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Melek Yuzlu Morley / United Kingdom, Female, 40
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  • Melek Yuzlu (1/28/2014 8:32:00 AM) Post reply

    I like the quiet places, the silent places -
    places inside my head.
    Places where I can run and hide
    in the moments when I feel afraid.

    I like the places that welcome me
    and let me run, or hide and play.
    I like the quiet moments
    where life seems far less grey.

    I like it when I'm free to be
    the one who chooses what to say -
    the one who sits in silence
    and hides herself away.

    I like the quiet places where
    in silence I may think at will,
    and sometimes in these silences
    I like to be quite still.

    I like my quiet places and
    the moments these may bring,
    for in my quiet moments
    I feel free to laugh, and play and sing.


    Melek yüzlü

  • Melek Yuzlu (1/28/2014 8:30:00 AM) Post reply

    Thank you Cleveland. I can do a line by line revision, but it would be a different poem, because I originally wrote this poem in Arabic and have translated it from the original language. However, you have given me something to think about, and I seriously will take your advice - a re-write would make a different poem, and it might be worth the work to enter into it.
    Thank you - I really appreciate your comments. I hope you feel free to comment on any other poems I have written and posted. I certainly will enjoy hearing your comments.
    Regards,

  • Melek Yuzlu (1/14/2014 4:12:00 AM) Post reply

    At the top of the page you will see an orange button - POST A MESSAGE. Click on this link and add your poem to it. Your poem will then be added.
    Best wishes, and good luck.

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