop and kneel, trembling of fear
    And then a fast, razor and terrible light strike a piece of wood.
    After striking the wood, it becomes shiny, that can create a light
    Barry becomes greedy and grabs the wood very tight
    Then he realize that he hurts so he throw it in a grassy surface of land
    While Joey begging the earth to strike him also
    Later a savor of tasty object passes on their nose
    And they see the grass are burning, so they come close
    They taste the grass and they satisfy
    And they called the light a " Fire"
    When the fire fades
    The two becomes sad
    So they go back home, and conclude it's hard to change the earth or inverse
    The two leave a promise on one other, that tomorrow morning they will meet and try to change the universe………
    aldrich suarez

  • Aldrich Suarez (1/27/2013 9:32:00 PM) Post reply

    hello to all,
    It is with great humility and hesitancy to be a Poet....I am 18 years old from Philippines and I love Gothic, Horror, and Humorous poems....thank you..
    PS please add me as a friend

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