I really like the allusions to art and history and the simple phrasing at the end. Wonderful imagery in the last paragraph. Reminds me of the last section of T.S. Eliot's The Waste Land. Great job!
Excellent poem with a very memorable opener. I love the verbs you use. Great job describing passion while still maintaining an innocent tone!
I like your line breaks and dropped lines. The broken phrases really echo and portray the theme in a very effective way. Well done!