Nick Kasparie

Rookie - 22 Points [T. F. B.] (3-30-94 / Quincy, IL.)

Comments about Nick Kasparie

  • Rookie S. A. S. (7/9/2013 4:37:00 PM)

    I read about a half dozen poems and found they moved easily, the rhymes did not seem forced. However, the content seems reined in by the rhyme. I wonder if you've ever tried to follow the rhythm of the language, and not the rhyme...perhaps to see if the content takes you further?

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Coffee

Java Jive inside the hive within my head
Spinning thoughts of apriocots
And other fruit that I've been fed
Buzzing bees among the trees,
Nervous branches, making me
Just a bit
Ridiculous

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