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(1/28/2014 8:32:00 AM)
I like the quiet places, the silent places -
places inside my head.
Places where I can run and hide
in the moments when I feel afraid.
I like the places that welcome me
and let me run, or hide and play.
I like the quiet moments
where life seems far less grey.
I like it when I'm free to be
the one who chooses what to say -
the one who sits in silence
and hides herself away.
I like the quiet places where
in silence I may think at will,
and sometimes in these silences
I like to be quite still.
I like my quiet places and
the moments these may bring,
for in my quiet moments
I feel free to laugh, and play and sing.
(1/28/2014 8:30:00 AM)
Thank you Cleveland. I can do a line by line revision, but it would be a different poem, because I originally wrote this poem in Arabic and have translated it from the original language. However, you have given me something to think about, and I seriously will take your advice - a re-write would make a different poem, and it might be worth the work to enter into it.
Thank you - I really appreciate your comments. I hope you feel free to comment on any other poems I have written and posted. I certainly will enjoy hearing your comments.
(1/14/2014 4:12:00 AM)
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