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(12/22/2014 6:45:00 AM)
It is a good advice to write poetry in free form to express the feeling exactlyas what I feel. But one thing pricks me here, that if I really do write a poetry without any rhyme or rhythm in it then it will be an article or a message only! ! Will it be called a poetry at all??I have every doubt.
(12/22/2014 6:32:00 AM)
Hello - respected poets
I'd draw your kind attention, saying I have posted a poem " An appeal " in PH. Kindly read it and give your valued comments and at the same time I would say -
please raise your voice or your objection against any issue which is a concern to humanity today. Our world is deteriorating very fast, now a days.Hence, raise your objection towards the same in any form and give your comments with any advice in my poem so that I may also organise to raise my voice in my capacity.
Thank you respected poets hoping your attention in this regard.
Keep well and enjoy the festive time.
(9/5/2014 10:16:00 AM)
An angel in the night.
In the misty moon -lit night an angel did alight
Peeped me through the window-
With my beloved holding tight.
She was smiling at me with a gleam in her face
Having a glowing ring all around her head.
I jumped up with a maddening joy -
And told her to come near me.
But with a majestic smile in her face
She was nodding her head, didn't move.
I asked her - 'then why my dear..... again to make me cry '!
She told me 'Oh' dear I also do cry and ought to be with thine
But the body what I left, can never get back again.
The angel brought me tonight to see you and say hello-
I was always yours and still I am thine'.
With a pool of tears in my eyes I waved my hands out,
The angel with a lovely smile started to fly -
Clasping you under her wings, saying good bye.
I sprang up in my bed, rubbing my tearing eyes
Still in a hallucination thinking where was I?
In the morning's soothing light - I looked up in the sky
I shouted with a cry 'Hey-I will come very soon -you wait for mine'
A white cloud was passing by -
Slowly away from my sight………
Amitava (20.01.2014) on my birth day today.
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