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  • POEM: Seagulls over Rome... by Zhulduz Baizakova (9/11/2013 12:37:00 PM)

    I really like the allusions to art and history and the simple phrasing at the end. Wonderful imagery in the last paragraph. Reminds me of the last section of T.S. Eliot's The Waste Land. Great job!

  • POEM: Things Of Beauty by Khairul Ahsan (8/29/2013 12:52:00 PM)

    Excellent poem with a very memorable opener. I love the verbs you use. Great job describing passion while still maintaining an innocent tone!

  • POEM: Broken Mirror by Heather Burns (8/28/2013 9:52:00 AM)

    I like your line breaks and dropped lines. The broken phrases really echo and portray the theme in a very effective way. Well done!

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